Ariya ff Butterfly in the time update on pg 41 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice start
Interesting update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
sounds interesting
update soon
do pm me whenever you update
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Posted: 6 years ago
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WWWHHHAAATTT????
OMG very interesting story.. ..
Loved it ...
Looking forward for this story...
Cont soon
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Edited by nicronyariya - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Sorry sorry sorry
My health didn't permit to get kn to the work but i promise aaj raat pucca update hai
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guys wish u a very happy pongal (incase u celebrate) and belated happy lohri... And here is the festive update for u here

Part - 1: The fairy'someone

...1...
The bride was all drenched in blood. Her transparent pallu was full of blood.. She is in half senses she took the wedding card and kept near her heart

Riya : sorry sameer i love u mein bahuth baar yeh bol chuka hun Lekin ab bol raha hun i really love u and u don't deserve me. Ek Ladki ke dil mein bas ek hi hona hai. Agar mein tumhe shaadi kiya toh yeh pyaar baatna padega.


Riyas grandma who came in search of riya came there and shouted seeing riya in semi conscious state. RIYA'S parents came there running and her father lifted her in his arms and starts running downstairs.


Father : beta utto... Leave ur eyes open... Dekho beta dekho.. Jo hua mere


Riya : papa aaap fikar math kijiye mein sab problems se dur jaa rahi hun


Father : shhh beta aise math kaho... Dont close ur lids...


Riya was slowly going unconscious...


Ambulance


Way to hospital


Riya m.v: (to readers) kya dekh rahe hun aap sab yeh sab kya horaha hai yahi hai na... Har story ka ek start ek mod aur ek ending... Out of threee no one are in our hands but ek dusre se connected hai... Jaise mere story mein hua... Ohh shit! Sabko pata nahi na mere yeh tragedy jaise dikhne wale story kya hai... Wait mein batathi hun... Lekin pehle memsahib ki introduction karna hai.. Wo memsahib mein hi hun... Myself RIYA.. Riya Mukherjee... Mere parents ki iklauti beti... Mere story ke heroine mein hun aur villain bhi mein hi hun. Patha chalna hai toh yaha mane aaj se 12 saal ke pehle jaana hai means i was around 14 that time
Tada


FLASHBACK


14 YEAR'S AGO


VARANASI


One girl is flying kites with her father on her terrace and the kite suddenly goes off her hands and lands on a boy who is going through that lane. That girl rushes down to get the kite. The boy has it in his hands..


Girl: wo mera hai... Give it


Boy : i don't have a proof...


Girl : promise...Why?
should I lie..


Boy: I don't like teasing girls.. Lelo tumhari kite


Girl : so sweet of u...i am riya... What is ur name


Boy : arjun... What are u studying now


Girl : 9th standard mein ooty ke boarding schl se hun


Boy : patha hai... Har saal aathi hun na


Girl : ha lekin tumhe kaise
Boy : woh mere special talent hai


But RIYA'S father calls her there. So she runs bidding bye to that boy.


Arjun : hey shreee ab aao... Wo gaya yahase


Shree comes out from his hiding.. He is the one who cuts the kite


TWO YEARS LATER


Riya is back to banaras. She was thinking to study her eleventh standard here bcz she is very attached to her mama than her mumma. She convinced everyone and started to study her eleventh standard there. Her mamu joined her in a convent there in varanasi. Days passed on so and it's six months since riya is here... Her grandfather was a well known figure in total varanasi.


One day riya and her friend roshini are on their way to buy choodi for the fest in which they both are dancing. Riya completed her shopping


Riya : Roshni chalo na


Roshini :wait... Only some time


Riya : mujhe bhook lag raha hai


Roshni : bus aayi


Far from their vision we see two boys gazing at them


Boy 1: riya kitna cute hai na aaj


Boy 2: tujhe uske alawa kuch bhi nahi dekh sakthe hai


Boy 1: wo mere riya hai...


Boy 2 : grow up arjun.. U are back of her since 2 yrs.. Woh kabhi tumhe dekha nahi aur notice bhi nahi kiya


Arjun : dekho shree wo mera hai bus mera


Shree : pagalpan hai yeh


Riya and rosh move towards a small size hotel and they both sit talking about their stuff


Arjun and shree sit back to them. Waiter comes to riya and rosh


Riya : bhaisab mujhe ek red velvet pastry aur ek samosa Lao


Rosh : mujhe samosa aur mango juice


Waiter moves towards arjuns table


Waiter : kya chahiye sir tumhe


Arjun (from dreamland) : riya chahiye mujhe leke aao


Shree bangss his head and signals waiter to bring some water. Arjun starts to look at riya lovingly. Shree sighs


Shree : dekho u followed her and reached here thats ok but see we can't afford anything here so before the waiter comes lets move from here.


Arjun : tu dosth hai yah dushman.


NEXT DAY


RIYA'S
COLLEGEPREMISES


Riya is playing basketball with her friends and arjun watching her from far away distance outside the gate of school.


Watchman came running to chase them.


Sakshi : haha dekho wo tumhe notice bhi nahi kiya juno


Arjun : aaj nahi toh kal...

But dekho wo mera hai mark my words wo mera hi hai


Sakshi : (side hug) aur tum mera hero...


Shree : tum dono dekho hamare school jane ke time horaha hai


Arjun : ha chalo. Tu dosth nahi dushman hai mera main yeh fix hogaya


Shree: if u want to stay here. U be here, but listen i am going.


Arjun : wait, i am also coming


They moved towards their school


(taking thr backgrounds arjun was from a typical middle class family where his father works for an government official who is none other than riyas uncle)


KATHAK DANCE CLASS


4.00 pm


Arjun, sakshi and shree three of them stand at the terrace of their friends house to peep into the dance school...


Shree : aaj nahi baath kiya toh mein uske paas jake keh dunga


Arjun : ha mein jaunga aaj lekin what should i talk with her


Sakshi : then Better leave her..


Shree : sakshi tun chup raho... Bolo arjun yeh dur se dekhna kab katam hogi... Jab unko shaadi hogi tab bhi tum aise hi dekhthi raho


Sakshi : ha arjun...
Hamare bhi ek fest hai usme naachne ke liye mujhe practice karna hoga... Mujhe us baath par dar lag raha hai aur tum ho ki aise time waste kar raha hai


Arjun : wait what did you say?...dance...means i will go to her and talk to her right now but sakshi u have to help me


Sakshi : ek condition hai...
Arjun : choclate chahiye, red velvet cake ya salmaan bhai ka film pehla show ka ticket, bolo


Sakshi : mein tumhe help karungi, agar wo teere jaal mein nahi phasaya toh tumhe mujhe pyaar karna padega


Shree : yeh kya pagalpan hai


Arjun : deal ok...


Shree : are u out of senses


Arjun: yeh word uss se kehna behtar hai... Dekho sakshi agar riya mujhe pyaar nahi kiya phir bhi main aise hi use dekhtha rehunga jeeyunga... But if u come in between this it is ur life that is going to be spoiled


Sakshi : mujhe uss se problem nahi... Lekin suno mein mera wish pura karne ke liye tujhe koi hurdles nahi create karunga because u see may be i am mad of u u but i will never cheat u... Samjhe ya samjhau


Arjun (smiles) : pagal saying this he hugs sakshi who is sobbing. They three determinedly started to walk towards the dance school


6.00pm


Riya comes out along with roshini from the school.. She is in her dance attire ( kurti, ghungroo etc). Arjun was smiling seeing her like a mad boy. Shree slapped on arjun 's face which brought him back to senses.


Arjun : excuse me


Roshini : ha kya chahiye


Arjun : aap iss dance class ke members hai na?


Roshini : no ham bas aisa dresses pehnkar ghumne wala hai


Riya bursted into laughter.. She is laughing holding her stomach... Shree and arjun starecs each other strangely


Arjun : aisa nahi hai ji lekin hame ek help chahiye..


Roshini sighed what


Arjun : yeh hamare dosth hai... Sakshi... Isko thodasa basics teach karna hai... Please our fest date is so soon and this dumbo ne saara time waste kiya... Aur ab ro raha hai...


As arjun said sakshi started to sniff in front of them


Roshini :dekho hamse nah ho payega tum kisi aur ko dundlo


Arjun : agar aap se nahi hothi toh tumhare dosth...


Roshini : kya woh aur tumhe dance seekhna yeh kabhi nahi hoga agar uske uncle ko pata hogaya toh woh use vaapas ooty bejh dega.


Saying this roshini and riya leaves the place..


Shree : kitna hot headed hai woh dekho... She didn't even look at us even once


Arjun : did u ever see a queen bending her head or looking some poor creatures like us ... Woh toh pari koi kam nahi


Shree : yeh pagal hogaya...


Saying this three move towards their respective houses

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Edited by Shriyareddy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Awesome updated...
But kuch jada he confused ..
Ri sam se pyar karti hay kya ??
Or arj ne sak se esa shart kyu lagaye ..

Plzz jaldi updated dena..
Waiting for next ..
Thanks for pm dear .
Updated soon .
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Amez awesome update
Loveit
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Superb update
Bt confusion bhi h
Thanks for pm
Eagerly waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
ye kya hai riya ki shadi sam se honivali thi but..
riya said she loves sam then why she tried to do suicide
mai tho confuse hogayi

arjun bachpan se riya ko pyar kar raha hai aur use patane ki koshish bhi kar raha hai hahaha and arjun ko madad karne keliye shree
aur ye sakshi arjun se pyar bhi karti hai aur use riya ko patane me madad bhi karegi ye kaisi ajeeb love triangle hai.. loving this

arjun is really madly in love with riya
but kya riya use pyar karti hai?
aur roshni bhi tho hai yaha

loved the update and plz update next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
full of confusion but nyc 1.. awesome update.. yeah it's hard 2 understand the dialogues.. but it's ok.. take care of ur self... thnx 4 pm...

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