Ariya SS::Tu Meri Adhuri Pyas..(Completed)

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: KaShforever06
It's so emotional..
I am crying while reading this..
Can't believe Riya is getting married..
Someone please put some sense in Arjun.
Thanks for the pm..
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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
loved it
Abhi and Riya got engaged
both had their bachelor's party
Arjun dn Riya shared a dance,
Rathore tried to tell Abhi the truth but he already knew it
poor guy can't do anything
Arjun sang for Riya lekin mujhe ron AAYA
cont so

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

Part 7:-

After sometime..All are having drink n chit chatting..

Abhi;-yaar Arjun..Tum toh bahot accha gate ho yaar..

Arjun smiles little..

Riya:-ha Sach me Arjun sir..Aap bahot accha gate he..Itna accha ki once more kehne ka Dil kare..

Arjun n Riya just look each other..

Riyas cousins sister drag her with them to dance on one song..

All gaze turn to them..

The all girls n riya started dancing ..

Ye galiyan ye chaubara..

Yaha aana na dobara..

Ab ham toh bhaye pardesi

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

Leja rang be rangi yaade..hasane rone ki buniyaade..

Ab ham toh bhaye pardesi

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

(riya circle around etf team..n dancing looking to arjun)

Dekh tu na hame bhulana,mana door hame he jaana..

Meri alhad si ankheliyan,sada palkho pe basana..

Jab bajne lage baje gaje.,jag lagne lage khali khali..

Us dam tu itna samzna..meri doli uthi he phoolo wali..

Thode din ke yeh nate the ..kabhi hasate the gate the..

Ab ham toh bhaye pardesi

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

(arjun wipe tears hiding from all..)

Ye galiyan ye chaubara..

Yaha aana na dobara..

Ab ham toh bhaye pardesi

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

Ke tera yaha koi nahi..

After finishing riya again join the team..

All just looking her..her wet eyes are clearly telling her feelings..

Abhi:-Come on Arjun..ab tum ek gana suna do..

Arjun:-no..Abhi..

Abhi:-ritz..?

Riya just look to Arjun with request..

Arjun put his drink back on counter..N walked to stage..N started singing..

(Arjun singing)

Accha chalta hu..duaome yaad rakhna..

Mere zikar ka zuban pe sawad rakhna..

Dil ki sandooko me mere acchese kaam rakhna..

Chitti taro me bhi Mera Tu salam rakhna..

Andhera tera meine le liya..Mera ujala sitara tere naam kiya..

Channa mereya..mereya..

Channa mereya..mereya..

Channa mereya..mereya..beriya..oh piya..

Tere rukh se apna rasta mod chala..

Chandan hi Mein apni khushboo Chod chala..

Man ki Maya rakhke tere takiye tale..

Bairagi bairagi ka sooti chaula..

Odh ke chala..

Channa mereya..mereya..

Channa mereya..mereya..

Channa mereya..mereya..beriya..oh piya..

All claps for Arjun..

As soon as song finishes Arjun walked out of the venue as he could hold him more..

Riya couldn't hold herself..n she make a way in lonely corner n started crying..abhi goes to her n make her calm..

Next day..it's haldi function..

Jis tarike se Arjun Kal sangeet ceremony se chala Gaya usake wajah se Riya ko lag Raha he ke arjun shayad aaj nahi aayega..issliye woh tensed hoke baar baar entrance ki tarah dekhti he..

She take sigh when she saw Arjun entering in venue..

Both stared each other n then Arjun give her nod as if telling her that he is there for her..

Haldi ceremony also done then..

N next day..

It's the wedding day of abhi n Riya..

Almost all guest has arrived..n the last time arrangements are going on with full swing.

Sam look to arjun..arjun ki aakhe dekh ke lag raha he jaise barso se soya na ho..sam sigh..

Arjun:-shree..riya kaha he..??

Shree:-sir woh uss room me he..(point to one room)ready ho rahi he..

Arjun just walked to the room..he knock on the room..one girl open..

Girl:-boliye..?

Arjun:-muze riya se thodi der baat karni he..may I plz..?

Girl(who is one of riyas cousins) look to arjun strangely..

Arjun:-plz..

Girl:-ek minute..aapka naam..

Arjun:-arjun..

Girl:-wait..

Girl goes inside room..

Room me bahot sare girls he..riya ki friends ,usake cousins..n usake kuch ladies relatives..

Girl:-riya..koi arjun he..he wants to meet u..

Riya(this bring smile on her face):-arjun sir..??ha..mein abhi..

Saying this she get up..

Girl:-are tu kaha ja rahi he..abhi room se bahar mat nikal..ruko..ham sab bahar jate he..aur unhe bhejti hu..

Riya nodded..

Her cousin sister took all ladies out..n then arjun step inside room..

Only ariya is there..

Arjun shut the door behind him..riya look to him..

Riya:-arjun sir..muze laga..aaj shayad aap aayege nahi..

Arjun looking to her from top to bottom..she is looking so beautiful in typical Bengali attaire..

Arjun:-u r looking beautiful..

Riya look to him with big eyes..then smile little n lower her head..

Riya:-thanks..

Arjun:-tumhe aisa kyo laga ke mein nahi aauga riya..?

Riya:-bas..socha ke..(but she stop abruptly..)

Arjun:-muze toh aana hi tha riya..kyo ki mien janta hu..tumhara pyar bhale hi muze kamzor bana deta he..par mera pyar tumhari takat he..jisaki aaj tumhe sabse jyada zarurrat he..

Riya just stare him..

Arjun:-tumhe kuch dena tha..bahot hi special he..

Saying this arjun took out chain around his neck..n forward it to riya..

But riya dont take it..just staring him..

Arjun:-ye roshni ko behad pasand thi..ye chain mera first gift tha usako..usake jane ke baad meine ye chain pehanana suru kiya..ye mere liye bahot special he..samaz lo roshni ki aakhri nishani he..

Riya:-aur ye aap muze de rahe he..??

Arjun:-kyo ki tum bhi toh utni hi special ho jitni ke roshni..

Tears gathered in riyas eyes..

Arjun:-agar tumhe pasand nahi he toh koi baat nahi..

Riya:-nahi..kya aap..kya isse muze pehana denge..?

Arjun:-hmm..

He come near her..n make her ware that chain to her..n move little away..

Riya(looking to the chain):-mein isse kabhi khudse alag nahi karugi..

Koyi khushi ki he yeh raat aayi

sajdhaj ke baraat he aayi..

dheere dheere gam ka sagar tham gaya aakho me aakar..

gunjati he lo shehnayi to kho liye bandh bandhayi..

(both stared each other..arjun started walking towards door as he is not able to hide his tears anymore..)

Hamesha tumko chaha..aur chaha aur chaha..

chaha chaha aur chaha..kuch bhi nahi..

Kuch bhi nahi..

(riya hold arjuns hand..arjun turn to look her..both look each other with teary eyes..riya hug him..he too hug back her..)

Tumhe dil ne he puja puja puja..

Aur puja kuch bhi nahi..

(both remain in hug for some seconds..then they hear someone near door..both moved away n next second riyas mom come inside room to take her for main marriage ritual..riya walked with her mother till door..n look back to arjun..arjun too staring her..riya away with her mother n others ladies..)

Oh kuch bhi nahi kuch bhi nahi.oh nahi kuch bhi nahi..

All marriage rituals done by Bengali rituals..

Abhi n riya get married..arjun seeing all this making his heart as strong as stone..

After bidai..all back to home..

Firse kuch rituals ho rahe he..then all girls took riya away in room..

Arjun ab aur nahi ruk sakhta he..sam bhi ye jaan jata he..

Sam:-abhi..tc..we are leaving now..

Abhi:-are aise nahi ja sakhte tum log yaar..aaj raat toh muze tum logo ki sabse jyada zarurat he..

Sam,arjun n chotu look to him with big eyes..

Abhi:-are aise kya dekh rahe ho..tum log mere sath aa rahe ho bas..

Ab samjun aur chotu ko kya bolna he samaz nahi aata ..

Shree:-abhi sir..dont worry..ham he na,.

Ab baki ke teeno boys shree ki taraf strange aakho se dekhte he..

Abhi:-what hapapened to u 3..??come on..aaj ki raat kitni difficult he..muze tum logo ka sath toh chahiye hi na..pata nahi kyo hoti he ye kal ratri..??

Sam:-kal ratri..?

Abhi:ha..oh shit..(ab usse samaz aa raha he ke ye boys aise kyo react kar rahe he..kyo ki unhe Bengali rituals ke bare me pata nahi..)are..yaar Bengali ritual he..shadi ki raat dulha dulhan alag alag sote he..ek dusare ko dekhte bhi nahi..aur agar dekha bhi toh kuch bura hota he aise mante he..so..riya dusare kamre me aaj usake behano aur dosto ke sath maze karegi aur mein apne room me apne dosto ke sath..kuch samaze..

Sam:-oh..

Abhi:-chalo..tum sab mere sath..

All started walking behind him..except arjun..

Abhi:-arjun..come on..aaj ki raat..

Arjun sigh..

after almost 3 hours.

Shree chotu n abhi full talli ho chuke he..sam is in control..n arjun ne drink nahi kiya..

Arjun kisi tarah choree n abhi ko bed pe sula deta he..sam already sofe pe tired hoke so chukka he..

Arjun bas aaj ke din ke bare me soch raha he..kya ye usake liye worst day tha..ya accha din tha..?worst issliye ke usaka pyar aaj kisi aur ka ho gaya..ya accha issliye ke woh khud bhi toh yahi chahta tha..?

He started feeling suffocating..he come out of room n goes to tarrece..

N he saw riya standing there..

He goes n stood besides her..

Arjun:-riya..?tum..??

Riya:-woh sab nachte gate so gayi..muze nind nahi aa rahi thi..aap..??

Arjun:-unn sabne bahot drink kar liya tha..so gaye..par mera aur nind ka rista kafi problematic he..

Riya dont said anything..just looking to him..

Arjun:-abhi tumse bahot pyar karta he..i m sure he will keep u happy..

Riya smiles lightly..

riya:-but I m not sure will I be able to keep him happy..?

Arjun:-ofcourse u will..i know u..

Riya:-kabhi kabhi mein sochti hu ke kash ham aise na mile hote..i mean alag situation me mile hote..kitna accha hota ke ham college days me milate..ye sikandar..ye cases..ye khtara..kuch na hota..ek simple si zindagi..normal zindagi..aur hamara sath..par..

Arjun:-jo ho chukka usse ham nahi badal sakhte riya..par ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna..tum mere dil me hamesha rahogi..aur mein tumhare dil me..

Both keep looking each other..looks like time has freez there..

Aasama tere mera hua..

Khwab ki tarah dhua dhua..

Aasama tera mera hua ..

Sans ki tarah ruan ruan..

Ho jaye Jaha tu jaye..

Paye tuze hi paye..

Saye ye tere he muzme samaye..

Saiyara mein saiyara..saiyara tu saiyaran..

Sitaro ke jaha me milege ab yara..

(arjun remembering how he met riya n slowly fall for her..)

Tu jo mila..toh yun hua..

Ho gayi puri adhuri si dua..

(he remember she is soon going away from him may be for forever..)

Tu jo gaya toh le gaya..

Sang tere,mere jine ki har wajah..

Ho jaye Jaha tu jaye..

Paye tuze hi paye..

Saye ye tere he muzme samaye..

Saiyara mein saiyara..saiyara tu saiyaran..

Sitaro ke jaha me milege ab yara..

(riya remember how because of arjun she realize true meaning of love..how because of him she become not only good officer but also a good human being..how because of him she started beliving that there are still good people like him in this world..)

Tumpe miti tumse bani..

Tumse hua he haa khud pe yakin..

(she remember she is soon going away from him now..he will not be there with her..but she dont mind..because she knows he will be always in her heart..in herself..)

Tu jo nahi to na sahi..

Main hu yaha toh..tu he yahi kahi..

Ho jaye Jaha tu jaye..

Paye tuze hi paye..

Saye ye tere he muzme samaye..

Saiyara mein saiyara..saiyara tu saiyaran..

Sitaro ke jaha me milege ab yara..

They dont relize when its get morning..

Both saw sun showing his first ray..they headed back to their respective room..

Later in the morning..

Choree sam,abhi also woke up..after breakfast..

Samjun n choree left..(arjun left after looking riya silently..)

Sam,choree goes to their respective home..n arjun keep wondering here n there whole day n night trying to find some peace to his disturbed mind..

On the other hand..abhi n riya keep busy whole day with their guest..almost all guest has left now..

At night..

After giving lots of nek to his sister in laws ,abhi entered in his room,only to find riya sitting on bed in bridal attire n room is full decorated with flowers n candles..

He slowly lock the door behind him..n walked to bed..

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Ohhhg god i seriously feel so bad for this fictional character yaar...

.aap na writer ban jaao...ur all stories r damm awesome one...

Plz jab book release karoge mujhe ek copy chahiye...i m not joking...i m damm serious about my every word...

.aaj bhi rulane mein koi kasar nahi chodi...issiliye wo wala part scroll down kar ke padha hai...take office mein sab ke samane phut phut ke na ro padu...

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Mariaakanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#255

Really sonu.. is story se sab readers kam se kam ek baar tho royehonge... heart wrenching update.. in teen no ki zindagi ab kaise mod legi... ye dekhna hai..

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Mariaakanksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Ohhhg god i seriously feel so bad for this fictional character yaar...
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.aap na writer ban jaao...ur all stories r damm awesome one...
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Plz jab book release karoge mujhe ek copy chahiye...i m not joking...i m damm serious about my every word...
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.aaj bhi rulane mein koi kasar nahi chodi...issiliye wo wala part scroll down kar ke padha hai...take office mein sab ke samane phut phut ke na ro padu...
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I love u...and ur stories

I too agree with u dear.. and I really feel proud that she is my partner in writing Tere pyar mein.. 😊... Lov u sonu...

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

soo emotional updatee
like it
continue soon
waiting for next

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

Emotional update. .
Thxc 4r pm dear

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
Ohhhg god i seriously feel so bad for this fictional character yaar...
.
.aap na writer ban jaao...ur all stories r damm awesome one...
.
Plz jab book release karoge mujhe ek copy chahiye...i m not joking...i m damm serious about my every word...
.
.aaj bhi rulane mein koi kasar nahi chodi...issiliye wo wala part scroll down kar ke padha hai...take office mein sab ke samane phut phut ke na ro padu...
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I love u...and ur stories

Book 😆😆Tumhari Ye comment agar mere dear hubby ne padh li toh woh phut phut ke hasega..😆😆

Usako lagta he na Jane Mein iss India forum pe Kya karti hu..Jo Har waqt bas mobile pe lagi rehti hu..

Love u too..

Sorry par abhi Aur bhi Rone ke chances he..

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Sana Tabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#260

Awesome one
Bahoth emotional tha Ariya ko dekhkar bahot rona aaya yar
Feeling bad for them
Kitna difficult hai na dono ke liye
Poor ariya
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
Bye take care