Originally posted by: etfr
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Beautiful yet heart wrenching story.
Perfectly written
You give it a great end.
Though I cried alot while reading as it was very emotional and heart touching. Literally I had the same question as Arjun what did he got other than loss.. loss of Roshini, loss of Riya's love and finally loss of Riya n good friend Abhi. But indeed what he gained was also great thing, the junior Arjun. That's was heart touching.
As usually I love to read story of happy ending but I still read your emotional ending because it always has some reality.
Keep writing.
I will be reading your OS series.
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