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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awesome Update Chutki.😊

Aww Kishu seems the jaan of Rawte Family and its expected as sisters And daughters are the life of a clan.

Hmm so Shiva is related to security issues and thats why Durga, Arjun were shifted to a safe place and Krishna was abducted.

Poor Shiva, died saving his daughter. But I have a gut feeling that Kishu is safe.

Felt bad for Arjun and Durga.😭

Thanx For Pm.

Update Soon.

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

That's fantastic update
But still I'm crying
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon

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nicky13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nice and emotional story... Update it soon... Thanks

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ariyabestfan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Awsome..
Omg Krishna get kidnapped..
Shiva try to save her..
Krshna is such a brave girl..
Hope she is alive n the dead body was of someone else..
Let's see now what Arjun does..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

N sorry for late comment..

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Naina Singh May 22, 2016 at 10:04 AM

nice story
arjun and her sis
sister and father died
omg why ? father was a scientist ?
continue soon

Shwetha May 28, 2016 at 6:27 AM

I didn't watch the show Arjun before, so your version is going to be an insight into the show itself.

The update is really beautiful. You captured the bonding among the family members so well. Waiting for Arjun to get into action.

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
Nice dear

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: spatika
awesome update di...
feeling bad for Arjun and durga..
continue soon..
thanks for PM..

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: sur1911
Nice update Neha
Love the bonding between krishu n arj
But what is this both are dead
Arj n his ayi are shattered
But I have gut feeling krishu will be alive
But she is hiding may be she has those information
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Thanks dear
About your gut feeling, sadly, Krishna is dead. She didn't have any clue of the information.
Glad you liked it
Stay tuned for more

Originally posted by: madmadona
omg arjun's dad is dead
is krishna really dead???
poor arjun n durga
awesome updates
cont soon

Thanks dear
Krishna is dead.
Stay tuned for more

Originally posted by: nitris23
awesome updated
loved it
hmm feel sad for arjun and his mom
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm

Thanks dear

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rinku95
Superb
Sad part
Continue soon thanks for pm

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: --GOLD--
Loved it neha
Awesome update
So it's all about national security
Well let's see what happens after this emotional start
What Arjun will do to find out the people behind all this
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon

Thanks di
Glad you loved it
All your questions will be answered as the story progresses.
Stay tuned for more :-)

Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Awesome Update Chutki.😊
Aww Kishu seems the jaan of Rawte Family and its expected as sisters And daughters are the life of a clan.

Hmm so Shiva is related to security issues and thats why Durga, Arjun were shifted to a safe place and Krishna was abducted.
Poor Shiva, died saving his daughter. But I have a gut feeling that Kishu is safe.

Felt bad for Arjun and Durga.😭

Thanx For Pm.
Update Soon.

Thanks di
Yes, you are right!😳No, Kishu is dead!😭
Stay tuned for more😊

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
That's fantastic update
But still I'm crying
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon

Still crying? Oh, That's good, your eyes would get cleaned😉 Thanks dear😳

Originally posted by: nicky13
Nice and emotional story... Update it soon... Thanks

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
Awsome..
Omg Krishna get kidnapped..
Shiva try to save her..
Krshna is such a brave girl..
Hope she is alive n the dead body was of someone else..
Let's see now what Arjun does..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

N sorry for late comment..

Thanks dear
No dear,Krishna is dead😭
Stay tuned for more😊

Originally posted by: BubliBag
mind blowing

Thanks dear

nice story
arjun and her sis
sister and father died
omg why ? father was a scientist ?
continue soon

Thanks dear
Scientist? You'll know it in the next update.
Stay tuned for more 😊

I didn't watch the show Arjun before, so your version is going to be an insight into the show itself.

The update is really beautiful. You captured the bonding among the family members so well. Waiting for Arjun to get into action.

Thanks dear
This story isn't completely based on Arjun, only the characters are adapted. My other story Reshimbandh is more on the show.

I'm glad that you liked it. Stay tuned for more!😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 9 years ago

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meeshu55

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

nice story loved it
loved the bonding between Krishna and arjun
sad part
arjun lost his dad and sister
waiting for next part
update soon

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: meeshu55
nice story loved it
loved the bonding between Krishna and arjun
sad part
arjun lost his dad and sister
waiting for next part
update soon

Glad you liked it dear
Stay tuned for more
Thanks dear😊

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Hello everyone!

Finally, I'm back with the update. Sincere apologies for keeping you waiting for so long but was caught up with some important work.

But from now on there would be regular updates, *hopefully!* *fingers crossed!* 😉😆

Okay, enough of my chattering!

Coming back to the update.

Chapter 2

Arjun and Durga were escorted by a security guard in a white ambassador car and taken into an old looking, huge governmental building. The insides of the building were totally different from that it seemed from outside. The British era's building looked like a castle from outside, but it was a modern day busy office inside.

A lot of uniformed and casual dressed people were working inside; all were as busy as bee. Some working on computers and phones, others rushing in and out of cubicles with files. The guard led them towards the lift and they stopped at the third floor.

They reached at the end of the corridor, Arjun read the nameplate and wondered why they were called here. They entered the huge cabin. At the rear end, an important looking man in his fifties sat behind the table, on a leather chair. He had jet black hair, and his eyes held strange calmness.

Waiting for your comments!Be generous with them😳

Updates are directly proportional to the length and number of comments😛