Ariya ss 'Mahe Jaan' part 9 page 31 11/07/18 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
wow riya solve the case 👏
riya got along with everyone very well but she didn't like that Sonia just like me even I don't like her at all 😡
poor ved going to have heart break
he badly fall in love with riya at first sight 😉
now waiting for arjun entry
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Its really nice
Riakshi covno very nice
Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVE LOVE LOVE U🤗
MERI AWESOME SI PYAARI
SI FRIEND!😳❤️ LOVED D
PART !!😆 YEH RIYA PE VED
LATTO HO GAYA H!🤣😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Ved riya pe fida or riya ne case solve kr diya
Waiting for arjun entry
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update. ..
Hehehe ved to gya Bt Zara sambhal ke ved Arjun ka gussa pta h na.. 😉 😛
Nice one..
Continue soon.. .
N Thanx for the pm. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4



Riya tried once more

Ri - ved coffee thandi ho jayegi.

Vad come out of his loveland

Ved - sorry riya .wo mai mai ha coffee do

Sak - ved kaha khoye the kisi ladki ke khayalon mai to nahi.

At this ved split his coffee thankfully no one become his victim

All shocked ise kya hua. N ved embressed

Ved - sorry guys wo sak ne ek dum.

Sak - even i am sorry mai bhul gayi thi duniya mai kisi ko pyar ho sakta hai par do logon ko nahi

Ri - do log kaun

Sak - ved or arjun. Ved bichara simple sa family guy jisse mummy bolegi usi se shadi karega or pyar bhi .

Ri- or arjun she asked curiously .

Sak - or arjun wo or pyar to aise hai jaise jameen asman .use na bas chillana dantna or din bhar kam karna hi aata hai. Pyar kya uska to smile se bhi dur dur tak nata nahi.

Ri - really .she asked shockingly.

@ll - really n all laugh.

But its so loud this time so sam hear n scold them .all sit silently n start doing their work.

After finising their work. All are ready to move for their houses.

Sh - tum kaha rehti ho ri.

Ri tell him address.

Sh - great ye to mere raste mai hai.mai chotu tum or sakshi sath mai aya jaya karenge.

Ri - ok shree to chale.


They four sit in shree car.choree at front n sakri at back seat.
All are chitchating n doing fun.

Like this 15 days passed .now ri bonding is geting strong with all expect soniya. Khair uski kisi se bhi bonding acchi hai kaha. Or ved uski feelings day by day strong hoti jaa rahi hai.

Aide hi ek din charo chitchat or masti karte hue jaa rahe hai

Suddenly

Ri - waise saks ye arjun sir kaise hai i mean unke bare mai itna sun liya i am curious to know. Plz tell me na.

Sak - ok. Arjun etf ka second in command hai. Bahut gusse wala akdu khadus never smile but brellient at work.or sabki help bhi karta hai par jatata nhi.
He is so handsome. Black eyes

One guy come out from airport n remove his shades revaling his black eyes

Sak - personality to pucho hi mat well hight n well built body.

He is waiting for luggage to come. He wear blue pent n light grey shirt looking handsome

Sak - chalta hai to attitude saf dikhta hai boss

His luggage come n he start walking in his attitude.

Sak - bas chahere par koi expression nahi.

He take his already parked car n start driving toward his home

Here ri is fully engrossed in his description.

Sak - kya hua

Ri - kuch nhi. Bas kisi ki yad aa gayi. She said in terence.she is remembering her love while sak describing arjun.

Sak hit her with elbow playfully n lightly

Sak - kiske khayalon mai.

Ri - or kiske baba ke unki yad aa rahi hai na.
She come out from her dream land and make up fast.

Sh - its ok ri first time hai na aadat pad jayegi jaldi hi dont worry.

N she smile .n again chit chat begain

Riya home

She come n freashenup n change her night were n cook for herself and eat

While eating

She put food in two plates n start eating from both. ( guys thoda thoda hi serve kiya tha)

Ri - kab ayenge aap arjun dekhiye apke liye roj plate lagate hai. Or khud hi khate hai. Wo din kab ayega jab hum apke sath khana khayenge.

Other side

At another home

That airport guy is sitting on dinner table

Man - pata hai jaan mai tumse milne tumhe lene gaya tha sabne kaha tum mar gayi par mujhe yakeen nhi hota. Ho bhi kaise meri saanse chal rahi hai na to tumhari kaise ruk sakti hai.
Dekho aaj maine tumhara fav aalo ka
parantha laya hu. Or roj ki tarah tumhari bhi plate lagayi hai.tumhe feel karne k liye . tum kaha ho kab milogi mujhe. I miss u so much jaan. Ab or mat satao apne arjun ko.

Ye he is arjun , riya's arjun .

Here
Ri after dinner .she go to bed after talking her father .she hold her chain again.

Ri - pata nhi q jaan kuch alag lag raha hai. Kuch accha sa .pata nahi kya hai. Tumhe pata hai aaj jab sakshi us khadus arjun ka description de rahi thi to hume aap yad aye . ha ha ap to humesha humare sath rehte hai na.i love you so much n missed you so much jaan. Good night.

Here

Arjun Holding one old photo n looking lovingly at it.

Ar - pata nahi jaan kal q etf Jane ke liye bahut excited hu. Ya its my dream Job par pata nahi q ye khushi kuch alag hai. First day se bhi jyada. Pata nhi kal ka sawera kya lane wala hai. Khair good nyt jaan.

Both sleep hugging their pillows. Lyk sleeping in eachother arms.

Next day


Sabhi conf room mai hai.
Riya aaj late ayi hai qki aaj wo mandir gayi thi use pata nhi q man kiya jane ka.

Ri - kya hua aaj itna sannata q hai.

Sh - are aaj khadus aa raha hai

Ch - haa dig sir ko apne uc ki report dene gaye hai.

Ri - ohh. Par

Sak - pehle hi keh rahe hai riya bachke rehna unka samjhe ya samjhau bahut bhari hota hai.

Ri gulped her sliva.

Ai - haa or kam k time no fun no chitchat

Ri - really

All - hmm.

Riya sit on her chair and bitting her nails

Ri - yar mujhe to sun kar hi dar lag raha hai.

Ved - dont worry riya wo itni bhi bure nhi.or mai hu i mean hum sab hai tumhare sath.

She give her smile n he lost.

Tabhi riya is completing one file.

Ri - omg ye to ink gir gayi file par.

Ai - ye kya kiya riya ye file to aaj arjun sir check karenge. Unhone khas shree ko phone karke bola ise ready rakhne ke liye

Ri - he durga ma aate hi sher se panga ho jayega .kya karu guys plz help me

Ch - deva re deva arj sir ki file . na baba na ab tera kuch nhi ho sakta

Sak - darao mat use chotu or kuch socho bechari ko pehle hi din sys sunna padega.

Sh - idea is file ki ek copy or hai file room mai abhi use laa kar de dete hai.ek page bas baki hoga uska bharne ko.fir ise thik karke uski jagah rakh denge

All look at him wow

Ri - ok mai lati hu. Thanks shree.you are best friend


She goes happily.

Here arjun come in etf

Arj - aisa karta hu kuch file le leta hu pehle fir conf hall jata hu.

He too move toward file room

Riya stood on stool and searching file n suddenly her leg slipped and she fall
She close her eye in fear but she doesnt feel any pain so slowly open her eyes n see two black eyes are starring at her with many emotions.

Some time before

Arjun come n see a girl is searching something , who is she he is going to call her but she fall n he catch her

Present

Both look at each other with many emotions .some time later he drop her and she turn

Ariya( ek sath) pagal ho gaya/gayi hai tu arjun/ ri. Abhi tak to batien karta /ti tha/thi ab din mai sapne bhi dekhne laga/lagi.

Dono opposite direction mai chalte hai. Suddenly dono ek sath

Ariya - no ye sapna nhi tha.?
Ri - mai sach mai giri
Ar- maine sach mai use pakda tha
( dono ek sath bolte hai)
Or turn karte hai. Dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe hai. Waqt jaise ruk gaya hai unke kadam bhi nhi bad rahe dono ek dusre ko bas dekhe ja rahe hai ankho mai ansu liye .unke face k expressin bar bar change ho rahe hai kabhi khushi kabhi dard kabhi muskurahat .wo bin bole hi ek dusre se sab bol gaye.

Or agle hi pal dono ek dusre ko tightly hug karte hai.

Tbc. By ramya.
Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update
Arjun ki entry mast thi
Finally ariya mil gaye
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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huh yeh ved ab haddi na bane ariya Ke bich...
awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsommmiiieee!!! This is getting interesting... Ved toh Riya pe line mar raha hai faltu mein. Others told Riya about Arjun... well at home Riya misses Arjun and eats with two plates and other side Arjun is also doing the same. Man they're such a adorable pair... and then TAN DA TA!! Arjun-Riya finally finally met each other... pagal dono at first they thought they are dreaming again. Update next chap sooon!! Things are just getting interesting...
Edited by kavyanjali08 - 9 years ago

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