Ariya ss 'Mahe Jaan' part 9 page 31 11/07/18 - Page 10

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Awsum update!!!!
Ariya waiting for each other for so long...
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MAHE JAAN

PART 5

Dono ne ek dusre ko tightly hug kiya hua he

Dono ye believe hi nahi kar pa rahe hi wo samne he ek dusre ke ye sach he koi sapna nahi

Dono kuch nahi kehte sirf ek dusre ko feel kar rahe he

Unke jazbaat jo pichle 10 saalo se andar the unke dil me wo unke aankho ke aansu bankar bahar nikal rahe he

Dono bohot kuch kehna chahte he ek dusre se but unki aawaz unka saath nahi de rahi

Labz hi nahi nikal rahe unki zaban se

Kuch der baat dono hug se bahar aate he

Both hold eachothers face n cares it again n again to feel ki ye real he ki aaj unka intezar khatam hua

Unke aansu rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahe

Arjun : riii... riyaaa... Riya"take her name with choked voice"

Hearing her name from his mouth is most blissful thing for riya automatically uski aankhe band ho jati he hearing his voice after a decade

Arjun fir use apni baaho me bhar leta he but this is the limit for riya n she starts to cry very bitterly

N arjun usse riya ko is tarah nahi dekha jata he so try to smooth her kabhi uske hairs cares karte hue kabhi uski back rub karte hue

But with his care her sob grew harder

Arjun : riyu jaan please ab nahi riyu shhh... Bohot ro liya jaan ab wo din gaye ab bas please mere liye

Riya nod her head over this n look towards his face with her teary eyes

Dono ek dusre ki ankho me dekh rahe he dono ki aankhe laal he unme unki tadap saaf jhalak rahi he

Riya ek dam se arjun ka face apne haatho me leti he n kissed his swollen eyes feeling his pain then his forehead, then his cheeks

Feeling her soft touch on his face arjun immediately closed his eyes

Uski riya ka touch itne saalo baad jis ehsaas ke liye wo itna tarsa itna tadpa use aaj mehsoos kar raha he

Riya : hum aapse bohot pyaar karte he arjun bohot ye din ye raate ye saal bohot mushkil the aapke bina ab nahi reh paenge aapke bina arjun nahi reh paenge"n she again starts to cry"

Arjun takes her in a hug again n riya she clutch over him like her life depend on this hug

Riya : ab humme or himmat nahi he arjun hum ab or nahi seh sakte

Arjun : me bhi nahi riya me bhi nahi,nahi reh sakta hu tumhare bina riyu ye ek ek pal ese jiya he jese mano saza ho pal pal mara hu me tumhare liye bohot tadapa hu us waqt dil par pathar rakh kar tumse dur hua tha, par ye 10 saal!! Mene ek bhi lamha sukun se nahi jiya me zindagi ji kaha raha tha riyu zindagi sirf kat rahi thi meri jaan to tumhare paas thi meri me bas ek bemani zindagi kat raha tha tumhare bina

Both are crying in each others arm

Arjun : kaha thi tum kitna dhunda tumhe pata hai .har saans jaise tumhara hi intzar kar rahi ho or jab pata chala ki tum tum tum...nahi rahi meri saanse ruk si gayi thi riyu par aaj aaj tum meri baaho me apne arjun ke saath ab tak me adhura tha aaj me pura ho gaya tumse tum kaha thi riya tum kaha thi"said very emotionally"

Riya going to answer him ki...

Tabhi arjun ka phone bajta hai.wo gusse mai katne wala hota hai par rathod ka no. dekh wo attend kar leta hai

Arjun : haa rathore"said annoyingly"

Rathore : rawte kaha ho case aaya hai .under cover ke bad case bhul gaye ya office timing.

Arjun : yahi hu mai.or tum phone rakhoge to aaunga na

They cut call.

Arjun : sorry Jaan emergency hai. Ye mera card hai. Is no par apna no. or address msg karna mai aata hu.

Ek bar wo fir riya ko dekhta he with longing but he is in hurry

Riya kuch bole iske pehle hi arjun chala jata hai. Riya ko bhi kuch samjh nahi aata .wo card dekhe uske pehel hi uska phone ring hota hai.

Shree : ri new case jaldi aao.

Riya immideatly move for conference room.

In conference room

Sab he waha fir ariya bhi aa jate he

Pehle arjun aata he as always koi expression nahi koi nahi keh sakta ki kuch der pehle ye insaaf bohot roya he in 10 saalo me usne apne aapko esa bana liya he use apne emotions mask karne ki aadat ho gayi he

Fir riya aati he uska face pale he with continuous crying eyes swell he isse sabko lagta he kuch hua he kya wo nahi jante but riya or arjun dono same direction se aaye he so all think ki arjun ne hi riya ko danta hoga

All are giving pity look to her n ved use riya ko is tarah dekh bilkul acha nahi lagta isse pehle wo kuch kahe

Rathore bhi riya ko is tarah dekhta he so he ask

Rathore : riya any problem

Arjun ab rathore ko confusingly dekhta he becoz use samjh nahi aata ki rathore use kese janta he

Riya : no sir

Rathore : hmm

Arjun confused he n he is going to ask something but rathore understand ki kuch kehna chahta he but wo arjun wo kuch kehne ka mauka hi nahi deta

Rathore : case rawte

Rathore : so team

N he starts to brief the case

Now both ariya get confused ki rathore/rathore sir ek civilian ke samne kese case discuss kar rahe he its not like him aaj kaha he uske/unke rules n protocol...

Arjun : Strange"he said sarcastingly"

Isse rathore arjun ki taraf dekhta he

Rathore : kuch kaha tumne

Arjun : aap ek civilian ke samne case discuss kar rahe he SIR its strange"with his usual smirk"

Arjun said this indirectly indicating towards riya

Rathore : under cover ja kar apni yaadash kho bethe ho ya case briefing ki jarurat nahi samjh rahe ho isliye ye faltu ki baato se mera or apna time waste kar rahe ho

Arjun glare rathore n rathore he did the same

Rathore : yaha koi civilian nahi he hmmm basharte ki tumne ETF chodne ka fesla kar liya ho"said with smirk"

Ye sunke riya or confused ho jati he

Arjun : mera esa koi irada nahi he SIR"with same anger"

Arjun ko is tarah dekh riya shocked ho jati he ye to bilkul different arjun he

Arjun : me riya ki baat kar raha tha

Rathore again smirk over this n baki sab bas ekbar rathore ek bar arjun ese unhe dekh rahe he

Rathore : she is also not an civilian

Arjun use confused look deta he

Arjun : matlab"confusingly"

Rathore : she is research specialist of ETF riya mukharjee n riya he is ACP arjun suryakant rawte ETF ka second-in-command

Hearing this both ariya become shocked both are looking at each others with shocked expression


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Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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