Ariya ss 'Mahe Jaan' part 9 page 31 11/07/18 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Awesm update
but 10 yr leap
rii joind etf
etfian r nice to her n became frnds
rii cute understanding focusd
hope usse uska arjun mil jaye
3rd in command toh uspe fida ho gya
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
w8ing 4 ariya meet!😳
loved d part!
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Plz don't DC it .its too good
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Wow nice update
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Awsum story!!!!
Luvd d concept...
Just waiting for ariya meet!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...awesome ss..read two parts at once...
Amazing..plot...
Would love to read further...
If possible please pm me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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MAHE JAAN

PART 3

Riya apne cabin me hoti he talking to her love tabhi shree door knock karta he

Riya : yes

Shree : riya case

Riya n shree dono conference room ki taraf ja rahe hote he

Riya : omg shree this is my first case m very nervous

Shree : hum sab hena tum chinta mat karo or galdi chalo warna pehle hi din rathore sir se daat pad jaegi

Riya darte hue : no no me ye nahi chahti tum kitna baat karte ho shree jaldi jaldi chalo ab warna rathore sir se daat pad jaegi or hum dost hena to tumhe data pade mujhe acha nahi lagega

Saying this she hurrily went towards conference room n shree uske kya kehne he was like what the meri lines mujh par hi use kar gayi ye n he also went towards conference room

All are present in conference room

Rathore : team highway ke paas ek ladke ki lash mili he hume abhi jana hoga liza n soniya u two also come waha tumhari jarurat pad sakti he

All : yes sir

Sab 2 SUV me bethte he ek me rathore,Ayesha,liza or soniya and dusri me ved ,sakshi,chotu,riya or shree

Sab waha pahuchte he us lash ke paas kuch log khade he n lash ka chehra pura damage ho chukka he

Rathore : aap mese kisne hume call kiya tha

Ek aadmi : saab mene

Ayesha : aapne kab dekhi ye lash

Aadmi : madam me har din isi waqt yaha se gusarta hu meri dukan ke kuch duri par aaj bhi nikla fir achanak dekha ki kuch kutto ne kuch gher rakha he yaha aaya to dekha ye lash or mene turant aapko phone kiya saab kya me ja sakta hu meri dukan khole ka time ho gaya he

Rathore : thik he jarurat hogi to fir bulaenge

Aadmi : jee saab

Sab log lash ke paas jate he uska chehra puri tarah se damage he n check karne ke baad pata chalta he ki koi identity bhi nahi he uske paas na wallet na mobile nothing

Liza or soniya lash ke paas he or baki sab aas paas dhundh rahe he n logo se puch tach kar rahe he

(sorry guys mujhe cases n all nahi aata so case ke bare me nahi likh rahi hu)

Sham ho gayi he sab conference room me he case khatam ho gaya he the case solve by none other then our riya

Rathore : well done riya u did n outstanding job

Riya : thank u sir

Rathore : team do paper work of todays case"saying this he went from there"

Ved : really riya good job"eyeing her in mesmerized way"

Riya : thank u"with her dimple smile"

N fir kya tha ved kho sa gaya riya me but riya ye sab notice nahi karti

Sakshi : wese riya tumhe kese pata chala ki wo ladki hi katil he

(after investigation they come to know the identity of that guy his wallet which is dug in the mud lash ke kuch hi duri pe)

Riya : pyaar

Ayesha : matlab

Riya : us ladki ki matlab wo sneha ki aankho me mene pyaar dekha tha jab hum usse baat kar rahe the she loved him"saying this riya went from there"

Shree : kya pyaar"he look at riya like many heads are grown on her head"

In riya's cabin

Riya talking to her love : hmm bohot upset he hum esa koi kese kar sakta he ek taraf pyar karne ka dawa or dusri taraf usi ki jaan leli kya ho gaya he aaj kal logo ko jaan aap worry mat kariya hum thik he aapto jante hena hume hum ese hi he thore se sensitive OK OK.. thore nahi jyada he ab khush par kese hume to samjh nahi aa raha aapko pata he ye humara pehla case tha pehla field job wese jaan hum"but her talks left in mid"

At door

Sakshi : he riya come sab conference hall me he me coffee banana ja rahi thi to socha tumse puch lu

Riya : sakshi kya coffee me bana sakti hu

Sakshi : y not yaar come

Dono pantry me jate he sakshi riya ko ingredient deti he n riya makes coffee saath hi saath dono bate bhi kar rahi he

Sakshi : so riya kesa lag raha he ETF me

Riya : yaar bata nahi sakti jab yaha aa rahi thi to me badi nervous thi ki sab kese hoga yaha ke log kese honge ufff.."with pout"

Sakshi laugh at her expressions n says

Sakshi : or ab

Riya : oh ab ab to bohot acha lag raha he sab ache he yaha shree,Ayesha,chotu,liza,ved,rathore sir sab helpful he but mujhe Sonia kuch ajiz lagti he pata nahi kyu"in thinking mode"

Sakshi waiting for her to take her name but riya uske bare me kuch nahi kehti

Sakshi : acha sab ache or helpful he

Riya : yup

Sakshi : r u sure sabke bare me tum bol rahi ho

Riya : ha baba

Sakshi : r u sure koi chuta nahi

Riya : nahi baba sab aa to gaye

Sakshi pout over this n with this riya starts to laugh

Riya : lol sakshi look at ur face hehehehehe tum bohot achi ho sakshi me to bas mazak kar rahi thi

Tab tak coffee bhi ready ho jati he n dono coffee lekar conference room me aate he

Riya while laughing over sakshi's cuteness n sakshi with poker face

Sab inki taraf dekhte he n ved wo to bas riya ko dekhta hi reh jata he

Ved mv"how beautiful she looks while laughing her big almond shape eyes how they round up every time she laugh her dimple her each n every expression riya u r so cute ved ye tumhe kya ho raha he kya sach me mujhe riya se pyaar ho gaya he kya I really fall for her is It so? Am I in love with this beautiful n innocent girl ved ved u r gone man"

Riya : ved ved..."but he is lost in his thinking"

Kuch der pehle

Riya sabko coffee deti he haste hue hi n sakshi she set pouting on her seat

Liza : ise kya hua

"Is baat se riya ko or hasi aati he n sakshi wo riya ko ghur ke dekhti he"

Ayesha : are batao bhi ki ya hua

Riya tell them what happens in pantry all giggle at this n sakshi she more pout over it

Riya sabko coffee de chuki he sirf ved bacha he

(n ha guys rathore cabin me he warna inlogo ko masti karne deta kya)

At present

Ayesha went to give coffee to rathore n riya move towards ved

Riya : ved ved..."but he is lost in his thinking"

Riya baki sabki taraf dekhti he as in ise kya hua ab n all again starts to giggle on this n riya she just shook her head..


TBC BY.. mini di

Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Yahooo me 1st.
Wow awsm update,
Thanx 4 the p.m
Conti s0on.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
nice update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Do update soon

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