Ariya ss 'Mahe Jaan' part 9 page 31 11/07/18 - Page 2

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"MAHE JAAN"

PART 1

Girl : Kya bas itna hi pyar tha aapka mujh par bas haar man gae aap kya ghutne tek diye he humari mohabbat ne boliye"wid tears running down her eyes"

Boy : Bohat pyar karta hu me tumse itna pyar jitna kisine kisise nhi kiya ho pagalo deewano ki tarah chahne laga hu me tumhe par jo me karne ja raha hu wo karna zaruri he hume ye karna hoga"the girl try to intrupt him but he don't give her a chance"

Boy : Humara pyar paak he jaan, koi khot nhi he isme par is waqt mujhe mat roko me sab kuch seh sakta hu jo mujh par ilzam lage he me wo sab bardash kar lunga par apni mohabbat ko badnaam hote nhi dekh paunga"he also have tears in his eyes"

The girl just hugged him tightly n cry on his shoulder n he kissed her hair lightly

Girl : Kya ye karna zaruri he hum koi or..."still holding him she was saying but boy intrupt her"

Boy : Hmmm bohot zaruri he aaj humari mohabbat ko galat naam diya gaya he,galat nazaro se dekha gaya he,kya tumhe bhi ye lagta he ki humne mohabbat nhi gunah kiya he?

The girl immediately replys

Girl : Nahi humne koi gunah nhi kiya humne mohabbat ki he humara pyar sacha he kya aap..."she stopped in a mid but he understand what she wants to say"

Boy : Me bhi yahi manta hu isliye me sabko dikha dena chahta hu ki humne koi jurm nhi kiya pyar kiya he gunah nhi me zamane ko dikhana chahta hu ki hum galat nhi he.Kya tum mera saath dogi "he was looking towards her wid hopeful eyes"

N the girl no voice come out from her mouth wid teary eyes she just nod her head as if saying him that I m wid u in ur each n every decision n he, he understand her unsaid words n take her in a bone crush hug they remain in same position for sometime then they parted away from each other n he cupped her face in his hand n she hold his hands they were gazing at each other for sometime after that

Boy : Ab mujhe jana hoga take care love

Girl : Aap bhi meri jaan ka khayal rakhiyega"while crying so hard n he just nod his head"

N then he left her n she collapse on the floor n cried so hard...

The girl wake up with the haste she was sweating badly n tears in her eyes.She look everywhere n sees light in whole room which means its morning.She move her hand towards side stand n took the alarm clock n switch it off.And wid the other hand she wipe the sweat from her face n then she left the bed n move towards window n see the breathtaking view of morning sun rising in the sky n think to her self. 10 aal... pure 10 saal bit gaye me aaj bhi wahi khadi hu,har din wahi ek khawab"she was occupied in her thoughts when her thoughts broke by the constant ringing of mobile phone she takes the phone n see caller id wid smile on her face she pick the call"

Phone convo:

Girl : Hello

Other side : Kab se tumhe phone kar raha hu tum ab tak so rahi thi.Hello riya u there beta??"yes guys she's none other then our heroine our riyu oops sry arjun's riya hehhehehehe"

Riya : Dad I m sry I was looking at the breathtaking view of nature.Its so beautiful so pure..."in lost voice"

Riya's dad : Riya agar or kuch der isi tarah tu nature ki beauty ko enjoy karti rahi to tumhare pass tumhari puri zindagi hogi ye enjoy karne ke liye tab sun rise hi kyu sun set, summer, winter , rainy season tum sab widout any disturbance enjoy kar paogi freely"riya was getting confused by his this talks"

Riya : dad m not getting it what u r trying to say

Riya's dad : its simple dear tumhari job jo nhi rahegi to tum freely sab seasons enjoy kar paogi na"now its click in her mind "

Riya : oh my god oh my god dad aap kitna baat karte he aaj mera first day he ETF me oh god me apne first day hi late no ways now u cut the call I have to get ready.

N her dad cut the call while laughing at his daughters behavior.

Riya : damn riya tu pehle din hi late uff god plzzz help me ok sab thik ho waha sab ache se ho jae plzzz"n she get ready"

After getting ready she wents towards kitchen n find something to eat she pour milk in a bowl wid cornflakes n starts to eat it hurrily.After eating she went infront of her kali maa n pray

Riya : he kali maa aaj mera first day he ETF me plzzz sab kuch thik kar dijiyega plzz sab ache se ho jae waha ,sab ache ho waha plzz"she starts to leave but again turn n says to her maa"

Riya : aap to janti he na sab kuch plzzz be wid him always plzzz k now bye sham ko milti hu love u muah..."she give flying kiss to maa kali n left towards her destiny towards ETF Headquarters"

So here is the first part hopefully pasand aaye tell me guys howz it m waiting for ur reviews

love ramya

It's outstanding update ramya dear
Simply superb one
Riya is joining in ETF
Nd it was now after 6 years
Riya nd her dad's conversation is nice
Ab aage kya hoga
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