Ariya ss 'Mahe Jaan' part 9 page 31 11/07/18 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...
awesome updated
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow very nice update
Ariya meeting so emotional
Their pain is so visible in their talk n action
Par ye kya bich mai case
Lol ariya ek dusre ko civilian samajh rahe hai
Ariya ko shock laga
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update!!!
Ariya milan was fantastic!!! 😛
Dey were so overwhelmed ...
facing each other after 10 yrs!!!
It was amazing scene...
Hope dey goes for secret wedding or something!!!
It vil b fun...n dey vil b together secretly!!!
I feel bad for Ved!! Hope he finds his match soon...
N forget ri...
Lol...both were shocked...listening both works at etf!!!
Can't wait for ariya to b together!!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow ita simply beautiful
ariya's reunion very emotional n beautiful
loved it
but ye kya bichme case
hehehehe ariya ek dusre ko civilian samjh rahe he😆😆
omg both are shocked ye jan kar ki saath kam karte he 😆😆😆
awesome update sissy
continue soon
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n m sorry 4 late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update..
Ariya ko ab ek dusare ke bare me pata chala ke dono bhi etf me work kar rahe he..
Plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
finally ariya came face to face 😃
ariya meeting was really emotional 😭
but why arjun thought riya is dead? 😕
both got shocked to know they work together 😲
continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6.



Ariya look at each other with shock n confusion
But arjun is more shocked .

Ar - kya riya mukharjee par

Riya cut him in mid

Ri - yes sir riya mukharjee.

N he plead him with eyes not to say any single word. No
one understand their silent convo. But ariya don't need any word to describe their feelings or actions.

Arjun immediately silent. But rathore

Ra - tumhara ho gaya ho to hum chale

Arj just nod. Poor he still in shock.


All sit in SUV ariya in one

Chotu is driving n arjun is on codriver seat n riya Aisha n sakshi on middle seat

Ariya glancing at each other through mirror

Arj MV riya meri riya aaj hum akhir mil hi gaye .aamne samne aa hi gaye.
Par kitni badal gayi hai meri riyu. I just can't believe she is etf officer. Or what the hell riya mukharjee. Ab ye sab kya hai.pata to lagana hoga par kaise.ye log hume akela chod hi nahi rahe.

Ri MV I know arjun apke man mai kai sawal hai .Jo apki ankhe mujhse puch rahi hai. Mai bhi apse sab share karna chahti hu par kya karu waqt hi nahi mil raha.mujhe abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki acp arjun jise etf kya pure police department mai akdu khadus k naam se Jana jata hai wo mera arjun hai. Kaise tum itne badal gaye arjun

N she look in his eyes through mirror

Arj MV ha mai badal gaya hu bahut kuch batana hai tumhe .par tum bhi kitna badal gayi


Ri sigh

Ri MV haa arjun mai bhi badal gayi waqt ne sab badal diya.

Ariya mv but ek chiz nahi badli I still love you same even more

They are so engrossed in their thought n eye to eye convo that they don't know they reach crime scene

All shocked looking ever attentive cop like this so lost n riya is lost also

Aisha shake riya n Chotu fearly call arjun so both get alert n come in cop mode

Arjun pick his gun n tuck it in his belt on back Out in
his attitude.

Ri look at him amused

Ri n all follow him

sak mutter - ri kya hua khoyi khoyi hai.khadus ne aate hi daant diya Kya.

Ri MV kya danta wo bhi mere arjun ne mujhe.impossible. wo kya agar koi or mujhe unchi awaj mai bhi
kuch kahe to mera arjun bardash nahi karega. N she giggle at her own thought

All look at her weardly like ise kya hua lash dekh kar giggle kar rahi hai.but arjun smrik at this.of course he know he is the reason of his giggle. But no one see arjun smrik because all are watching riya with curiosity

Sh - ri kya hua has q rahi hai

Ri understand what blunder she did .she is lack of word but his hero his jaan come to her rescue

Ar - team apas mai bat ho gayi ho to kuch kam bhi kar le. N ye case hume hi solve karna hai sir.

Sam - mujhe bhi pata hai rawte jyada hoshiyari dikhane ki jarurat nahi.

Both glare each other

Riya arjun ki taraf dekhti hai or ankho se thanks kehti hai or arjun use ankh marta hai with smile.riya's mouth open in o shape ki wo sabke samne flirt kar raha hai.

No one but ved notice ri's last action i.e, uska mouth o mai khulan

Ved - kya hua riya are you ok.

Ri - yes. No.actully mai

Sam - riya mujhe lagta hai tumhe thodi der rest karna chahiye.tum jao or suv mai rest karo hum sab dekh lenge.

Riya dont oppose n leave for suv.bcoz use pata hai ye arjun ka asar hai agar wo nahi gayi to jarur pakdi jayegi.

Arjun smrik at her condition n his efect on her

Ar mv not bad arjun 10 sal bad bhi tera asar kam nahi hua ulta bad gaya hai.

Waise uska bhi jane ka man hai par wo nahi chahta koi kuch puche ya kisi ko kuch bhi pata chale qki use feel hua hai ki ri don't want to disclose so he also get silent.

Or WO apne kam mai lag jata hai.

Sabhi investigation karke aate hai .samjun kuch piche hai.idhar riya arjun k bare mai sochte sochte so gayi hai.

Sak - are ye to so gayi

CH - haa aaj bechari ka din or tabiyat dono thik nahi thi na.

All nod.

Are sabko lagta hai na ki ri ko arjun ne data hai or uski tabiyat bhi kharab hai.

Sh - are par ise uthana padega ye leti hui hai.

Ved - koi bat nahi mai ise utha kar piche lita deta hu .q bechari ko parshan karna.

Or wo jaise hi use god mai uthane wala hota hai

Tabhi

Ruko

Sab us taraf dekhte hai waha arjun with so much anger khada hai
( of course how dare ved to touch or pick his Jaan)

All look at him like ab inhe kya hua .

Sam is also shocked ki arjun aise q react kar raha hai.

Arjun aage aata hai or riya ke cheek par hath rakhkar use uthata hai.

Ar - riya riya utho


Ri - aa sone do na Jaan.kitne dino bad acchi neend aa rahi hai Jaan.

All get shocked n arjun is like ye kya bol diya isne

Ar - miss mukharji ye Jaan jaan kya laga rakha hai I am your senior.

He said little loud so that she can alert.

Riya wake up immediately.

Ri - k k kya hua.

Ar - aap duty par so gayi miss mukharjee or mujhe Jaan keh kar bula rahi thi

Ri mouth again open in o shape

Ar - now aap thik se baithengi so that hum etf ja saken.

Ri - yes arjun

All look at them

Ri - sir

Arjun is on driver seat. Ved is about to sit along side with ri.but

Ar - riya aage aakar baitho tumhari sari neend bhag jayegi.

He said rudely. He is glaring ri but actually that glare is for ved who is sitting ri's side

Ri silently getup n sit with arjun.

Scene shift

Etf office

All are in con .hall only samjun is in their cabin.n shree went to submit a file to arjun

Ai - you OK riya.

Ri smile brightly

Ri - yes I am fine now.

Sak - chal bata subah kya hua.

Ri remember her n arjun meeting n their hug .uski ankho mai ansu bhi ane lagte hai or wo blush bhi kar rahi hoti hai.

Li - ri roo mat arjun sir ki to aadat hai wo sabko dantte rehte hai. Tumhara first time hai na isiliye

Ch - haa jaldi hi tumhe us khadus k sath kam karne ki aadat pad jayegi.

Ved - haa riya plz don't cry. Hum sab hai tumhare sath.

Ri - no guys it's ok.its like

Tabhi

Arjun k cabin se awaj aati hai

Ar - ye sab kya hai shree had hoti hai laparwahi ki ye itna important point tumne miss kar diya .isi par puri
report based hai.

Sh - s ss sorry sir.mai abhi thik karke lata hu.

Ar - goo

Shree darte hue bahar aata hai or bahar aa kar chain ki sans leta hai.

Sak - dekha wo to aisa hi hai .tum tension mat lo dhere dhere sab samajh jaogi

Ri mv mai dhere dhere samjhungi. Mai to unhe unse bhi jyada samjhti hu. I know problem kya hai.par ab mai aa gayi hu na sab thik kar dungi. Hay mera khadus

But she utter khadus little loud n all hear her

Sh - sahi kaha ri khadus hi hai.dekho mujh jaisi nannhi si jaan ko dant diya .khadus kahi ka.

Tabhi

Wo khadus nahi tum looser ho. Itni galti kam mai karoge to daant to padegi hi. He is perfect just perfect to use kam bhi parfect chahiye samje you losser.

Sab udhar dekhte hai.waha soniya khadi hai.

Sabhi ko gussa aata hai how dare she talk like this. Par koi hai jiska gussa satve asman par pahuch chuka hai. Or use ab tak soniya ki arjun k liya kahi gayi batien uski praise yad aati hai or uska gussa or bad jata hai. Pehle to laga tha wo kisi or arjun ko praise or admire karti hai even lust bhi hai.par ab to pata chal gaya hai na ki wo usi k arjun uski jaan k piche gai.

Ri mv you soniya tumne galat jagah panga liya hai wo mera hai sirf mera.

Tbc..by ramya
Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update
Jealous Arjun is so cute
Love it
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Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb Update 👏
Loved it
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