OS- A Worthless Life Which Runs On Expectations (deleted )

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Diya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Sorry for this crap...
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I didn't intend to hurt anyone... but I guess I have... I m really sorry for this...

Edited by neerajanariya - 10 years ago

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rinku95

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Posted: 10 years ago

No words to describe it
Hats off
It brought tears in my eyes
Thanks for writing it
Thanks for pm

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0913155

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb😉😃loved it plz keep writing😉thank u for pm

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SATRISHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

ya u said right first half funny

bet second part heavy...

my bhauth sad feel karrahi hoon padke..

lekin final word WONDERFUL

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Gangaaaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

awww
thts sooo swt baby...
loved the way you wrote..
tu bahopt bahot bahot achi writer ho
keep it on

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Mishthi_Shivsai

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb OS.👏👏

Very powerful writing to justify the unique concept.😛

Totally liked it. Keep writing these offbits & its an earnest request.😊

Last part was so emotional but u depicted it so beautifully.😭👏

Expectations forms a platform of life but sometimes woh maut ka karan bhi ban jata hai. TRUE.

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Ishita

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Posted: 10 years ago

Its beautiful

I actually picture myself as navya

Bohot log mere roop ke baare mein bolte hai

Moti kaali ...hell even many times teachers joked about it

It was an embarassing time

Mere parents mujhse bohot expectations rakhte hai

I have also cried behind closed doors

Navya was lucky to atleast get two best friends

I have none outside IF

But one decision she took wrong

Suicide is permanent solution to a temporary problem

She should have fought

Prove them wrong by doing what she did best

I myself will do a course which i like not others

I try to excel in studies, my best hold, and their comment don't hurt just annoy

I will prove them wrong by being above them, better ,special ,even with how i look

Beauty is just skin deep. true beauty lies in your heart. Your brain is a greater gift than beauty.

These are my principles.

No offence but suicide is cowardice and i am not a coward.I am a fighter

Great story and inspirational

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Diya

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Posted: 10 years ago

Bubli I agree with you dear...
But is situation me aane k baad Navya ka kya haal hua ye maine dekha h... Maine dekha hai wo kitni buri tarah se toot gayi thi...
Hamesha har cheez me excel karne ki race me us ladki ne apna sab kuchh kho diya... apni hasi apni khushi... andar se wo khokhli ho gayi thi...
Aur hum sab k liye ye kehna bohot aasaan hai ki usne suicide jaisa kadam uthake bujhdili ka kaam kiya... par wo kitna dard jhelne ki koshish kar rahi hogi ye hum nahi samajh sakte... expectations ka bojh... lack of any trustworthy companion... hamesha dhokha milna... apna ek bhi decision na le paana... even koi hobbies tak nahi h us ladki ki... sab kuchh sirf expectations... aur pehle pyaar me hi dil toot gaya uska... usne zindagi bhar ladko se doori banayi thi... isi Dar se ki koi uska bachche se bhi jyada komal dil na tod de... lekin pyaar karke wo dil bhi toot gaya... In sab me jitna dard hota hai wo sirf wo hi samajh sakti h... to uske hisab se is zillat ki zindagi se to use azaadi mil gayi... sabke liye ye kehna asaan h ki jo log suicide attempt karte hai wo coward hote hai... but kya koi uske peechhe ki asli wajah se hue dard ko jaan sakta hai... nahi... mana ki ye galat tha... but wo 15 saal ki hi to thi... ek bachchi... Mere umr ki... Stuti kavu ya aur kai logo jitni badi hi to thi... uske paas kitna gam tha ye wo hi jaanti h... 15 saalo se jitna gam usne samet kar rakha tha wo bohot takleef de raha tha use... to wo thak gayi thi... har baar dard ko makeup aur fake smiles k peechhe chhupake ...
Suicide galat hai... but is case me hum Navya ko coward nahi keh sakte... kyunki usne 15 saalo tak apni ladai ladi... jhela sab kuchh... phir bhi sab ko khush karne ko koshish ki... par kya kisine uski khushi ki parwah ki... nahi... usne parents se ye sab chhupaya kyunki use lagta tha ki wo is duniya par bojh h... wo kisi ko hurt nahi karna chahti thi... wo ek masoom si bachchi thi jise is beraham duniya ne waqt se bohot pehle hi bada kar diya... she wasn't a coward... is case me sirf wo thak gayi thi is poori duniya se war ladte ladte... aur story me ye saaf saaf likha h ki use ye best friends bhi sirf 6 mahino pehle hi mile the... wo basically ek aisi ladki hai jise kabhi pyaar nahi mila... kisika bhi nahi... mai yaha uski life k baare me jyada nahi bata sakti... but itna mujhe pata h ki aaj bhi kai aisi Navya hain... jo ab bhi isi andhere me jee rahi hai... kya pata humare aas pass hi koi ho... to hume fat shaming to rokni padegi... wo bhi insaan hai... In fact golu molu bachche bohot hi cute n soft heart k hote h... same applies to teenagers...

I don't want to encourage suicide... its a crime... but in this story try to see what the main character has felt... ab bhi aisi kai Navya hain jo itne hi dard ko leke jee rahi hain... unki help karo... unhe zalil karna band karo... so what if they are curvy or fat... jo log fat logo ko chidate h... I want to say to them...
Kyu tumhare baap ka khate hain kya... nahi na... to keep ur bullsh*t limited to you... agar tumhari behen ya beti ya maa Navya ki jagah hoti to tumhe pata chalta ki kitna jhela tha usne...

Stop fat shaming... n please apne bachcho par bachpan se hi expectations ka bojh mat daliye... unhe bada hone dijiye... fir ye tay kijiye ki unhe kya banna h... unki pasand jaaniye aur us field me aage badne me unki help kijiye... kyunki... bhagwaan na kare lekin Navya ki jagah aapka beta ya beti bhi ho sakte the... unhe pyaar dijiye... ek burden nahi...

Ok so I think it's enough...