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anitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

nice start
can not wait for the first part

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@ Anitasharma : Thank you!

@ Angel_Arya : Thank you :)

@ angle1shanu : Hello there, thank you for your comment :)

@ MINU : Thank you so much for your comment! In fact I always look forward to it! Trust me, child marriage is indeed very painful and maddeningly present in the northern regions of India! Yeah, I have gone through several such stories to stem up with this. But then as you'll read you'll realise why are Arjun and Sakshi different from them all. It isn't exactly the scenario of a stereotypical child wedding :) Hope you'll like it!

@ Sairam175 : Thank you so so so much dear!

@ Butterfly : Please! Don't thank me, you kind of inspire me 😳 You know that na titaliya! Eesh, please... I have done a terrible job in describing Rajasthan! In this chapter you'll barely find any description of the place :( Only the emotions *hiding face* Oh you think marriage started when she was Piu's age - get ready for surprise! Haha! I know I have devoured the books of Ray Babu! I am glad you love the title! Arjun will get bad with chapters so don't murder me ok! Love you :* - Strawberry

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@ swara85 - yeah.. I know *hides face* well.. Arjun can't always be the hero can he? But stay tuned... the changes will be slow but evident! 😳

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

KATHPUTLI

CHAPTER 1 A

CLICK HERE FOR CHAPTER 1 A & B

A/N:

So you all must have guessed that this is a filler update. Most of you would argue that Arjun shoud've been more brutal or etc, or even more older than Sakshi.

Well firstly this is a fiction so do take it with a pinch of salt and secondly, there is a completely different reason why Arjun is of similar age. Thirdly, Arjun's and Sakshi's dynamics have been completely different out here. If you notice the other couples such as Sakshi's parents [ Ratna and Kailash ] or her brother and sister in law [ Aasha and Baldev ] you'll realise that they are the usual side effects of child marriage.

So yeah, hope this answers all your queries! Also... hope you know what's coming next! Looking forward to your views... also, Rajasthani's, please exempt me for my poor tone of trying to hold on to the dialect!

Well this work is solely mine so do respect it and appreciate it like a true reader. Thank you

CHAPTER 2

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0913155

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Totally agree wit ur note at the last😃😉 awesome long amazing update plz continue soon thanx for pm

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Shivani P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Goddd...Arjun...ko..kya se kya bana diya tumne...Don't wry...i won't beat u...but i can't give u any guarantee that i won't murder Arjun for treating saks like that...I hate his brother n her father...Good Man...huh...from which angle...I feel like kicking his ass (arjun's) out n say..."Its just a kick...n...you deserve it...is baat ka batangad na banana"...I feel disgusting having the thoughts of his so called suhagraat...God save Sakshi...*sobs sobs*... Btw Well Written..n...Described... Update Soon..

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

The banner was a coruscating product of wit.So vibrant and beautiful.The patriarch dominance is as clear as crystal.There is not an iota of doubt in it.As you had stated earlier the dynamics of lead characters are something which is a matter of intense interest.The update showed the growing years from innocence to devil as depicted in most of Ismat Chugtai's stories.It made me nostalgic even remembering the complete confused and oblivion stages of growing up.Well at one point I think you got it wrong factually.Aasha is jethani ji of Sakshi not bhabisa.So she can call Aasha 'jiji'.😊

The writing was the ethnic style of story telling.The form and style are delivered in the best form and manner.👏

Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
The banner was a coruscating product of wit.So vibrant and beautiful.The patriarch dominance is as clear as crystal.There is not an iota of doubt in it.As you had stated earlier the dynamics of lead characters are something which is a matter of intense interest.The update showed the growing years from innocence to devil as depicted in most of Ismat Chugtai's stories.It made me nostalgic even remembering the complete confused and oblivion stages of growing up.Well at one point I think you got it wrong factually.Aasha is jethani ji of Sakshi not bhabisa.So she can call Aasha 'jiji'.😊
The writing was the ethnic style of story telling.The form and style are delivered in the best form and manner.👏
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊

will reply completely later! thanks for the jiji bit! corrected that