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Seharish Fatima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

di u forgot to add me in your pm list 😭

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: SeharishFatima
di u forgot to add me in your pm list 😭

PM only to those who comment. Maine note likha tha na, jo comment karega, ussi ko PM milega :)

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Beautifully written. The confusion of Sakshi and her innocence were captured very nicely. Continue soon please.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Beautiful banner, specially the 'Kathputli' one!👏

Awesome start dear

loved it

Arjun was too eager to meet his wife, I loved his character, he is a sweet boy! Their first meet was too cute! "Rajkumar" n "Gudiya", seems like a fairy tale!😳 He loves his wife so much! He cares for her too! He is also possessive about her, doesn't allow her to go out! He hurts her, n then heals her!👏

Story behind Sakshi's name is nice! She's really a doll! So sweet-innocent! She just wants to be with her "Rajkumar" but doesn't like when he hurts her!

His mom keeps taunting! Poor girl, she can't even go out of her house! She likes to study, it's good that Arjun lets her read his books at least!😊 Their relation is beautifully portrayed, as friends of course! Her innocent, child-like talks, questions are beautifully written! She still needs to know many things!

She feels herself nothing but a "Kathputli"!

Beautifully written!

You're trying your best with the accent, it will improve as you keep writing! Good job dear!😊

Thanks for pm

do continu soon

Loads of Love,

You know 😉😛!

Edited by Godly_Affection - 9 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Beautifully written
Loved their from innocent child to teenagers
Atjun love his wife care for her but also hurt her
I hate his brother n now Arjun is following his elders
Sakshi's innocence her confusion u described nicely
She is indeed nothing but a Kathputli
Continue Soon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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priyal.

@jheel11

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hi
Awesome update...
Though arjun is in negative role in your story but I think so it is necessary for him to be negative for some time in the story...
I really hope sakshi's love change arjun...
Loved the story it is very different and interesting...
Cont soon...

Edited by priyal. - 9 years ago

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sairam175

@sairam175

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Awesome parts

Arjun and sakshi childhood is cute

There talks r superb

Sakshi father and arjun family r really bad

What happens to Arjun he is become rude

Wow well written everything

Con soon

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Strawberryy!!🤗

Sorry it took me so long.. have been a little caught up!

Anyway.. coming back to the chapter.. I feel weird. Of course you blew me away with your writing (although Jatishwar still remains my favourite - being honest here).. but this one is something completely different!

I must say, it takes a lot to pen down these kinda feelings coz it isn't a usual kinda love story.. it is so much more complicated and heart-rending in a way... obviously Sakshi. Because she's just a little girl and for her, all this must be very daunting... of course I must admit to myself with a heavy heart that it all still happens in india despite of all the awareness ... but maybe one day there will be no more child-marriages...

Oh well...

I got shivers reading about Kailash and Ratna.. and also Aasha... god.

Anyway, I feel a little speechless right now.. maybe it's realising that this is reality somewhere in this world.. and it isn't fair for the girls who are merely children when they are married..

You are doing a fantastic job with this one re.. I am so proud of you🤗

Pardon me for the speechlessness.. really!

Love u ❤️

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

first let me congratulate u for writting such nice marwadi (rajisthani language)👏
how aptly u wrote the whole turmoil of a kid when she is married of at such tender age
how she is confused with the turn of events
Here how sakshi is sometimes confused and some times hurt by changing of arjun's behaviour towards her how he was so caring and such a nice friend to her initially and how gradually his behaviour changes how he could not see her in pain and now how he himself slap her bruise her and doesn't feel it is wrong
and as they r growing how arjun's way of looking at her makes her uncomfortable
and the latest events in her life has left her baffled
it's so heartbreaking to think that this what so many women girls go through daily in there life
thanks for pm

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: 0913155
Totally agree wit ur note at the last😃😉 awesome long amazing update plz continue soon thanx for pm

Thank you so much! Sure shall continue soon!

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
Goddd...Arjun...ko..kya se kya bana diya tumne...Don't wry...i won't beat u...but i can't give u any guarantee that i won't murder Arjun for treating saks like that...I hate his brother n her father...Good Man...huh...from which angle...I feel like kicking his ass (arjun's) out n say..."Its just a kick...n...you deserve it...is baat ka batangad na banana"...I feel disgusting having the thoughts of his so called suhagraat...God save Sakshi...*sobs sobs*... Btw Well Written..n...Described... Update Soon..

Ah... this is the bitter truth... unfortunately...

In fact Arjun is waaay better than other people.

Glad you loved the update.

Yeah... viewer discretion for the next chapter!