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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

How Ironical!! This was my first reaction after coming back from the swimming pool of updates.And the note for viewers made me feel the situational irony more vividly than I had ever read in other works.The non adults are doing things censored for adults...😲 This shows how contradictory and paradoxical our societal norms are.While chapter 2 brought herald of hopes chapter 3 filled with disgusts of despair.And the last line summarised it all.The banners act as the fairy lights for update.One look at the banner(s) and I can't stop myself from plunging into the update then and there.😃😊😊

Awaiting with hopes that somewhere in nearest future there will be a gleam of sunshine in lives of each of characters..😊

Thanks for the pm and keep writing.Keep Smiling.😊

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Awesome update dear

Loved it

Pardesi, perfect title! Beautiful banner!👏

Aasha's veil wasn't pulled n her husband gave her tough time for it! She is a loyal wife! Her words were aptly chosen!👏 "Aurat ko izzat di to bhi uski galti, li to bhi ussi ki galti" very true!!👍🏼

Sameer's entry was beautifully written!😊 Prince.. Mirza ghode pe sawar hoke aaya.. ahh.. nahi, lekin heroine ko phir bhi bacha liya!😆 "Never mind.. fifth first love he lost" 🤣oh dear, poor Sam, itni na-insaafi uske sath?🥺 kyu? Aisha?😉 really! hope he doesn't lose the sixth love!🤣

"Blind", ah what to say about that chapter?☺️ Banner is too beautiful!🤗

"Blind.. ..himself" this line stole the update!😃

Sakshi's innocence was nicely portrayed when she talked with her gudda-guddi!😳 too cute!❤️ Poor girl didn't know what was going to happen with her!😔 This was a nightmare for her, an experience of lifetime!😭 He betrayed her trust, her love! 🥺

The red bit was too intense, but written perfectly! 👍🏼👏

The flashback was sweet, the innocence of their relation is no more present, it has taken a turn, a point where there is no friendship!😒

Arjun feels complete, n happy, but little is he aware of the pain he's given her! He hurt her, but doesn't know about it!😒

what next?? no precap?🤔

do continu soon

thanks for pm😃

Loads of Love,

You know.. 😉😛

p.s. - from where do you get those beautiful images? They are fantasic!❤️

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Hi Di !!

Long time !

Lovely banner ! I always love your banners !

The only thing i can say about the prologue is that the title of the prologue and the content matched thoroughly ! It was really unexpected.. i thought that the guys who'd be making the film was Arjun and his wife S was Sakshi.. but nope! it was Robert and Samantha and the child bride and groom was Sakshi and Arjun ..

Part 1A

Arjun ! Such a cute and innocent soul !! He might probably not even know what child marriage is or even the concept of marriage..

true soulmates !

Huh! the grim realities faced by sakshi's mum, totally clueless of what happened with her when it did..

How Rude of kailash to treat his wife like that , hurting her, when she only wants to wait for sometime before they get married.. these Patriarchs!

Such cute talks between arjun and Ratna.. Heart melting..

Aww! Arjun is so protective of his little doll !!

But Patriarchy is eating him up too..😭 How can he shout at Sakshi like that !!!!😭 So heart breaking to even read it .. And even the Dear ladies in the household are treated like Sh**..😡😲

Part 1 B

😡

Bahar jane ke liye Ek slap !😭

Koi aur chue toh nahi chalega aur woh thappad mare to beshak chalega! Sorry but is Arjun's character Bipolar or something!? like i mean there must be some term to define this kind of behavior na?

Sadly... With time and age people change and so does their behavior..Same is with Arjun..

My My ! so eagerness in them to get their first grandson !! 😡

Ooo now a grown up Sakshi and Arjun .. His love for her is possessive, isn't it?? Like somewhat .. or perhaps it has changed in these growing years...

Really beautiful description of how sakshi is the centre of his life ..

So finally Sakshi is .. mature.. like how the doc said..

Aww ! fearful and confused Sakshi.

True.. she was nothing but a kathputli who was being handled as well as mistreated to an extent..

Chap 2

Argh! disgusting guys baldev is !

Oww! is their love brewing between them?😳

Awesome !!😃

*Facepalm* Sameer !!!!😆😆 so thats probably Ayesha !!😆😆 oh gawdd !!

Chap 3

confused sakshi !😕

Nothing to say .. Speechless..

😭😭

Really he is blind.. Such an irony !!

But, Awesome story !

Eager to read more!!

pls add me in pm list..

Cont soon !!

P.S. sorry i am too late in Commenting .. Will also see ur other works that i have missed and comment on them too ..

😃

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai
super duper update deat.

thanks

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome part
Sameer entry is nice
Feeling bad for asha
Sakshi is totally confused
Omg arjun did all this to sakshi
Con soon

Thanks for ur comment dear :)

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
I'm speechless too!!
I can only say it was wonderfully written n beautifully expressed!!
Will give a detailed comment later!

Aww, thanks a ton dear Neha... means a lot!

Originally posted by: 0913155
Suberb update feelingsn really sad for saakshi😭wmotinal update loved it plz continue soon

Thanks dear

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: .KupKakes
Shree, I am speechless. This was just amazing. Chapter 2 was very interesting indeed, and I'm waiting to know what happens to that storyline. It's a novel idea, and with loads of potential, that I am sure you will do justice to. Chapter 3... well unbelievable. Your storytelling skills shone through most brilliantly and you actually took me through Sakshi's pain. I did feel deeply for her. The red bits are quite perfect, so don't worry at all. And I completely understand why it was emotionally exhausting. Even reading was an emotional upheaval so I can just imagine what writing would have been like. But stay assured that it was all worth it. Your final product is quite amazing! So great work, and I'm waiting for the next update!

Arrey thank you for such a wonderful comment! It means a lottt to me, phew trust me the red bits kind of killed me. Correct, you perfectly understand what went through in penning this down! Thank God! I mean thank you so much for your comment... it means bucket lots to me! <3 Love you yaar!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
oh so that man on terrace was kuwar sa and he is sammer
and this female is aisha but she is already married here
what sakshi had to go through was real heartbreaking 😭😭
arjun is not bad from heart but jaise mahol main woh rehta hain uska asar hain
he do loves his sakshi to very much but he still couldn't understand that what he is doing to her is hurting her sooo much breaking her from within
i just hope that sameer befriends arjun and try to make him understand
and also sakshi's state make arjun realize that now is not the correct time
thanks for pm 😊

Thank you so much dear... yes that man was Sameer. Unfortunately this is the reality of many women and in fact it's much more brutal. :( True for Arjun. Well what will be Sameer's role over here will be revealed in later chapters 😳 Thanks for ur comment Shefu dear 🤗

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
Too emotional to say anything... First update...was..awesome... Second update...i don't know what to say...

Thanks a ton dear, I completely understand.

Originally posted by: angelicdeepti
Dont know what to say... very emotional updates...
Continue soon

Thank you so much dear

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Angel_Arya
Speechless...an apt word chosen by you only
even I would use the same word.

Sameer's entry was very good.
I never expected this...
But the surprise was amazing 😃
Beautifully written
The words you chose...wonderful
loved the way you described Sakshi's emotions
One would definitely sympathise with Sakshi
But Arjun didn't feel that he was doing anything wrong
He felt that he was just expressing his love and Sakshi
would be happy with that.
Was he at fault that he didn't realise he was
himself hurting her?
Too blind to understand what is right,what is wrong

Well will love to read the coming parts😊
Hope to get some more surprises😆
Do conti soon
And I didn't receive any pm 😔

Glad I could surprise you with Sam's entry! You exactly grasped what's going through Arjun's mind... there's a lot of emotions running through right now. Sorry, will defo send PM this time :) Thank you for your lovely comment 😳

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
It was Wonderfully written
Sameer's entry was Supperbbb didn't expect but Loved It
Loved the way you portrayed Sakshi's emotions her confusion her fear n her pain every bit you described so well
Arjun didn't realize he himself hurting her
Hope Sakshi's love will change him
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

Glad you loved the chapter dear! Stay tuned for what's coming next 😳