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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

I loved their message conversation.
Piya getting jealous and her reacting on "that" girl..😆mast tha.!
I loved Siddie's pov when they were at that Quila..The whole para there was too good.👍🏼
The changes they felt, jealousy, shyness,nervousness, confusions everything.. It was all brought out well..Beautifully written.👏
I simply loved Piya-Siddie moments..and also Rain..
And the last question was cherry on the cake..I wonder what will Sakshi say and more How Arjun reacts on it, if that is he gets to know.😆
It was feel-good update. Had a smile on my face throughout..Thank You for that.
Next part mein Pari's part too..please.!
This story is simple but its very effective and has its own charm, Also I must say Ritu's magic yaha pe bhi dikh raha hai..
Kya kahu re..as always it was beautiful.🤗
Thanks for pm..and sorry for being late (as always, which won't change..😆)

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Heyloo!🤗

It took me forever to come here and post this.

So sorry for not replying individually.. but a huuuge thank u for leaving the comments.🤗

I cannot explain how difficult it was to write this particular chapter (or maybe I am facing difficulties in writing in general😕) anyway, I've finally managed to pen something down. Hoping that you will like it 😳

Arakshi have been missing for a while, sooo this chapter is mostly about them (that's not the only reason.. I feel like this was a much needed part). But of course, it's incomplete without Siddie and Piya😉 and little Pari (I know she was missed too)

Just remember, the story spells simplicity. So be it😆

Hope u like reading this😃

Chapter 7 - The Thing called Love

.. is at the blog😃

Do leave your comments if you can🤗

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

unres
awww it was cute update understanding mom overprotective dad 😃
and mom's effect on dad 😉
it's so true na thta girl can share everything with her mom even here piya talked to her mom inspite of the fact that she was more closer to her dad
well dad's r always like this overprotective ye toh accha hain ki it's siddie and arjun knows him koi aur hota toh encounter main mara jata bechara 😆😆
loved arakshi on the beach 😳
awww piya is teasing siddie poor guy 😉
thanks for pm

Edited by sisodia_shefali - 9 years ago

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Rituuu 🤗🤗

it was one of the cutest chapter of your stories.

The possessive protective caring and sweetest father was shouting his head off because his daughter is falling in love😆

then calming down after realising he already know about it 😃

"i don't like the fact that i am old"... this was sooo cute ❤️

the whole sea-beach scene... the waves... it was beautiful.

very very very nicely written Ritu.

loved it totally 👍🏼

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Beautiful update. Please continue soon.

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Awwwsssmmm Update Di
Loved It to the core
Piya's questions make Sakshi lost in her Beautiful Memory Lane
Arakshi first met was Supperbbb
The protective father took over but then he realized that it was meant to be
Loved Arakshi beach moments Sooo Sooo Cute n Romantic
piya-Siddie both feeling same
Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Well Papas are possessive.Proved

Mums get nostalgic.Proved

Brain stops functioning logically.Proved

Stories get a newer and added charm.Proved

Key facts of MOST CUTE,SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER 7.

Simple lines without much complex emotions makes this story all the more close to heart👏.As they say''We were having fun,little did we know we were making memories'.Same applies here.loved the equilibrium between 2 generations which is well executed and illustrated.Awaiting to see how the relations will take turns with forthcoming chapters.😊

Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.

Happy Durga Puja.😊

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

unres on page 15 😊

wish u a very happy durga puja ritu 😃

Edited by sisodia_shefali - 9 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Awesome update...

Sakshi was remembering her days as well as her mother side was getting worried for her daughter...😃😃😃

Arakshi understanding is 👏👏👏

Pari is so adorable...

Arjun's reaction was expected...😆😆😆

But he too know well Siddharth will never leave Piya...😃😃😃

Siddie-Piya dono ek dusre bohat jyada ache se jante hai...😃😃😃

Last mein bechare Siddie ka dil tut hi gaya almost...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Part 1

Amazing update dear. I know I m way behind the updates but I'll try to keep up

Arjun aur gussa😆😆😆 Ye toh koi nayi baat nahi hain. Sakshi bhi uske gusse ko shaant nahi karsakti par little Pari😆😆😆 She is too cute aur itne cute se Pari itne pyaar se bole toh Arjun Rawte bhi shaant hojaayega

Piye aur Sid ke conversation was too good. They r really best friends

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