Originally posted by: skrafty
Reswa😉
Unres
YAY!!!!!!
Me first...
Again😆
Awesome update
Loved it
Really beautiful
Pia - Siddie moments were lovely
I really adore their friendship
So things have started changing between pia and siddie
And Siddie is scared
Well that's natural when u start feeling for your bestie
Let's see what happens next
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
Thanks sooo much Shravani.. hope u are settling well into college😃
Yep of course.. there's always a fear of losing the friendship
Hope u like the next chapter
Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It
Wonderfully Written
Piya-Siddie moments were Sooo Sweet n Beautiful
Both feeling something is changed
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
Thanks so much Nikii.. hope u like the next one😃
Originally posted by: kunchu
The update was as lovely as usual
Their change in relation is subtle yet so deep
But what I loved the most was the way you put it into the words
Such a cute was of showing the change with the silence
Loved it Ri
Ahh thank youuu KK.. it really means a lott.. hope u like the next one😳
Originally posted by: IArmageddonI
Dear Ritzy,
Yaar main kaha se shuru karu aur kaha pe khatam!
Piya and Siddie have been such believable characters and I truly love them so much! You so do know that how much these characters mean for me!
I have no words to appreciate the flow of this story, I mean what do you want me to say? Either the ghisa pita awesome fantastic amazing loved it!
But your story is way above such words. Indeed you are simplicity at it's best.
Haha, Siddie fearing Arjun always seems epic! God knows ladki ka haath kaise puchega? Tab toh papa ko hi frontline pe aana padega!
Haha, I have gone too far in thinking! Honestly speaking these guys are fantastic. All of them. I can't love my cherubic little Pari enough.. though I feel a weeny bit sad on thinking that Piya did miss out such a love... I mean lol, it's stupid for me to even think such but then I feel so this for Piya...
Trust me I am getting too deep into the story. I so wanted to see her parent's fret more over here cause she's the older one and she has seen most... probably it would be interesting one day when Piya would tell Pari about her parents!
Siddie is a rock, boy I love this fella!
He's Sameer in Ayesha's personality! 😆 Any day...
And now coming back to Siya in the making...
*sigh* the slight changes and feelings are wonderful, hope they don't fall into the cliched run away from love track... it's just too wonderful now...
You know dosti se zyada, pyaar se kam phase 😳
Update soon 😳
P.S : Finally I commented 😆
Dearesttt Strawberrryy
I am so happy to see you here.. I have missed u here so much.. really. You're one of my biggest sources of motivation.. seriously.
Anyway
Aww.. yeah I know .. I think you connect with these characters because of a reason we know too well 😉 basss main bhaaaging now😆
No wait.. hehehee
eeesh thank u.. this story IS all about the simplicity.. it feels real.. at least for me.
Hahhaa wo toh hai... just wait until they get back to Mumbai and he has to face hotwa🤣
Aww.. na na ... she'll come back soon na😳
Yup deffo.. maybe in the epilogue for this.. Pari shall be a little older then 😳
Hahhaa that truly defines Siddie😃
Of coursee.. and no i dont think i will let them enter that phase.. you'll know from the next chap😉
Love u for commenting.. means a lot re
Loaaads of love🤗
Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
gosh i was just waiting for this siddie realizing his changed feelings for piya 😃
and here comes a new love story which is stronger then previous one 😉
after all it started from the craddle 😉😃
finally he knows his heart but what abt piya does she still knows i mean abt her own feelings
waise after these two nutheads know abt there own feelings and all i am just thinking what will be the reaction of arjun 😈
by the way did u post pics of piya and siddie 🤔
thanks for pm
Hehe thanks soo much... I do hope I can keep this up😳
Hahahhaahaaa wo toh dekhti jao.. Hopefully I can write it down🤣
Yeah it was in the PM banner ... havent made one for this one.
Originally posted by: Areesha566
Rituuu *hugs*
Finally an update from you 😊
As always your work had left me in awe
I seariously love it
Equations are changing between pidhart😊
Siddhart is scared from the new feelings he's going through
Well that's natural
Lets see what destiny has stored for the two of them 😊
Thanks for pm
Update soon ritz
Waiting
Aww thanks so much Areesha.. 😳 I am glad u like them so much.. and really thanks a lot for leaving a comment.. it means loads😃
Of course.. hope u like the next chapter!
Originally posted by: Snehajain
Firstly I missed Pari a lot...
Awesome update...
Siddie always held Piya's hand while crossing hand...😃😃😃...& Piya like this...😃😃😃
Book shop...😃😃😃...I don't know how people read a book of 300 Pages in 2 hours.....my friend do & she bore me a lot bcoz of this...
Venice...mujhe bhi jana hai...😆😆😆
Siddie imaging themselves in photographs...😉😉😉
Siddie bargaining...😆😆😆
They both are thinking in same direction...😆😆😆...Both don't want to think of those weird thoughts..😆😆😆
Liked simple update...😃😃😃
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Awww.. wait for one more chapter for Pari's return😳
Hahaha me neither.. I am a very slow reader😛
Thank youuu.. glad u like the simplicity😳
Originally posted by: fly.high
Sorry Sparks... for commenting here so late...
caught up too much in work.
thanks for dedicating this one to me...u say I love them...no. you're wrong...
I just don't love them...I live them...
and the most strange thing is I am not just like piya or just like Siddie...I am like both of them ...or may be I was like them...
And I have told u before...they remind me of someone...I live my memories through them...through Ur story .
well the update...
I've been to Delhi only once...but I loved the metro... really the Delhi metro has a certain charm to it...
And then...you mentioned IT.
Crossword.
No its not just a place...its a world within for all bookworms like us.
not only the crossword in that case...Any bookstore feels like an altogether different world to me. The smell of old or new books...those white pages and the best part...the smell of pages...
Heaven! this is the word I utter every time I enter in a book store...
My favourite part of the update was...when siddie and piya sit down on the floor and go through the book...
reminded me of a similar event...
Me and my brother had gone to crossword...and we both picked the same book...
And the Mountains Echoed by Khaled Hosseini
we scooped up the book went to a corner. and sat there discussing the book...the writer...his notable books...and many such things...
Siddie...uff...I m falling for this guy...or may b I've already fallen for him...
he'll know soon what he is feeling...
The cupid struck and the thing starts...
continue soon ritu
love
Birdie
PS: wonder when the cupid will find me in this big bad world :D
Hey Birdiee.. that's okaay😳
Wow... that meant a lot.. I dunno what you'll say in the next chapter but I shall be eagerly waiting for your comments.. it is for u😳
Ahhh I KNOW! It is a must to visit that shop every time I go to delhi.. and my bestie loves books too so we often end up book-shopping together😃 I miss it now...
Sigh
Anyway.. it is heaven!
Aww... I loved that book btw.. but not as much as kite runner.
Thanks soo much for the comment🤗
Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
''If I had to choose my best day and finest hour,its always with you''
The update simply brought smiles and memories of feeling and falling in love..:) the fuzzy feeling of sudden possessiveness,exaggerated consciousness and awkwardness and sense of isolation without the special one is simply worth noting.I hope we get to see Sid confessing the puzzling emotions on the pages of the personal diary.😳
The simplicity of update adds a grandeur effect.the lines are simple yet elegant and strikes the right chord.
hoping to see the magic of love in both our adorable kidults' lives.😃
thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊
That quote is really nice😳
True.. hmm interesting idea.. maybe someday I shall write it😳
Glad u are loving the simplicity of the story.. thanks soo much for the comment!🤗
Originally posted by: Swara85
OMG Ritu..🤗I was having a slight smile while reading and suddenly it became wider..and I was like back to dreaming..At 2 points..one I'll tell u later and second was
CROSSWORD.. ❤️ I'm feeling to buy more books now..*dreamy* and books ki smell..umm..sach mein re you took me into the book world again. That reminds me I m in for book shopping soon..
Sorry off-track ho gyi..🤪
Awww.! so cute..small piya and siddie in bookstore..I wish I could give this little Piya a hug..use nahi toh tumhe deti hun.🤗
I Loved every bit of this chapter..😳And a big applause for you to write this so beautifully convincing.👏 I had said it earlier in other story too that you bring out the slightest feelings too in a crystal clear manner, which most of the times leaves me in a different state altogether.
I feel this was one of your best written chap amongst soo soo many of chaps of different stories too..
Well done Ritu..👍🏼! *pats ur back* Loved it.
Thanks for pm..write soonish..
Swaraa🤗
Aww.. glad I made u smile then😃
hahahaha u must go book-shopping! I am tempted to go soon too lol
Even though I just bought a few😛
Eeesh really? That means a lot...😳😳😳 I hope u like the next chapter tooo!
Thanks soo much again🤗
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