Arakshi SS - Phir Le Aya Dil - Last chapter & Epilogue 03/07 - Page 13

thank god u have been u have been released from ur kidnappers 😆
just kidding so happy to see u after like ages
this is just for seeing u back will comment on story later once i read it fully

Akdu papa

Awwwsssmmm Chapters
Loved It so much
Superbbb
Arjun's POV was Beautifully Written
Awww bechra Siddie over protective father is killing him lol
Loved the way you portrayed Piya-Siddie relationship teasing each other their cute little fights ohh Sooo Adorable each n every emotion was perfectly penned down
Awww that beach wala moment first kiss hayeee Sooo Cute
Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

It felt sooo good to read again siddie and piyu their relation is same but still something has changed between them 😳 or rather some thing more has added in their relation love of different kind ❤️
as far as sakshi and arjun r concerned their reactions r apt but sakshi being a mom and a girl can understand better or rather accept better but as far as arjun is concerned he is just like any other dad for whom any guy even the best one is never good enough for their daughters and it's impossible for them to accept their babies going to other man
and so arjun is giving poor kids such a hard time 😆😆
specially siddie
but all siddie needs to do is make arjun understand that what he feels for piyu is real and he would never hurt her 😊
thanks for pm

loved the characterisation of Arjun
this is how he is, protective
siddie,piya and their new relation
adorable
loved both updates
will be waiting for next

Well the chapters were striking to the core.😊The home coming was something which every child can relate to.The sequence of events in linear progression makes the story all the more close to heart and mind.The teases and excuses to bicker are something which every one love at the early phases of 'in love' before the malicious world and society cast their ugly shadows.The description of every emotion and presentation in point of view narrative style makes the characters look real and easily relatable.The chunks of father -daughter relation,mother-daughter bonding and plight of boy between amidst the myriad bondings and responsibilities makes the story ennobled.The dialogues are apt to situation and are witty and comically relief.Each character have their quota of space and unique stances to make a mark in the lucid and fluid story telling👏👏.Awaiting to learn the aftermath of last intense scene eagerly.Hoping for the forthcoming update soon.

Originally posted by: skrafty

Reswa😉

Unres...

Awesome updates

Loved them

Arjun the over protective father

Bechara Siddie

Sam and Aisha seem surprisingly cool about this

Piya and Siddie are really a cute couple

Arjun ne dono ko pakadliya

Ab kya hoga??

Interesting

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Aright, now guess who is back!

So...

My Gosh... Phir Le Aaya Dil... *am I not swooning in love for this...*

And this update...

It killed me, literally keeellleeed me man, big time!

So, going back to nostalgia (I know this sentence is framed weirdly) let me warn that below is a super long long pending comment for your oh so fantabulous chapters ok. And let me tell you that you have the biggest blame out here - every time you leave me speechless after an update and this mortal ends up feeling way too lowly to be able to comment on what thou has written.

I am serious! I literally bow down to you for fleshing such amazing emotions... really!

If you didn't see any of the amazing gifs I posted, just know that IF swallowed them!

Now, finally coming to some sort of sensible commenting for Chapter 8 - Homecoming... and trust me I am going to analyze PLAD really seriously and critically.

Yeah, that seriously...

So coming to Homecoming - this was a wonderful chapter and in fact started off with the fuzzy yet warm feeling of blossoming love. Wait, so Piu is 20 now :O... okay, she is a big girl... just like that day she was eight, fourteen, sixteen *sigh*. Ah, Siddie can always predict what his Chuhiya does and it's so adorable.

I honestly so love the hate love tease relationship they are sharing at the moment. It's spicy yet sweet... and an extra "something" when it comes to define such a relationship! Siddie's gentle yet pronounced actions on her seem much more important than hinted, the sudden holding of shoulders, wrists which subtly let out that she's his.

Even if he doesn't think to that extent at this moment - it just makes the entire situation all the more full of anticipation!

Hehe... yes. And I totally loved penning all that down. These two have become so special to me *sigh*. It was hard letting them go.

Oh God, this is such a lovely thing you pointed out and too damn realistic! Piya getting lost slightly as she watches her and Siddie's names together - this is such an early love thing... brilliant. And of course the hug.

Thank you!! :)

Honestly I really love the way they are un/intentionally taking baby steps towards each other and pausing to savor every moment extended - it speaks a thousand words... literally.

"how everything he had just uttered while teasing me, was actually true."

this sentence took it all, I swear. The impact of this statement is more profound than hinted, really. There's always this undeniable goofy smile on my face whenever I read their interactions - and that's a wonderful thing, simply a wonderful thing.

Eeesh... all this means a lot to me. I am glad it got through. Hayee.. it's beautiful to fall in love.

Haha, momma calling a billion times to make sure her child is safe in the flight is so so so so sooo true man! Happens to me every time and even if I act annoyed, I honestly love the care and attention of being the "princess", really! Damn, was that slight jealousy? Of Siddie glaring at Piya due to the little attention she got from the male attendant?

Hahahaa yes.. My Maa does that all the time, especially when I'm travelling alone. I'm sure when I am 40, she'd still be doing it. Mothers :)

And yes, of course!

P.S - Male flight attendants are usually rather cute lol (or is it just the uniform? I won't start about pilots *thud*).

One of the best things in this update - apart from Piya and Siddie has to be Arjun. Really, I like that guy much more than Sakshi in this story.

I know, I rather like him more as well. In fact, I think he was my favourite to pen down in this story (including PM).

You've painted him like a wonderful lion! Protective, caring, concerned and above all - someone who easily doesn't let his daughter slip away. I was worried if you would have forgotten the importance of their relationship while focusing on SiYa but I can't tell you how overjoyed to see that you've kept that bond special and alive.

Thank you sooo much again, Strawbs!

There is honestly something in Arjun and Piya, this father and daughter duo were once the best friends for each other... and just like Arjun, I am beginning to sense the vacuum of Piya in Arjun's life. Our little Piya was everything Arjun had and if not for her Arjun would have lost everything. It's so painfully natural to see the slight suffocation and irritation in Arjun on seeing Piya give her primary importance to somebody else.

Even if it's the boy whom he trusts the most.

Having lost his wife in between for an agonizing number of years, it is much more natural to note why Arjun simply doesn't want to let go of his daughter. Sakshi is his wife, his lover and his soulmate but Piya is his strength and his reason to live. More than just a father's love and concern... it is so natural to note Arjun's fear on not having Piya as the dependable one anymore.

And to a certain extent... his fears are true.

I know.. these two have got each other through the worst.. so their relationship goes a little stronger than the usual father-daughter relationship.

Piya definitely loves her family the most but one can easily note that the first most important person in her life is not her father, not anymore. And it's not a bad thing... it happens with time. For Piya the first, now, is Siddie followed by Pari and then her dad and mom. And this is not at all a negative thing. Even internally she might refuse staunchly that her family, especially her dad comes first. But we all know that her actions speak others.

And actions speak louder than words.

While Piya reels in the new blossoming love with Siddie and Arjun feels sidelined, it's wonderful to see Sakshi rising as the one who binds the family once again. It may not be a great topic of discussion but it's true... another woman in a son's life or another man in a daughter's life often develops cracks and distances under the surface. It's never visible but it's present.

And that's a painful truth.

I agree.. no matter what she says, she will drift away a little from her parents and create a world of her own. It always happens.

Piya spending her time with her Papa serves as nostalgia and a soft reaffirmation that her dad is everything but it does look like nothing but a loving consolation to her dad. When the say a girl is not of her own family - it's not to evoke feminists or regard that a girl has to leave home... at times her own heart and mind are uprooted from the very family which created her, nurtured her.

And being the woman Sakshi is, she realizes the soft blossoming love and puts a balm of wisdom and advice. It's true that time changes everything, but it's sad that parents often get affected the most (this is in the case of parents as loving as Sakshi Arjun and children as loving as Piya Pari).

That's so beautiful and true. And I agree to everything you mentioned here.. It scares me sometimes that I shall have to walk down the same path someday.

Keeping all this emotional stuff aside, can I say I LOVED Siddie Arjun's interactions. Man, when Piya and Siddie will get married - watching Arjun go all red alert on Siddie makes me roll on the floor, literally laughing! It was FANTASTIC!

God, I didn't know how much I craved to see Sakshi Arjun after reading the little paragraph written on them. I never realized how faded and long lost their love feels, like not that the love has faded *grin* I am talking about their memories together... it feels like as if the passion has simmered down to warm waters. Where they're more of parents than husband and wife - another reality!

Thank u again, and you little mischievous person! You're still thinking about that boat, aren't you? I like how u mentioned "Warm waters"🤣

The last scene of Piya fighting with Siddie, again, was hilarious! Seriously! Even Sameer couldn't control his own laughter at that, including Arjun! It was epic, seriously! And teasing Sakshi in the slight end bit was 🤣

So now I am off to the next chapter and if you really thought I was going to show my sass and be overtly critical about this thing then SHUT UP! You have been one of my greatest inspirations and reasons for writing Arjun Sakshi in the first place, I simply love what you've written here... honestly 👏

With lots of love,

Awww that really meant loads and loads to me... thank you so much, really (sorry I said it so many times LOL, but I had to). Love you tons ❤️

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

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Seriously man, my emotions went on a literal overdrive out here! Pari baccha has always stolen my heart and to see the little baby cuddled up against her elder sister like an infant to a mother makes me *sniff* (why didn't I ever have a younger baby sibling!)

Same here! I wish, I wish, I wish! But, nooo. 😭 anyway...

Pari's demand for a story followed Papa Arjun snuggling with his two little angels, recounting his own love story was such an emotional family moment. Even readers like me drowned in a mini flashback of all the wonderful and exciting moments that had passed in creating the family they today have!

Especially with Sakshi overlooking her little world, ah... pure bliss must I say! Can I say that I am shameless enough to not miss Siddie!?

Haha, yes you can be shameless enough😛 Aww, I know.. I really miss writing PM sometimes. I don't know why my own creation makes me emotional😛

Piya's contemplations about her own love story, linking it with possible realities was so wonderful and then being content in her daddy's arms, taking in the pampering and his love - this part has been so wonderfully laid out... really. Can I say I am missing Baba right now?

Aww.. I hope u got to meet him over summer? If not, then I hope u meet him soon.😊

I initially thought it was Siddie and Sameera in their usual fight in the Rathore household and then I realized that ooohhh... someone's in the mood to flirt *wink wink*

Oh, I can't believe how i forgot to mention in the previous update! Man... the bold confession and acceptance from Piya's end was SO SO SO awesome! I bet the look on Siddie's face must have been priceless! *giggles* Wonderful stroke there man, wonderful!

Hehehe.. glad I made u laugh there😉

Now coming back to SiYa, Siddie's doing a great job in flirting with his lady love and Piya, man... hats off girl for reminding him of your father 🤣 🤣🤣 OMG, Arjun bursting into Piyu's little romantic/flirting/teasing session so so freaky yet funny. Weren't they looking like a deer caught in headlights! Poor Arjun, your daughter's old enough to love but not old enough to read the protective turmoil in her dad's heart... so wait it out daddy dear!

Haha, Siddie's dialogue at the end was *man, I seriously can't stop laughing!*

During the baking time, it's wonderful to see Piya and Siddie lose themselves into fond childhood memories. These memories create everything we live on, really :) Ah, and just when they're about to get playful again... daddy dear is there! *boom boom* I doubt if Siddie will be alive till his marriage 😆😆😆 Mother mother darling mother! I can already tell behind whom will Siddie keep on running at the sight of Arjun! Sakshi was literally a godsend... warna Siddie ka kaam toh gaya!

I knoww🤣 I was laughing myself while I imagined it LOL LOL... I am glad I made u laugh! Man, I would have given anything to see this story on TV (being greedy lol)

Oh God.. I so want to squish baby Pari in my arms! She literally sound like her name, Fairy! *tight hugs and kisses to her chubby cheeks*

And I love Sakshi, I really love the way she's drawing the bridge from both the ends - advising Arjun about changing times and telling Piya about the protective nature in Arjun. The slightly ignorant Piya is a welcome change because honestly, no girl in love can be wise enough to assess all the changes and be matured enough to handle them. This heady feeling of love will give rise to immaturities and few careless mistakes.

But it will all be worth it.

Yep, exactly.

The little chasm between Arjun and Piya would be understandable and way too real because neither wants to acknowledge the change in the other. Piya always believed her dad knows her so she doesn't need to exact feel to tell him or reassure him of anything! For Arjun, I've described it in the previous comment :) I simply love Sakshi for balancing out everything.

And of course, the little sprinkles of love between Piya and Siddie - every now and then was so... so *melting away*

Sakshi's words are more than just advice. Both Piya and Siddie are very vulnerable of getting carried away - honestly I feel so. But I would be loved to be proved wrong! Any day :D And again, agreeing with Sakshi - it's way too hilarious to watch Siddie and Arjun... that poor boy almost pees in his pants whenever Arjun is around!

The mother daughter talk was a much needed one, hats off for writing this so brilliantly!

Yaay.. glad it worked out well. :) I am very afraid of the father-daughter talk too lol.

Ah, my baby cutie coochie coo Pari is asking for ice cream *hugging her again and again* man she's damn too cute... damn too cute! Man, I love all the mothers out here - Ayesha is so wonderfully supercool at this moment... big time! Haha, don't tell the Sher Arjun. I really loved that she warned Siddie subtly - really wonderful.

I must mention you sound like proper American here hehe.. I can almost imagine u saying all this in an American accent (when will I actually see you?) 😃😃

Haha, bechara Sameer! At the receiving end of Arjun's ire for his son *hahahhahahahahaha* Man... this is going even better than I expected 😆 😆 😆 Lol, if Ayesha has given the green signal then Sam can't do anything much 😆 😆 😆

I loved SiYa's bike rise *sigh* it was so magical, I feel. But I must say, their dialogues are hilarious - I can't stop laughing at what they say! Somewhere I feel Piya's impulsiveness might cause her slight trouble *going into the mother hen mode* Her open admission to stay outside longer, openly dislike her dad's "concern" for her... it's great because it makes her human but there's this very faint light of irresponsibility.

Probably because they're young ;)

OMG, they kissed.

OMG

OMG

OMG

*thud*

*faint*

Oh Gosh... I am warm all over and feel all tingly by that! It is so wonderfully penned man! So wonderfully penned!

Gah, I am all lost in young romance now 😆 😆 😆 Forget about me writing anything serious for the next week 😆 😆 😆

Hawww... erokom bolish na!! Hahaha... it was weird to write that though.. I don't do young adult lol. But it turned out ok, I guess.

I LOVED your reaction. Was that a strawberry I saw?😛

Oh oh... Arjun.

*God save them* That's all that I have to say.

Awesome and fabulous updates yaar. I wish I had more time to say much much much more *giggles* but this was worth the wait... much more worth the wait! <3

With love,

Hello!! 🤗