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Posted: 10 years ago
Owesome. ...

Suspries party...


Waooo
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Dono these surprise. ...

Intresting. ...

Waiting for next part. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Aryan trying to know the reason behind Neha's drinking
Neha Arjun and Rahul planning a surprise for Aryan
But usse sab pata chal gaya
Eager to see Aryan's surprise
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome..
neha is planning suprize
but Aryan n shanaya is planning for suprize them..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...

Neha, Arjun & Rahul planned a surprise for Aryan-Shaina...😃😃😃
But Aryan-Shaina knows about it...😆😆😆
What is the surprise of Aryan-Shaina?? 😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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@ renuka99garg, zubiya92, Radhikerani - thanks dear!


@ rinku95 - oh you missed me?? I'm really glad that someone's there to miss me! you have to wait for the surprize party dearie! thanks!


@ rimi_invisible - Aryan n Arjun ko jab pata chalega to kya hoga actually unke reactions likhna itna easy nahi he.isliye me use post-pone karti rehti hu! surprize he pata chal jayega! thanks Di!


@ Angel_Arya - Yupp Neha won't leave her habit soon.. she's quite addicted to it! party..yeah..wait for the fun to begin! Anjali is Neha's friend!

@ ...anika... - jab sacchai saamne ayegi to toofan ayega DI!! yes..do wait for the surprize! thanks a lot di!


@ --GOLD-- -hmm..he does care for Neha!Surprize..wo to party me hi pata chalega!! thanks a lot Di!


@ Bubbly_Shanaya - Glad u loved the update so much! Rawte male aise hi he.. hot - headed!! haan.. maza to bahot ayega! Thanks a lot di!


@ rvss - more surprizes coming up! thanks dear!


@ skrafty - glad you liked it! stay tuned! thanks dear!


@ ariyabestfan - ya..double surprize coming up! thanks dear!


@ Snehajain -Surprize to bahot jald pata chal jayega!stay tuned! Thanks dear!


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Posted: 10 years ago



Chapter 39 A


Anniversary Day,

6 p.m.

ESS office,

Aryan was in his cabin, reading the files of the recent cases n signing them. A peon came to him with an envelope n a box. Aryan opened it n saw a printed note in it. The box contained a black partywear tuxedo.

"Aryan,

Reach The Tulip Grand Hotel tonight, 8:30 p.m. sharp. Don't call, just come.

Love,

Shaina."

He read the note n smiled.. thought.. Neha..baccha idea to aapka bahot accha he..likha hota to handwriting se pehchaan jata..isliye print kar diya..oh..but maine to phir bhi pehchaan liya.. koi baat nahi.. hum iss jagah pahuch to jayenge.. dekhte he surprize kise milta he."

~

Rawte Mansion,

Shaina was sitting in her room, reading a book, a servant came n gave her n envelope. She read the printed note inside.

"Shaina,

Come to the Tulip Grand Hotel at 8:30 p.m. wearing the saree that I gifted you today.I'll be waiting, don't be late.

Love,

Aryan"

Shaina kept back the note.. Yeh Aryan bhi na.. ek aur surprize?? she looked at the note again.. nah..ye to Neha ka surprize lag raha he.. kyuki Aryan ne bheja hota to wo apne handwriting me likhte..print karne ki kya zarurat thi?? hmm.. to ye meri pyari nanad ka surprize he.. chalo to phir.. get ready for the surprize!

~

8 p.m.

The Tulip Grand Hotel,

Neha,Arjun n Rahul are already present there checking the last moment preparations. Everything was set.

Neha - sari taiyaria to ho chuki he.. ab bas mehmaano ke aane ka intezaar he.. surprize ready ho gaya he na??

Rahul - baby..ab bas bhi karo..ye sawal tum pichle ek ghante me dus baar puchh chuki ho..

Neha - haan dada lekin..

Arjun - ab tum dono apni behes band karo.. mehmaan aane shuru ho gaye he.. let's go n receive them.

Arjun n Rahul received the guests, the ETF team, the ESS team, some family friends, n a few others.

Neha was busy in keeping watch on the arrival of Aryan n Shaina..they had to be there at 8:30 exactly n that too together, she was busy setting that in one corner. Karan came to meet her,

she was wearing this saree, her waist long hair left open, her back was turned at his side, so he hugged her from back,surprizing her. But to his surprize, she shivered when his hands brushed across her waist when he hugged her. She pushed him n turned around quickly, her hand raised to give a slap.

Neha - how dare you.. [she stopped on seeing Karan n composed her thudding heart] oh.. tum ho??

Karan [looked at her puzzled] - kya hua? tumne aise kyu react kiya??

Neha - sorry. mujhe laga koi aur he.. rats..agli baar aise piche se mat aana.. shukra manao ke mere haath me iss waqt kuch nahi tha.. nahi to pata nahi kya ho jata.

Karan - kya ho jata matlab??

Neha - simple, mere haath me agar knife ya gun hoti to you could have been hurt! so be careful next time! [her cell buzzed] excuse me for now.. tum bahar sab ke paas jao.. mujhe thoda kaam he..

Karan - ok.. [he left half-heartedly, knowing that there was no point arguing]

Neha answered the call..

caller - Shaina ma'm ghar se nikal gayi he.

Neha - ok..tum baccho ko lekar yahan aa jao.. dhyaan rahe ki bhabhi tum logo ko dekh na paye.

caller - ji ma'm.

Neha looked at her watch.. great timing! she exclaimed to herself n then called another person..

Neha - Bhau kahan tak pahuche??

person - sir bas nikal hi rahe he..

Neha - ok.

Neha came to the main hall..

Arjun - all set??

Neha - ji bhaiya.. every thing is set.. ab bas bhau aur bhabhi ke aane ka intezaar he..

after a few moments, she received 2 messages, she read them quickly.

Neha - bhaiya.. wo dono aa gaye..

Arjun signals the lightman to turn off the lights.. the hall is completely engulfed into darkness. An announcement is heard

Rahul - ladies n gentlemen..please be patient.. the guest of honour are about to arrive.. please maintain silence..thanks you.

As soon as the lights turned off, Arjun felt a tight tug on his right hand.. He felt Neha's restlessness even if he couldn't see her face..

Arjun - [whispered] aaj bhi andhere me darr lagta he??

Neha didn't answer but sighed, the grip was still strong.

Arjun was lost in the childhood memories..

~flashback~

Arjun was 12 n Neha was 6 at that time.. he was working on a project at night, Neha was sitting n watching him, helping him with colours at times. suddenly there was a power cut.. Neha held Arjun's arm tightly..

Arjun - baby.. daro mat.. me abhi candle jalata hu..

Neha - nahi.. bhaiya.. aap yahi baithiye..mujhe andhere me bahot darr lagta he..

Arjun - baby, me hu na yahan.. phir kyu darti ho?? me bas aadhe minute me candle lekar aata hu.. phir andhera nahi rahega aur tumhara darr bhi!

Neha - nahi bhaiya..aap kahin mat jaiye.. mujhe bahot darr lag raha he.. (she was on the verge of crying)

Arjun - meri baby to super-girl he na.. to wo nahi royegi.. hmm??

(The lights started again due to the inverter.. which automatically starts within 5 minutes of power-cut.)

Arjun - (the hold loosened a bit) baby..ab to light bhi aa gayi.. to darna nahi.. samjhi??

Neha - ji bhaiya! (nods slightly)

(Arjun pulled her chubby cheeks to which she returned an angry glare n pouted cutely.)

Neha - bhaiya!! kitni baar kaha he aapse mere gaal mat kheenchiye.. lekin aap to samajhte hi nahi!! (Arjun laughed heartily at her reply.)

~flashback~

A soft smile crept on his lips as he remembered her cute antics. He wondered that this girl who fears not even the death is still afraid of the darkness. Why??

~

8:27 p.m.

Aryan n Shaina reached the parking lot of the hotel at almost same time. Aryan was looking a handsome hunk in his black tuxedo.

Shaina was wearing a black n red saree, n a delicate necklace.

Aryan - so ready for the surprize madam??

Shaina - absolutely!!

Aryan forwaded his hand n she held it, both of them walked inside the hotel together..

When the reached inside, it was complete darkness.. they wondered if they had came to the right place or not.. they walked to almost middle of the hall n stopped there. The lights glowed slowly cascading the soft white n red coloured decorations in the hall, n from the above there was a rain of white n red rose petals.. the heart-shaped balloons falling down.. the ambience was lovely!

Aryan - oh..so this was the surprize! Shai.. kahi iske saame hamara surprize feeka na pad jaaye!

Shaina - nahi padega.. aap bas thoda itminan rakhiye!

Soon there was a little commotion outside.. there were two men trying to get inside, first man was a slim, fair-looking man of almost 30 years of age, his hair were gelled n golden highlights shone on them brightly. Second person was having a well built muscular body, a little older than the first man, wearing a long over-coat, holding a pen into his mouth like a cigar.

Rahul - [to two men] koun he aap dono aur kisse milna he aapko??

Man1 - dekhiye Mister, hume hamara kaam karne dijiye..

They both came in pushing Rahul little out of way.

Man1 - You are under arrest ACP Aryan.

~ ~ ~

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Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part B


Man1 - You are under arrest ACP Aryan.

Man2 - ACP nahi DCP Aryan!

Man1 - wo jo bhi ho..kya farq padta he.. hame to bas ise arrest karna he!

Arni went towards them, she said to both the intruders.

Arni - Aise kaise mere bade papa ko arrest karenge aap??

Aryan (kid) - pehle ye bataiye ki aap he koun aur arrest warrant bhi dikhaiye. [he demanded]

Man1 - oye baccho.. hamare raste se hato aur hume hamara kaam karne do..

Arni - nahi.. pehle warrant dikhaiye.

Man2 - lekin tum dono ho koun??

Aryan (kid) - ye sawal to maine pehle pucha..to aap bataiye ki aap koun he??

Man1 - main?? Main Maamu form Special Squad

Man2 - aur main Chachu from Special Squad

Arni - Maamu??Chachu.. lekin kiske??

Aryan - Ajay, Boxer.. ab apna drama band bhi karo.. aur kitna pareshan karoge baccho ko??

Ajay - drama nahi kar rahe.. tumhe sach me arrest karne aaye he..

Aryan - accha to phir warrant dikhao!

Boxer - warrant abhi raste me he.. aa raha he..

Arni - kaise?? gaadi me ya chal kar??

Ajay - [picking up Arni in his arms] aap ko kisi ne bataya nahi ki aap bahot bolti he!

Arni - wo mujhe pata he.. ab aap mujhe jaldi se niche utariye nahi to me chillaungi!

Ajay - accha thik he meri maa.. rakhta hu tumhe niche..

Ajay puts Arni down.

Aryan - ab to batao ki tum dono kya kar rahe ho!

Ajay - kaha na tumhe arrest karna he!

Aryan - lekin kyu?? maine kya kiya he??

Ajay - kya kiya he?? tumne jo nahi kiya uske liye tumhe saza milegi!

[both say this revolving around him in a circle]

Boxer - tumhari pehli galti.. pichle 5 saal me ek baar bhi phone nahi kiya!

Ajay - dusri galti.. tum zinda ho iss baat ki khabar tak hume nahi di..

Boxer - teesri galti.. Chandigarh tak aye lekin Delhi nahi aaye hume milne!

Aryan - look guys..I can explain.. [cutting him in mid, Boxer spoke]

Boxer - itni bhi kya jaldi he explaination dene ki.. ye to sirf shuruaat he.. list to bahot lambi he..

Shaina - guys please stop it for now.. Yahan party chal rahi he.. tum dono aise sab ka mood spoil nahi kar sakte..

Ajay - mood to tumne kharab kar diya Shai..

"Tumhe kya lagta he, surprize sirf tum de sakti ho? hum nahi??" A voice said. A man with bald head was standing there.

Aryan - Shotgun!!

Shotgun - Well arrest warrant me hi laane wala tha, lekin phir maine plan change kar diya. Socha kyun na iss baar tumhari galti ke liye tumhe maaf kar diya jaay!

Aryan looked at him doubtfully..

Shotgun - me sach keh raha hu.. actually upar se orders nahi mile to tum iss baar bach gaye!

Aryan was totally confused.. What exactly do they mean??

there was a complete silence for a few seconds when Ajay n Boxer burst into laughter looking at Aryan's face that was looking like a lost kid..

Ajay n Boxer engulfed Aryan into a tight bear-hug which lasted a little longer.

Aryan - guys ab bas bhi karo.. saans to lene do mujhe!! [parting from the hug] to ye tum logo ka prank tha.. huh??

Ajay - nahi Aryan.. aisa dimaag hamare paas kahan?? ye hamara idea nahi tha.

Boxer - haan lekin hume ye acting karne me bahot maza aaya.. aur tumhe sach me ek surprize mila..

Ajay - meri acting skills ke baare me to tumhe pata hi he.. so you know!!

Aryan - waise bataya kyu nahi ki yahan aa rahe ho??

Shotgun - Surprize jaisi bhi koi cheez hoti he na Aryan!! sorry thoda late ho gaya..Mumbai ki traffic..

Shaina - Ajay! Neha kahan he?? use saath nahi laaye??

Ajay - use to aana tha lekin doctor ne iss halat me travelling karne se mana kiya he to nahi laaya. Usse chhodo.. you know you're looking really gorgeus today! [he winked at Shaina]

Shotgun - Ajay.. kuch to sharam karo.. do baccho ke baap ho aur abhi bhi flirting??

Boxer - rehne do Shotgun.. ye buddha ho jayega na phir bhi flirt karna nahi chhodega!

All laughed. There was a happy reuninon after more than 5 long years! The others too congratulated them.

After a little while.

Neha - [on mic] Hello everyone!! I wish a very very very very very very happy Anniversary to my dear Bhau n Bhabhi! I heartily welcome all of you to this party. Thank you everyone for sparing your valuable time to come n join us here.

Jaise Chand Adhoora Hai Sitaaro Ke Bina,

Jaise Samundar Adhoora Hai Lehro Ke Bina,

Waise Hi Jeevan Adhoora Hai Pyaar ke Bina,

Aur Hamara Surprize Adhoora Hai Meri Shayri Ke Bina..

Well as our first two surprizes are complete, now it's time for the third one. This one is by Neha n me. By Neha I mean Neha Nair ohh.. Mrs. Desai actually! Well now enough of my chats, over to the projector screen.

(Surprize #1 - the party, #2 - the old SS team's reunion, #3 - the video)

The lights were dimmed n a video was started on the projector.

~video~

The screen showed Aryan n Shaina's marriage pics. Some other clips of their SS office, the team n some other memories of chats, parties n other functions.

~video~

When all eyes were on the projector screen, Neha came to Karan n took him towards the gallery.

Karan - kya kar rahi ho Neha? mujhe yahan kyu lekar aayi?? [seemed irritated]

Neha - baat karni thi tumse..isliye.. [she replied calmly]

Karan - kya baat karni he??

Neha - [held his face in her palms] naaraz ho mujhse?? I know.. meri galati he.. par me busy thi.. I'm so..

Karan - [jerked her hands away] busy?? Madam, no one is completely busy, it's just the matter of priorities. Do you remember when we talked last?? It's been more than a week!

Neha - madam?? why are you being so formal rats?? n last week?? I was so busy.. you know that!

Karan - busy.. yeah.. planning this stupid surprize of yours!! You know what.. this is a purely childish plan.. a totally cliched idea for a surprize!!

Neha - rats tum.. [she tried but couldn't find words.. she had been planning this surprize since last four days, she hadn't even slept properly as she didn't get time in the day, she had to work at night on this plan. n now Karan said it was stupid.. she was hurt a lot. She was lost in her thoughts, not listening to him.]

Karan - talking about being busy.. are you busy 24*7?? in a day, 24 hours, you don't even get 5-10 minutes to talk to me?? Do I say that you have to talk for hours with me?? Just give me 10 minutes of your time.. that would be more than enough.. but you don't even reply to my messages.

Buzzing of her cell brought her back to reality. She immediately picked the phone after looking at the caller ID.

Arjun - baby.. kahan ho tum?? It's time for the next surprize. jaldi aao.

Neha - ji.

She disconnected the call n left without giving other glance to Karan.

~

Arjun - (on mic) hope you all enjoyed the video.. so now here comes our next surprize..

Two waiters bring in a large decorated board n keep it in front of Aryan-Shaina. There were photos of the family members n small envelop like structure was made, inside them were messages n wishes. Aryan n Shaina one by one opened the envelops n read the messages. When Aryan opened Neha's envelop, there came out a small chit, Yahan nahi..kahin aur he..dhundh lijiye.'

he frowned for a second, then looked on the board carefully, he found a large paper roll at the bottom. He opened it n saw a beautiful portrait of his with Shaina n Sunny, but there was some empty space at a side too. As he traced his finger on the empty space, another chit revealed, Ab ye jagah khali kyu he ye bhi main hi batau?? Aisi cheeze samjhayi nahi jaati..khud samajhni padti he.' He read it in mind n looked away embarassed, while Shaina's cheeks turned into deep shades of red. Rahul cleared his throat to gain back their attention.

Rahul - aap to itne me hi kho gaye.. abhi to aur bhi surprizes baaki he..

Shaina - aur surprizes?? aise kitne he??

Neha - aaj aapki sixth anniversary he to 6 surprizes to bante he.. I hope ki hamare pehle chaar surprizes aapko pasand aaye ho!

Shaina - aisa kabhi ho sakta he ki Neha kisi ko surprize de aur use pasand na aaye?? hmm??

Aryan - waise mujhe ye surprize pasand nahi aaya.. [Neha's face lost all colors] Sonu.. kya hua?? meine abhi apni baat khatam nahi ki.. This is one of the best surprizes that I've ever received. Waise mujhe koi idea nahi tha ki tum itna bada sa surprize plan kar rahi ho..

Rahul - ek minit bhau.. ye surprize isne akele thodi plan kiya.. maine aur bhai ne bhi to help ki thi.. saara credit ise akele kyu mile?

Aryan - haan lekin idea to Neha ka hi tha..to credit aur credit card dono hi Neha ke huye na!

Arjun - bhau.. aapko kaise pata ki ye idea Neha ka he??

Aryan - itna to main tum dono ko jaanta hi hu.. aise ideas tumhare dimag me to aane se rahe..

Neha was smiling now..

Shaina - Neha.. abhi se shopping list banane lagi kya??

Neha - nahi bhabhi..aisi koi baat nahi he.. maine ye credit ke liye nahi kiya.. main to sirf aap dono ki khushiyo ko badhana chahti thi.. n I'm really happy ki mera ye surprize aapko itna accha laga!

Aryan - haan.. mujhe yeh portrait bahot accha laga.. main ise kal hi frame karwa dunga.

Rahul - now it's time for the next surprize. [he goes to the dias n speaks on the mic] Music is life n life is music.. so here comes a small piece of music from Arjun bhai n me!

Rahul - [starts singing] Maayechyaa Halavya Sparshaane Khulate

(With The Gentle Touch Of Love It Blooms,)

Natyanchya Bandhat Dhund Moharte

(And Blossoms With The Warmth Of Relations)

Arjun -[singing n playing guitar] Mann Udhann Varyaache Guj Pavasache

(Heart Is Like The Erratic Unpredictable Winds)

Kahote Bebhan Kase Gahivarte Mann Udhann Varyaache

(And Rampant As The Breezy Rains Is That What Makes It So Unrestrained?)


Tanana Tanana Tanana...

Rahul - [singing n Arjun is playing guitar] Aakashi Swapnanchya Harapun Bhaan Shirate

(Out Of The Blue It Wakes Up In The Dreams,)

Hurhuratya Saanjela Kadhi Ekatech Jhoolate

(Meanders Lonely In The Dim Twilight ..)

Savarte Bavarte Jhadate Adakhadate Ka Padte

(Tries To Balance In The Anxious Moments, Holds On, Stumbles Again And Caves In)

Kadhi Ashechya Heendolaya Var Mann He Vede Jhoolate

(Sometimes Glues Itself On To The Ray Of Hope, To Sway In Bliss ..)

Mann Taranga Hovun Panya Varati Phirate

(Heart Dances On The Glittering Waves)

Aan Kshanat Phiruni Abhalala Bheedate

(And In A Flash Goes High To Touch The Sky)

Mann Udhann Varyaache

(Heart Is Like The Erratic Unpredictable Winds)

Guj Pavasache

(And Rampant As The Breezy Rains)

Kahote Bebhan Kase Gahivarte

(Is That What Makes It So Unrestrained?)

Mann Udhann Varyaache

(Heart Is Like The Erratic Unpredictable Winds)


Arjun - [singing n Rahul is playing mouth-organ] Runajhoonate Gungunate Kadhi Guntate Haravate

(Heart Murmurs And Mumbles, Now And Then Gets Trapped Or Goes Astray)

Kadhi Gahirya Dolanchya Dohatpaar Budate

(Sometimes Gets Immersed In Those Hazel Eyes)

Talmalate Sarkhe Papane Nakalatka Bharakatate

(The Restless Heart Drifts Naively From Time To Time)

Kadhi Mohachya Chaar Kshananna Mann He Vede Bhulate

(Gets Carried Away By Those Affectionate Moments)

Janate Jarihe Punhaa Punhaaka Chukate

(It Knows And Understands..Still Makes The Same Mistake Again And Again)

Bhabade Tari Bhasanchya Maaguni Palate

(Back To Innocently Following The Hunch And Intuitions)

Mann Udhann Varyaache

(Heart Is Like The Erratic Unpredictable Winds)

Guj Pavasache

(And Rampant As The Breezy Rains)

Kahote Bebhan Kase Gahivarte

(Is That What Makes It So Unrestrained?)

Mann Udhann Varyaache

(Heart Is Like The Erratic Unpredictable Winds)

~ ~ ~
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Part C


There was a huge round of applause as the song concluded.

Now Sunny, Arni n Aryan took their positions at the mic.

Arni - hello everyone!! hope you all enjoyed the performance!

Aryan - aur agar pasand na bhi aaya ho to bhi haan hi kehna padega! Nahi to aapko hum apna agla surprize nahi denge!

Sunny - So let's start the next surprize of the night! Please bring in the cake..

The cake was brought in..

Rahul - in logo ne batane se mana kiya tha.. par me bata deta hu.. ye cake teeno baccho ne milkar banaya he!

Sunny - lekin Bua ne bhi hamari help ki thi!! Mom, Dad.. Hope you like the cake!

Shaina - Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap teeno ko itni acchi cake banani aati he..

Aryan - this is really cute!!

Arni - to phir cake jaldi se cut kijiye na bade papa!

Aryan - sure! [he n Shaina cut the cake.]

Sunny - [singing] Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar

Apnon Ka Pyar, Kya Kehna

Arni - Milein Hum Chhalak Utha

Khushi Ka Khumaar, Kya Kehna


Aryan (Kid) - Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj

Ghar Hai Mera

Gule Gulzaar, Kya Kehna

All Three- Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj

Ghar Hai Mera

Gule Gulzaar, Kya Kehna

Neha - Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar

Apnon Ka Pyar, Kya Kehna


Rahul - Milein Hum Chhalak Utha

Khushi Ka Khumaar, Kya Kehna

Shaina - Hum Tum Yoon Hi Milte Rahein

Mehfil Yoon Hi Sajti Rahe

Aryan - Bas Pyaar Ki Yehi Ek Dhun

Har Subah Shaam Bajti Rahe


Arjun felt someone standing in front of him, he smiled as he saw Roshni there, she seemed very happy..

Roshni - Gale Mein Mehekte Rahein

Pyaar Bhari

Baahon Ka Haar Kya Kehna

All - Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj

Ghar Hai Mera

Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna


Neha - O...O..O..O..O...

Arjun felt that Roshni asked him to sing

Arjun - Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar

Apnon Ka Pyar, Kya Kehna


Neha - Milein Hum Chhalak Utha

Khushi Ka Khumaar, Kya Kehna

Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj

Ghar Hai Mera

Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna


All - Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj

Ghar Hai Mera

Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna

A loud round of applause was heard when the song concluded.


Neha was then standing at a corner when Ajay came to meet her.

Ajay - Thank you!

Neha - Thank you?? but Why??

Ajay - Aaj itne saalo baad mujhe.. hum sab ko Aryan se milwane ke liye!

Neha - no..please don't thank me.. maine jo bhi kiya wo sirf mere bhau ke liye kiya.. unhe khush dekhne ke liye me kuch bhi kar sakti hu.

Ajay - by the way, nice saree.. you're looking awesome!

Neha - [smiled slightly] thank you. [in mind - bhabhi sahi kehti he.. ye banda bahot bada flirt he!]


Unknown to them, two eyes were constantly following them. Karan was getting restless..


Rahul - [on mic] gaana-bajaana to ho gaya.. lekin dance to abhi baaki he.. I request everyone to come on the dance floor with their partners. n those who don't have partners.. don't worry, we have 2 bowls here.. in one bowl we will have the lady's names n in other the gentlemen's. Come here, write your names n then pick up your partner!


Ajay - would you like to dance with me??

Neha - sorry.. but I don't dance.. there are many girls around who would like to dance with you.. excuse me..

Ajay - ok.. [in mind - chal beta nikal le yahan se.. Aryan ki behen he..bhadak gayi to gadbad ho jayegi] nice talking to you.

Neha - My pleasure. [gave a small smile]

As he left from there, Karan came to her at the next instance.

Karan - [forwading his hand] come, dance with me!

Neha - no.. I don't dance!

Karan - come on Neha.. mere sath dance karne me tumhe kya problem he??

Neha - problem mujhe tumhare saath dance karne me nahi he.. the fact is mujhe dance nahi karna..

Karan - "Maan" ko bulau.. tumhare saath dance karne ke liye??

Neha - what?? have you lost your brains?? main aur maan.. wo bhi couple dance?? [she looked at him unbelievingly] Karan.. tell me kahin tumne drink to nahi ki?? ya bina piye hi chadh gayi tumhe?? [she laughed.. she saw Manushi n called her] oye Maan..idhar aana zara!

Manushi - kya hua??

Karan kept alternating glances between Neha n Manushi.. unable to believe the fact!

Neha - kya hua.. bahot kuch hua he maan.. ye tera bhai pagal ho gaya he.. iska ilaaj karwa! kisi acche se psychiatrist ke paas leke jaa!

Manushi - tune aisa kya kiya mere bhai ke sath??

Neha - maine?? maine kuch nahi kiya.. maan, tu nahi maanegi..lekin ye tera bhai hum dono ko couple dance karne ka idea de raha tha!

Manushi - what??!!

Neha - haan!

Karan - Manushi.. maan?? ye sab kya he??

Neha - kuch nahi.. iska itna lamba naam lena mujhe pasand nahi aur madam ko koi Manu bulaye to use pasand nahi..isliye "Maan" kehti hu.. bachpan se! Lekin tum aur tumhari insecurities..[saying that, she walks towards the bar counter, annoyed]

Manushi - ab samajh me aaya kuch?? kya tum bhi bhai.. wo tumhe chida rahi thi.. aur tum uff!! [she shook her head n left]

Karan - [smacked his forehead] I was so wrong!! Mujhe Neha ko sorry kehna chahiye.. pehle bhi uski galti nahi thi par maine use itna kuch suna diya.. sahi kehte he.. Half knowledge is dangerous!

Rahul - are Karan.. wahan kya kar rahe ho.. yahan aao!

Karan - aaya..

Neha went to the bar counter n asked for a peg of Whisky..

The partners are on the dance floor.. the song starts playing..

Girl - Jaha Mile Deewane Do

Neha heard the song.. she walks down the memory lane..

Wahi Kahi Pe Ishq Bana

Their Dance performance at the University's Function..

Sabse Pehle Ishq Ka Ohda

Vivaan n Neha were the lead dancers, it was a dance-drama portraying a love-story.

Sabse Pehle Ishq Ka Ohda

It started with Neha n Vivaan meeting each other in the garden,

Rab Ne Kaha . . . .

they saw each-other n fell in love..

Rab Ne Kaha Khud Maine Suna Hai

The love at first sight..


Boy - Rubru Tu...

Vivaan sat on his knees n asked for her hand..Neha slowly slipped her hand into his..

Hain Lahu Tu.. Ho..

Vivaan stood up n kept his other hand on her waist, while she kept her other hand on his shoulder..

Rubru Tu Hain Lahu Tu

They began dancing slowly with the music n beats.

Tu Hi Ander Bahta Hain

He twirled around n changed the steps..

Saanson Me Bhi Tu Zaruri

Tera Haazi Kehta Hai

The other dancers also joined them.. n the dance was on its full swing..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

Tu Hi Saaya, Aks Bhi Tu

Ruh Me Bhi Tu Rahta Hai

Tu Hi Main Hu, Main Hi Tu Hain

Vivaan lifted Neha n did another step n twirled again..

Tera Hazi Kahta Hai

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda.. Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda

He smoothly put her down n walked aside..


Girl - Yaar Mera Eid-Diwali

Neha sat down in a position of offering Namaz, silently prayed..

Yaar Ke Bina Ye Tan Man Khali Tan-Man Khali..

Vivaan entered again n stood beside her..

Yaar Mera Kaaba Kashi

She got up as she saw him, n hugged him..

Yaar Se Bhar Jaaye Ruh Ki Pyali Ruh Ki Pyali

He lifted her in air n she did other movements, he put her down..

Yaar Basa Lu Rom Rom Mein Deewani Ban Jau

She danced around him n twirled..

Or Kaha Rab Dundu, Mere Yaar Me Rab Pau

Yaar Basa Lu Rom Rom Mein Deewani Ban Jau


Boy - Tu Hi Tab Tha Tu Hi Ab Hain

Vivaan took her hand in his hand..

Jag Hai Jab Se Tab Se Tu Hain

They did some belle steps..

Meri Hasti Mera Rutba

Meri Daulat Shohrat Tu Hai

A ring descended from the top, Vivaan held it n it moved upwards..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda.. Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda.. Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda.. Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..


Girl - Aks Me Rakh Le Tere..

The shadow of Vivaan was shown below, Neha was Dancing at that same point..

Rahne Ko Dede Teri Dhadkan

Bin Tere Chahe Beghar Oh...

Dekh Bai Saanse Ye Jogan

Haaye..

She moved her hands n body gently in the motion of the heartbeats.. first slowly n then increasing them at a constant rate...

Aas Talaash Me Jal Jal Teri

Rakh Na Ban Jau

She showed fire burning with her hands n then curled into herself..

Aks Me De Geet Mujhe

Mai Geet Sanwar Jau.

She then got up n acted like being decorated with jewels n flowers..

Aas Talaash Me Jal Jal Teri

Rakh Na Ban Jau

She again showed the fire with her hands..

Tu Karam Hai, Tu Dharam Hain

Red roses were showered from above n Vivaan slowly descended downwards..

Tu Hi Mera Kalma Hai

Teri Khatir, Tere Dum Se

Vivaan came back on the floor..

Raah Ishq Pe Chalna Hain

Neha walked away from him..


Boy - Mann Samandar Tu Hai Dariya

He held her hand n pulled her back to him..

Mein To Tu Hi Bahta Hai

She twirled n came into his hug..

Tu Safiya Tu Hi Saahil

He lifted her n twirled her again..

Tera Hazi Kahta Hai

They both climbed the ring again..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Did some swings n lifts..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

Ek Boond Ishq Pe Hu Zinda..

The song ended with Vivaan n Neha reaching upwards with the ring..

~

Meanwhile, Neha had finished drinking more than one bottle of whisky.. She was still wandering in her memory lane.. when a voice calls her.. she turns n sees him.. as the lights were dim, she couldn't see his face clearly.. "Vivaan" she murmurs to herself.. "Kyun? kyun aaye ho tum?? kyu aaye wapas?? Akela kyun nahi chhod dete mujhe? Chale jao.. please leave me alone.." She said in unsteady voice..He didn't move, but tried to stop her.. "Tum nahi jaoge to main hi chali jaati hu.. aur mujhe rokne ki koshish mat karna" Saying so, she slowly walks outside..

"Driver.. gaadi nikalo.." She said to the driver.. he brought the car.. "Ghar chalo" she ordered n the car zoomed off.

He stood there looking at her retreating form.. When Arni came to him,

Arni - Mama.. aap yahan kya kar rahe he?? chaliye.. badi maa aapko bula rahi he..

Karan - chalo!

They both go to the place where Aryan,Shaina, Arjun, Rahul, Sunny n Aryan, Sameer, Kajal are sitting, rest were having dinner..

Shaina - sabse pehle to me aap sab ko thanks kahungi.. iss pyaare se surprize ke liye!

Aryan - I really appreciate the efforts done by all of you.. thank you..

Rahul - bhau.. aap hume thanks kehkar sharminda mat kijiye.. your thanks is not accepted!

Aryan - accha thik he.. waise hamare paas bhi aap logo ke liye ek surprize he!

Arjun - Kaisa surprize bhau??

Aryan - Shai.. idea tumhara he to tum hi batao..

Shaina - ok.. Sameer, yahan aao... Sam, it's high time for you to get married!

Sameer - Didi aap..

Shaina - meri baat abhi khatam nahi huyi.. aur bich me bolna allowed nahi he.[pauses] Haan.. to me tumhari shaadi ke baare me baat kar rahi thi.. kuch hi din pehle meri Kakisa [Sam's mom] se baat huyi.. aur unhone tumhare liye ek faisla liya he.. Tumhari shaadi tay kar di he..

Sameer - kya?? meri shaadi??

Aryan - haan.. tumhari shaadi.. lekin galat sawal pucha.. tumhe to ye pucha chahiye tha ki kisse ho rahi he tumhari shaadi!

Shaina - koi baat nahi.. kabhi-kabhi ho jaata he.. waise uss lucky girl ka naam to pucho!

Karan - isme puchna kya he.. ye baat to sabko pata he! kyu bhaisa??

Sameer - tu kehna kya chahta he??

Arjun - ab itne bhi bhole banne ki koshish mat karo Rathod!

Aryan - ek minute.. tum sab galat topic par behes kar rahe ho.. Sameer, pehle jisse shaadi karni he use to pucho, wo taiyaar he ya nahi!

Sameer - matlab??

Shaina - pata nahi kisne tumhe ko ETF ka chief bana diya!! ek simple si baat samajh nahi aati tumhe! ok.. Tumhe use propose karna he.. aur tumhare paas sirf 10 minute he ye karne ke liye.. and your time starts now!

Sameer - lekin main kaise..??

Aryan - Arjun.. ise le jao aur kuch samjhaao!!

Arjun - hmm.. lagta he yahi karna padega!

Arjun takes Sameer to a corner n gives him a SYS session!

Shaina - waise Neha kahan he?? kaafi der se dikhayi nahi di..

Rahul - Shayad apne friends ke saath dinner kar rahi hogi.. main use abhi call karta hu!

Aryan - uski zarurat nahi he.. aa jayegi thodi der me!

Finally after 5 minutes, Sameer gets ready to propose! They both come back.. Kajal went n called Aisha to join them.. As Aisha came there, Sameer sat on one knee before her n forwarded his hand..

Sameer - Mujhe tumse kaafi waqt se ek baat kehni he.. par keh nahi paa raha tha.. lekin ab kehna hi padega.. mere paas koi option nahi he..

Aisha - Sir aap..

Sameer - Aisha.. pehle mujhe meri baat khatam karne do.. tumhe pata he ki mujhe ghuma-phira ke baat karna pasand nahi.. to me seedhe point par aata hu.. Kya tum mujhse shaadi karogi?? [he said the last words in one breathe..shocking everyone!]

Aisha was still under shock.. Kajal kept her hand on her shoulder to get her back..

Sameer - Aisha.. tumne mere sawaal ka jawab nahi diya..

Aisha gulped..trying to digest what she heard right now.. then slightly nodded her head in affirmation.

Shaina - huff.. finally Sam.. ab main Kakisa se keh sakti hu ke unke bete ne unke liye bahu pasand kar li he aur wo jaldi se aaye aur unki nayi bahu ko shagun de de!!

Sameer looked at her surprized..

Aryan - to kaisa laga hamara surprize??

All were left speechless..

Shaina - ab kisiko bhuk lagi he ya phir surprizes se hi pet bharna he??

Aryan - haan chalo.. ab hum bhi khana kha lete he!

They went to have dinner..

Arni - papa.. mujhe neend aa rahi he.. ghar chale??

Arjun - haan beta.. chalo.. kal subah school bhi to jaana he na!

Arjun took all three kids n went home, they had their dinner when others were dancing!

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That's it!

Almost 5000 words update in total!

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precap -

Arjun looked at the scene in front of him.. he felt the land slipping beneath his feet.. shocked or surprized would be an understatement.. "Neha.." he whispered.. he couldn't say more.

What happened now??

Stay tuned to know more!

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Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
RES / UNRES 😊
YAAH ME FIRST :


Coming to Update *****************

Loved it Neha
Awesome update
I just loved how they planeed the Surprise
Both Aryan & Shaina are aware of it
but still they are touched by this gesture
Even they too planned a surprise for all
I want to know what is it
Why did Neha react like this ?
I thought might be her Past still Haunts her when some guy touch her like that
but to become normal se needs to trust people

About the Teaser **********************
It was really well dear
Kids ko apna bade papa ka bahut dhyan hai
Lets see how ETF & entire Rawte Family handles this
I am wating for this part

Thanks for the PM
Continue soon



Res / For Part B & C too 😉 / UNRES

Loved It Neha
Awesome update
hmm dostoo ne dara hi diya tha
but I just loved the surprise for the couple
they met their friends after so long
Songs in between were having a good effect
Arni were too cute after alll bacche kiske hai
I really fely bad for Neha is is still impacted with what happned to her
Yes this all cannot be forgetted easily
I really hope that she comes out soon with the help of Karans love
Karan is jealous Maan & Manushi hehehehe that was good one 😆
is liye kehte hai poori baat jaan leni chahiye warna khatarnaak hota hai 😆
Hmm next lapete main aaye Sameer good one
proposal wo bhi 10 min main good going
I just loved cheesy proposal & poor Aisha got shocked 😉
Lets see what Happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res! 😉/Unress. Me 2nd! 😃 Awsum Update Chutki..!! 🤗 Hmm.. Aryan aur Shaina ko bulane ka plan toh Neha ka accha tha! 😆 Par She forgot ki woh dono bade hain...!! Aise hi Ullu nhi bann jayenge! 🤣 Both Shaina-Aryan got her trick! 😉 So Preperations for Party going on in Full Swing! 😳 Hadd Hai Neha..!! 🤣🤣 Baar-Baar ek hi sawaal! 😆 Neha luking sooo pretty in that Saree..❤️ Karan toh gya! 😉 Aur woh sach me marne wala tha Agar Neha ko pata nhi chalta! 🤣 Poor Boy! 😔 Romance karne chala tha sab Kachra ho gya! 😆 Neha is scared of the Dark! Aww..Love that Cute FB! 😳 Junior Rawte And Neha were Adorable! ❤️ Aryan-Shaina are here..Both luk Lovely! ❤️ The Ambience was Beautiful! ❤️ Now whats their suprise? 😉 Now who are these two Intruders? 🤔 And Aryan under arrest? 😲 What? How? 😲 Intresting Teaser! Aryan-Arni are Suppa Cool and Cute..❤️ Thanxx fr pm.. Continue Soonz! P.S- Chutki please update DI too na? 😳 Waiting with a Thudding Heart! ☺️
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago

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