Shree SS - Heaven's Mistake - Part 8 PG 25 12.7.15 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Awesome update
Loved it
Shree is being mean
charo ko Samjun and Roshni ke baare mein pata chal gaya
Sam felt Aisha's presence
interesting
waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Finally Shree agreed to help them
Where is Arjun...???
Sam has again joined as ETF chief he is missing team
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
WOW... that's too good...
😊👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
where is arjun,,??
sam still blaming him for team's death..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
amazing update dear
shree pura fase gaya
lekin sirf shree hi sabki help kar sakata hai
ye kyaa arjun kahi nahi he
ohh yaa nobody knows that arjun left etf
sameer missing ETF
plzzz update sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
very progressive update annu...

bohot kuch ho gaya ek updt main..
now they know unhe kaha kya, kisko dhundna hain...but aatmao ke liye itna asaan to nehi hoga..
then comes the meeting at Arjun's place...it was very very well written...kaha hain arjun? karan ke garage main?
then their meet with sameer and the ETF office...awesome..its really difficult to write the such feelings...and you have done it so easily..kudos to you./..

continue soon..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Wow didu...
It awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Do continue soon...
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
hi !!
i am back !!

part 1
lakshya !!
and so many questions and answers !!😕😲
wow they r going back into the world. and shree can see /hear them .
there's gonna be a lot of fun ahead, i guess. 😃😃

part 2
see didnt i say there is gonna be fun ?! 😆 shree chanting hanuman chalisa to bhagaofy bhooottt... 😆 but they are not bhooottt😆
oh that man is thinking that shree is crazy 😆😆
lol chotu and shree two in one .
chotu ka punches and shree ka bholapan is 🤣
oh god !!! bechare shree pe itna emotional atyachaar !!
atlast shree almost maan gaya . poor shree is irritated as he does not know what is to be done.😆

part 3
true . shree ka point of view bhi sahi hai .
ok . so the pieces of the puzzle are slowly falling into place.
emotional moments...
sakshi .. a comic relief sometimes 😆😆😆
where is arjun?? kidnapped !!😲😲
sam feeling bad about his people...
and can he feel aisha ?? 😃

Amazing and lovely updates !!
thanks for the pms.
cont soon. 😃😃



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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
wah kya kismat hain shree ka...1 nehi, 2 nehi,4 aatma!! lottery lag gayee speky ka!!
interesting concept... super power with mystery mission...aa ha...smells really delicious!!

and dialogues... kya bataun... usi pe to hum fida hain.!

fo continue... & thanks for PM.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Ch 1
charo mar gaye aur atma ban gaye.
Charo yamlok aye hai par vaha bhi jagah nahi mili kyuki unka aim incomplete hai.
Aisha sam ki story adhuri rah gayi.
Chotu arjun se abhibhi darta hai.
Charo ne shree nam ka bakra dhund liya.
Riya ne rebirth le liya aur rosh arj ka wait kar rahi hai.
Aur kon tha jiski umar lambi thi?
Lets see.

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