Shree SS - Heaven's Mistake - Part 8 PG 25 12.7.15 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
mai adhi raat ko has rehi hu...
bechara shree..atmaon k bich fas gaya h...
isbar chhotu ne motu se bacha kua..ab arjun n sameer ki dhamki..
congested h..ha ..chhotu ka bada atma shree ki body me kse fit hoga...
sach me...kis baat k atma hai yelog...
inhe ye nei pata k wo ek insan kaun h...kuch bhi nei pta
shree kare bhi to kya kare.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
I liked the update..👍🏼
Ha ha..Shree..usko un chaaro se mukti chahiye..😆
I'm very curious to know who is their common enemy..
Arjun is missing..ab ye kaha chala gaya..
Aww..😔Sam is missing his team..And wait..he heard Aisha..Or rather felt her..
Thanks for pm..continue soon..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Wow
Awesome part
Love it
Story is going great
Can't wait to read what will happen next
Thanks for pm didu
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
awesome update
part - 2
poor shree hanuman chalisa se bhi koi asar nahi hua😆😆
chotu ki atma shree ke andar guss gayi😆😆
kya dhoya hai uss adami ko😆😆
chotu shree ki body main guss toh gaya...par nikal nhi pa raha🤣🤣
charo milkar shree ko black mail kar rahe hai😆😆😆
poor shree😆
lets see shree ab kya karta hai???
part - 3
poor shree atmao ke bich fas gaya😆😆
finally charo clue toh mila 😃😃
charo arjun ke ghar pe gaye😃😃...par arjun kaha hai????😕
sameer joined ETF back😃😃
sameer shree ko ETF main wapis lana chahata hai😃😃
sameer felt aisha's presence...usne aisha ki awaj suni😲😲
lets see aage kya hota hai...
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon
😊😊😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Part 2 n 3
awesome updates.
Shree hanuman chalisa padhne ka koi fayda nahi hai.
Chotu ne kya dhulayi ki hai us admi ki shree ke andar ghuskar.
Chotu ko shree ki body me uncomfortable mehsoos kar raha hoga bechara.
Sab shree ko blackmail kar rahe hai ,shree ko to manna hi tha.
Chalo kuch to clue mila unke maksad ka.
Ab ye arjun kaha gayab ho gaya?
Sab sam ke ghar aagaye.
So sam ne vapas etf join kar liya.
Lagta hai shree ka etf rejoin karna pakka.
Sam apni team ko miss kar raha hai sp aisha ko.
Sam ne aisha ko feel kiya?
Cont soon,sorry for late n thnks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

sanalover, Asha03, smneha, Swara85, aditiarakshi, savali, dinazz, naina25, Godly_Affection, Areesha566, Snehajain, rimi_invisible, skrafty, _Nikita_, ll_megha_ll, Radhikerani, thanks for liking the part

Areesha566 : glad you like it stay tuned

_Nikita_ : glad you like it...jab team ko nhi pta to mujhe kaise pta hoga k arjun kahaan hai...stay tuned

Ariyabestfan : hope you like the update...jab team ko nhi pta to mujhe kaise pta hoga k arjun kahaan hai...stay tuned

Aditiarakshi : glad you read 3 parts in one go...hope you like them...stay tuned...

cuppypie121: glad you like it...stay tuned

dinazz : glad you read all the parts in one go...hope you like them...stay tuned...

Godly_Affection : glad you like it...shree bhi bechara kya kare...4-4 atamo k jal me fas gya hai thoda mean hona to banta hai uska...arjun ko jo dhundne nikalega khud lapata ho jayega...missing complaint ka koi fyda nhi hai...sam ka sad hona to banta hai...stay tuned

ll_megha_ll : glad you like it...stay tuned

IshitaRocks015 : hope you like all the parts...lol wo atma hai parmatma nhi k sab pta ho...wahi pta krne to wapas aaye hai k akhir unki life ka aim kya tha jiski wajeh se unhe wapas aana pada stay tuned

Radhikerani : thanks for liking it

Radhika Shah : glad you like it...

rimi_invisible : glad you like it...jab team ko nhi pta to mujhe kaise pta hoga k arjun kahaan hai...stay tuned

savali : hope you like the updates...yup ab mar gye hai to atma hi banege naa...but charo ko naa uper jagah mili aur dharti pe bhi nhi reh skte...stay tuned...

Sanalover : glad you like it...stay tuned

Smneha : glad you like it...agar shree ko pura nhi fasati to wo nikal kr bhag skta tha isliye use pura fasa dia

Skrafty : glad you like it...charo ne samjun aur roshni ki pics dekhi hai...jo bhi pta chala hai guess lagya hai ..stay tuned

Snehajain : glad you like it...ab ek sath char char atamoye dekh kr kaun khush hoga...to shree ko bhi apne dosto ki atma dekh kr kuch khas khushi nhi huyi...charo ko pehle lga k arjun aa jayega...wo to aisha ne gaur kia k ghar kafi time se band pada hai ...stay tuned

Shamsad1607 : agreed shree ki kismat hi kuch aisi hai...logo ko ek nhi dikhti aur shree ko 4-4 atmayein dikh rhi hai...wo bhi muft muft muft

Swara85 : hope you like it...ab 4-4 atamo k sath kaun reh skta hai isliye shree ko mukti chahiye...arjun ka jab team ko nhi to mujhe kaise hoga...stay tuned

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
awesome update di...
loved it...
do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Awesome update di
loved it
Sam ko Aisha ki awaaz sunai de rahi he..interesting!
Shree bechara.. haha!!
Sam ne SHree ko pucha ki use team sunai-dikhayi deti he??
waiting to know his answer!!
do continu soon
thanks for pm
do send me blog link!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Sameer ko Aisha ki awaj sunai de rahi hai...aur usse lag raha hai ki woh pagal ho raha hai...😆😆😆
Sakshi ki baat sahi hai...iss baar akashvani kyu nahi hui???😕😕😕
LOL...Yamraj bhi partiality karte hai...😆😆😆
Receptionist...😆😆😆
LOL...Like the part where Shree was answering to team & Sameer thinking he is answering to him...😆😆😆
"Chotu : hum atma hai hume koi galt fehmi kaise ho skti hai
Shree : jab upper wale parmatma ko galatfehmi ho skti hai k tum logo ka time pura ho gya aur wo tum logo ko le gya... fir tum log to sirf atma hi ho..."...Yahan kis galat fehmi ki baat ho rahi hai???...😕😕😕
LOL...Sameer ne Shree se yeh kya puch liya...🤣🤣🤣

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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