Arakshi SS: The Choices we make.. Part 3 - Pg 11.. *Complete*

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Nice concept
i am trilled right now
will she survive
waiting for next part

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Very nice start .. high on emotions..again at the same point, at the verge of losing the one who trust him.

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Emotional diwali gift it was
the begining from the fanna line was amazing refersh some memories from that movie
now coming to the update speechless the portray of sikknader n arjun face off very well wrritten
b that bloddy helllsikki or i can say coward sikki putting sakshi in between the fight
glad that sakshi trust him reaallly unpredicable she is cont soon di

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yams.s

@yams.s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome update

Arjun and Saakshi's encounter with Sikander was superb

Sikander trying to make Arjun emotionally weak but Saakshi supporting him

At last Saakshi helped him kill Sikander. but her own life is in danger

Continue Soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

It was brilliant..
Your description about the happenings..felt real..
Very well written..it was emotional..😭
I m crying..😭 😭 can't say anything more..
Will wait for the next part..
cont soon..thanks for pm..

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

*don't remember if I put res or not... hehe... short term amnesia... hehe*

(") * (")

Hatishoo!

Sniff...

Sob...

*rubbing my eyes...*

Beautiful quote...nice choice...

Ohhh... wait... I forgot to add something... hehe...

STATUTORY WARNING : This reader turned very emotional while reading this isliye iss comment main bohot sobs or sniffs honge... 🤣 pleej isme koi logic mat dhundiyega... haha... ab toh bhai bhagvan bhi tak chuka hai tum sab ko mere comments se bachake bachake toh he's off for HM with his wifey 😉 Destination - ab itti si privacy toh hum de hi sakte hai 😉 🤣

Now what a start... it's fantastic... really!

The lines in italics took my breath away... my reaction *sniff*

Oh Hell No... Not again... not friggin again... 😲

As you had written in the other story abt Arjun... the best weapon he had in his arsenal was himself... likewise out here... no matter of every having every damned resource his power equals to nothingness for the fact his key weapon... which is usually he himself... a part of his emotional being was put down on her knees and had slight blood trickling near her jaw... *sob*

Sakshi's inner conflicts were penned down beautifully... I must say... and the strings they both were attached in... it almost seemed as if they were veins... alive... *sniff*

And the minute Sikandar stepped into the frame... it was as if he stepped on those veins... causing them to burst and spurt out blood... *argh*

I have fallen in love with the way you have sketched Sakshi's mind at this nerve splitting moment... the vulnerabilities...yet the firm stance... she's freaked out... yet determined... amazing man... simply amazing 👏 *sniff*

Arjun's attempt to defeat SIkandar twisted a knot in my heart...

And then... what Sakshi did... 👏

That moment paused my heartbeat...

Continue soon my friend... would be waiting...

Actually wanted to write much more but just lost myself in the update!

~ SOrry for the late comment!

Luv,

Shree

Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

I'll comment only if you give me a gud news here coz you know i dont trust you😈

Do na pleeej**puppy/cow/dog/snake/gorilla/zebra/etc.. eyes😆😆

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
I'll comment only if you give me a gud news here coz you know i dont trust you😈
Do na pleeej**puppy/cow/dog/snake/gorilla/zebra/etc.. eyes😆😆

*puppy/cow/dog/snake/gorilla/zebra/etc.. eyes*

Haye Allah!!

isse kaha kaha good news chahiye??

Avni what is wrong with this GB???

Did YOU too promise something????

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kunchu

*puppy/cow/dog/snake/gorilla/zebra/etc.. eyes*
Haye Allah!!
isse kaha kaha good news chahiye??
Avni what is wrong with this GB???
Did YOU too promise something????

Arre kuch nahi hai K.. Ignore..

Laalchi ho gayi hai bass.. 😆😆😆

No way! I didn't.. *lips sealed*