


Sautan meri yeh kya kiyaaa.. I told you 11 pages weren't enough!
God... I was hooked to it once more! You know I usually comment side by side whenever I read something but this was an exception.. even for the first part I couldn't help but read to the end and then comment. This time too the same happened!
Arrrgh I forget what I wanted to start with! *slaps forehead*
Sooo.
ACP Sahab Mujhe ek hi cheez yaad aayi.. well there's more but later😉
I swear your love for mushkil prem kahanis is rubbing off on me.. coz I absolutely LOVED reading that. I still didn't say what I wanted to start with. *shakes head*
Sautanwaaa.. this is one of the best birthday presents everrr ❤️ haaayeee... hotwa... woh bhi angry wala, angsty romance and HIM!!!! HIM!!!!!
His songgg...I dieddd... of course you intended that didn't you? *raises eyebrows* Evil sautan! But no seriously, love youuu for continuing this and not forgetting about it (hum kabhi aapko bhoolne thodi na denge! *evil smirk*😈) .. hospital wala love abhi bhi baaki hai, mind you! 😈So anyway as I was saying! Thank you sooo muchhh (birthdays mein thank you allowed hai!) for dedicating this to me... it means soo much you know ❤️
Secondly... HIMMM!!!! Aa jao Oxford Street.. I am all ready with my tanpura (got it from Amazon btw)😆😆😆
Soo let's see how else did you keeel me! The quote in the beginning is just mindblowingly awesome!
Darnnn! I love the whole thing from the beginning to the end.. Got majorrr goosebumps when he lifted her in his arms and took her into the house... *ahem* they were alone *ahem* I swear this isn't me speaking... it's his voice🤣🤪
I was wondering how she got hurt and then of course I read the blast.. ouch.
And then him thinking it was all his fault.. no wonder he wanted to push her away. And then you made me cry ... he wanted to be with her but he couldn't .. or he felt he couldn't.. and then Sakshi's pain, her anger... damn! His anger, his fury, his flashing eyes ... call me crazy but even in that serious moment I was like ☺️
And then the slamming against the wall.. woh karna zaroori tha? I had my fists clenched the entire time... how did you even write that? Oh wait! Imagine writing that in first person🤣
Got emotional.. (I knew you'd make me cry) when he kisses her and he leaves her.. I was like no no noo don't go!
"He needed just one moment to touch her, to allow her to touch him, to let her love him, and to love her like he wanted to.."
How do you do this? How how how?
And then you had to put that song... are you kidding? That was the highlight! Now I am going to slip into a dreamworld where only his voice surrounds me 🤪
That's what you wanted didn't you?😆😆
Sighhh and just when the hospital wala love was about to begin, you had to stop! Of course I knew you would, lollipop queen! I was just hoping you wouldn't😆😆
Holi tak ruki na toh😈
Lastly, love you veryyy much sautann for writing this and dedicating it to meee... so this is for you:
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