Arakshi SS: The Choices we make.. Part 3 - Pg 11.. *Complete* - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Yeh mere liye.. sautan wala haq😛 😳 Resss
Unress!

Did you expect me to survive that?

*thud*
*wakes up with dreamy eyes*
*thud*

Sautan meri yeh kya kiyaaa.. I told you 11 pages weren't enough!

God... I was hooked to it once more! You know I usually comment side by side whenever I read something but this was an exception.. even for the first part I couldn't help but read to the end and then comment. This time too the same happened!

Arrrgh I forget what I wanted to start with! *slaps forehead*

Sooo.

ACP Sahab Mujhe ek hi cheez yaad aayi.. well there's more but later😉

I swear your love for mushkil prem kahanis is rubbing off on me.. coz I absolutely LOVED reading that. I still didn't say what I wanted to start with. *shakes head*

Sautanwaaa.. this is one of the best birthday presents everrr ❤️ haaayeee... hotwa... woh bhi angry wala, angsty romance and HIM!!!! HIM!!!!!


His songgg...I dieddd... of course you intended that didn't you? *raises eyebrows* Evil sautan! But no seriously, love youuu for continuing this and not forgetting about it (hum kabhi aapko bhoolne thodi na denge! *evil smirk*😈) .. hospital wala love abhi bhi baaki hai, mind you! 😈So anyway as I was saying! Thank you sooo muchhh (birthdays mein thank you allowed hai!) for dedicating this to me... it means soo much you know ❤️

Secondly... HIMMM!!!! Aa jao Oxford Street.. I am all ready with my tanpura (got it from Amazon btw)😆😆😆

Soo let's see how else did you keeel me! The quote in the beginning is just mindblowingly awesome!

Darnnn! I love the whole thing from the beginning to the end.. Got majorrr goosebumps when he lifted her in his arms and took her into the house... *ahem* they were alone *ahem* I swear this isn't me speaking... it's his voice🤣🤪

I was wondering how she got hurt and then of course I read the blast.. ouch.

And then him thinking it was all his fault.. no wonder he wanted to push her away. And then you made me cry ... he wanted to be with her but he couldn't .. or he felt he couldn't.. and then Sakshi's pain, her anger... damn! His anger, his fury, his flashing eyes ... call me crazy but even in that serious moment I was like ☺️

And then the slamming against the wall.. woh karna zaroori tha? I had my fists clenched the entire time... how did you even write that? Oh wait! Imagine writing that in first person🤣

Got emotional.. (I knew you'd make me cry) when he kisses her and he leaves her.. I was like no no noo don't go!

"He needed just one moment to touch her, to allow her to touch him, to let her love him, and to love her like he wanted to.."



How do you do this? How how how?

And then you had to put that song... are you kidding? That was the highlight! Now I am going to slip into a dreamworld where only his voice surrounds me 🤪

That's what you wanted didn't you?😆😆

Sighhh and just when the hospital wala love was about to begin, you had to stop! Of course I knew you would, lollipop queen! I was just hoping you wouldn't😆😆

Holi tak ruki na toh😈

Lastly, love you veryyy much sautann for writing this and dedicating it to meee... so this is for you:


Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Reallly awsomeee update...lovsd it alot!!!!!! con.sooonnn...

p.s.sorry for short...exam time...plzz keeep pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Awesome update
Loved it
Emotional kar diya yaar
Amazing
Sakshi is fine
Great
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54


STATUTORY WARNING : THE AUTHOR IS NOT LIABLE FOR ANY OF THE WORDS OR PHRASES MENTIONED BELOW...

WHY NO GOD JIs... C'MON, THEY NEED SOME BREAK WITH THEIR WIFEY NAA???

(now with the ring on your finger you do know how important such breaks are *evil grin*😉)

Oh Em Jee... Am I mentioned... again...

*blowing my nose... into a tissue and throwing it - Swach Bharat... haha..*

Oh God... I am terribly emotional right now... *pause for a minute* hmm...

I think not only Filmfare but now I can prepare my speech for IIFA as well...

Oh oh oh oh oh me an angelll!!!! *udeee... udeee asmaano khwaabon ke parindeyyy*

Dekha... saari janta dekh lo! Main ek nadaan angel hoon! Samjhe ya samjhaaun??? Hmm???

Arrey what do you mean by not hassoing! Dekha na mera smile kitna badia hai!

Dear Avantika ji oh I mean... Avni... hai na?

I want to hug you so so so so so tightly for the gorgeous bit of update and yeshhh I second all those people who think this was not enough 🤣

Ahem... coming back,

For the first half I was like... wait a second... WTH... where am I... have I missed out a part or something? I scratched my head...

And trust me when Arjun the great took his great idiotic decision to leave this one woman who coincidentally means a lottt to him...

I had two things in mine

1) It's Avantika ji's story so calm down your nerves Shree, that guy will seriously come back, with some frenzy kisses and if she is too happy the future generation preparation too... and yeah, a confession in between too... *just chill chill just chill..*

2) ARJUN... MAIN TERA THE END KAR DUNGI... HOW CAN YOU BE SUCH AN IDIOT... AKRAMAND AGAINST HIM... RUKOOO... SOMEONE STOPPP HIMMM...

Phew... so yeah, you can very well imagine that I was in the house *closing my eyes during kissi scene, you know na how innocent I am (puppy smile) and after that* trying to like bolt the door so as to he doesn't exactly get out... but it failed :(

Anyways I am run down by Cold... Grr... *chun chun ke badla lungi cold!* and uske upar such a sentimental moment, I was like all teary eyes... ppl r like... okay, guess you have a real bad cold with all tears around...

I am like : Cold + Sentimental love + angry love + kiss + sudden departure = Me looking all red and teary!

When Arjun was leaving I was literally throwing tissues at him *umm that's the only thing I had in my hands*

And yesh... this is none other than the famous angsty seksy waala love... ka trailer *Wink* I love you bucket loads so much for this you know! Aapne mera bharosa ko tutne nahi diya!






And then I get to know it's a flashback, I literally felt a bucket of ice cold water on me *even though I hv a temp of 100... hihi*

I was like yesh... bhasrosha kalo... toh shilf Avni ji pe! Not even Ambuja cement offers that amount of trust and guarantee...

So wiping away any remnants of moisture I was all prepared for an exhausted Sakshi and an equally exhausted Arjun to have a tete a tete...

To read [To be continued]

GRRR...

But then I know... Holi ki aage aa jayegi.. toh *balle balle*

By the way, the song... beautiful *sniff* the quote *even more beautiful*

You are a brilliant author dear! Why don't you like start writing books eh? Like you could start your own collection of short stories *grinning* oh then... shit, I would have to buy them...

Hahah... okay I am not that kanjoos, I will just xerox it from one of my friends...

Haha... okay I am terrible.. nahi nahi... I will definitely buy :D

Loads of love,

Shreee

P.S : Thought to write a bigger comment, par iss fever ne jo attackwa kiya... haini hai mera the ends ho gaya as of now!

P.P.S : Lovely quote and song!

P.P.P.S : I just thought if the flashback of Arjun and Sakshi could be put into a GIF...

This is the best one I got...

(Do the nots the kills the mees...) 🤣


/ over here Panini cries so Chowder hugs her... in case you can't see there's another one below...



🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣
Edited by Armagadon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
wow fantastic
superb wonderful
just amazing love it
awesome update tha
eagerly waiting 4 next...
plz continue soon n thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
First time I am reading something after months. That was ... I am speechless.
The pain, the fear, all of it was just too poignant.

Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
First I loved the author"s note
Funny ...
Awesome update
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
wowww so good
emotional
arjun sakshi KO khud se dur Karna chahata tha
angry wala love
sakshi is back
arakshi lovely
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Fabtastic,!
It was tooo emotional!!
But finally she is back
Waiting for next one..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
wow
amazing update

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