Arakshi SS: The Choices we make.. Part 3

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Avantika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

res me first

Me back...

Haye Genie!! ye kya kar diya yaar!!

back to emotionally crippled stage as always!!

Not that I am complaining at alll

Diwali pathaka seedhe dil pe hi laga!!

What a description making me fear every second.

aaj tho bht louve shouve milegi aapko

apki khair nahi

par fikar not, we both 'angels' are there to help u out na... from our gundi

sachi yaar... could see every scene, every drop of blood in front of me...

Love u yaar!!

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_shadesnature_

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Posted: 10 years ago

Please write short chapter I know I am the only one in this forum to demand this but what to do it's tough to read dear

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Res

Unress

Yeahh, guess who's back?😎

I'm still in the Diwali moood and I can hear firecrackers around mee! He he

Anyway, that had nothing to do with the update😛

So so so I read it in the morning since I couldn't help myself..and you know how much I loveee to comment at night and soo here I am 😛

Eeesh that quote in the beginning.. I can only hear Kajol saying "Tere ishq mein meri jaan.. fanaa ho jaye." *thud*

Like I said before.. I was completely glued to my screen like:

You described it all so beautifully that I could hear his voice, see the pain in his eyes (which tore me into little pieces )

Why why does he have to go through so much? *sobs*

And poor Sakshi... but then I like how she got a hold on herself, watching him break down in front of her own eyes.. sigh..

And then it was happening all too quickly.. the bullets, the knife.. I was actually reading and re-reading to convince myself that what happened was indeed real (ok not literally real, but in the fic)

When Arjun fired those bullets into him... I was like yeah!!

Now both are shot.. and you had to stop there. Sigh!

Ok, me shall wait coz I know how busyy you are

*sniff* ok a little emotional now...

Update sooonishhh (as soon as you can.. I wouldn't even mind if you delay my request he he he he he☺️)

Me is waiting for the next part *heart eyes*

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

res/unres...

yuhhooo!!!! a new arakshi story...first of all thanx for writting it...!!**happy dance**...
coming to update its just amazing ...!!!!Really love ur wriitting skills di!!! the way u described their emotion his pain nd her feel was just brilliant...!!! made me cry ...!!bt then happy that finally he got what he deserves!!!! hope they both are fine!!! Con.ssoonnn!!!!

sorry for late unres..!!!!

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Avantika

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
Please write short chapter I know I am the only one in this forum to demand this but what to do it's tough to read dear

Hey.. Im sorry that you find it tough to read.. thanks for pointing out..

I don't know how it works with other writers, but I always have a set start and end point planned out for every update. So I hardly pay any attention to the length of my Chapters..

And besides, due to my irregular update schedules, I sometimes treat my readers to long and double chapters!

Errm.. I really don't think I can change any of that.. (Maybe u can just split it yourself while reading..)

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Brilliantly written...
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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 10 years ago

Fantastic start dear

Sikander is making Arjun weak by gunpointing to Sakshi. Arjun said that Sakshi doesn't mean anything to her. That's not true Arjun n u also know that.

Arjun pleaded infront of that bl***y Sikki for Sakshi's life😭😭😭 No Arjun no we can't see u like this😭😭😭

Arjun is hurt n Sakshi was shot.

Arjun iss baar apne pyaar ko apne se door math hone dena

It was fantastic dear. Thanks for such a Deepavali gift. Lovely