Arjun-Sakshi FF : Wada Raha... (Part 11 pg 34)22/7

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awwwsssmmm Start
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Very Interesting...
Roshni n Sakshi were best friends...
Sam remembered Sakshi...
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM

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deffa

@deffa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Quiet new concept...

Sakshi n Roshni bff...

Cont soon

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hi..
Firstly wish you a very happy Diwali..

About the story..Its was an awesome start..
Sakshi and Roshni are Bff..Sam recognized her..Arjun doesn't know about her yet..Roshni was hiding something from Arjun and that promise..curious to know more..
Will wait for the story to unfold..

If I'm not wrong "Life goes on" is your 1st story right..???

cont soon.

Edited by Swara85 - 11 years ago

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Happy Diwali...🤗🤗🤗

Before commenting one request...Can I have frequent updates...😃😃😃...plzzz🤗🤗🤗

Awesome start...

Roshni-Sakshi are( or were ) good friends...😃😃😃

Why Sakshi dont like her birthday??😕😕😕

Roshni has met Arjun same as show...😃😃😃

Sameer guessed her right...😃😃😃

Roshni was in danger at the time of call...but why she didn't informed Arjun or Sameer???😕😕😕

Why Roshni took that promise???😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Nice start

Awesome update

Loved it

So Sakshi is Roshni's Bff

interesting

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i guess this is one of the few Arakshi story that i am following KG😊

yep i am following..so dont ever forget to pm me..😃
A bang on start..

rosh and saki are best of frnds...and the connection between them is arjun..
Sam too plays an important role..a role much more than we could imagine..😳😳

waiting for the story to unfold..

itne se dil nehi bharta...

continue soon re...thanks for pm..😊

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

-Unres-

🥳 Your first full-fledged Arakshi Fic! And I couldn't have been happier.. Although I may have said it several times in the past, phir se repeating.. I love everything that you write, even when you make us cry, gove us goosebumps with the reality checks, or keep us and your characeters pining to be together (Yesh! Khamoshiyaan, it is.. Ab tak tadapti hoon sochke!) 😛Anyhow.. Ignore me.. I'm just crazed out with tons of samples today.. 🥱

So, the beginning was just how I expected it to be.. Full of mystery, hid so much, yet revealed so much about Sakshi.. Especially, her relationship with her bestie, Roshni which I feel is the heart of this story, so far..

The bangles! Uff!! Mereko bhi chahiye.. you know when my birthday is, hai na? 😉

Jokes apart, her entry into the ETF was just like how it was on the show, a recap of pleasant memories.. And thank you for that.. That scene played out in my head..

Aah! The first meet.. Sakshi se zyada toh main nervous thi..

It seems as if he's changed a lot, since Roshni's death, obviously.. So much so that the Arjun in the past and present seem like two different people..

Oh and the added twist, that Sameer realises that Sakshi knows more than he's letting on, is a superb move.. I've always wanted the CV's to explore a bit more on Sameer-Roshni-Arjun's relationship, but khair, ab toh bolke bhi apna time nahi waste karna chahti unpe..

Darn! The flashbacks.. It's obvious that Roshni was in some kind of deadly trouble.. But why not tell Arjun or Sam? Of course, there has to be a very solid reason na..

Baap re! Bomb phoda tumne toh diwali pe..

All in all, the beginning is very very intriguiging.. Typical K style.. Loaded with emotions, suspense and Arjunwa.. 😉

Waiting to watch how the plot unfolds and how each one one of them deals with the aftermath of realisations..

Thank you soo much for giving in to our demands, and penning down one.. Loved it, as always.. (Ab bass kissi tarah se Ritu ko patana hai..) 😉😆😆

Lots of love.. 🤗

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago

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ashmi

@ashmifebaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome start...
new thought...
very nice concept ...
continue soon and
plz pm me...

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Awsumm Start Heli Di..😊 So u also started to write on ArAkshi.. Though I dont like them but I wud follow this story only cuz of you.. So Sakshi And Roshni are best friends!! Loved Their FB's Cutee..❤️ Par what is Sakshi hiding? Sameer knoes her but what promise did Roshni gave her?? Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

New story 😲 😃

well i never had or have or will have any issue with Any couple as long as Arjun is there & the story is good 😳. & i have full confidence in your writings 👍🏼

Very nice start it was 👏 (no wonder 😆)

the little flashback scenes... Sakshi's state of hesitation...a bit lost... her entry in the office... & Arjun's not-so-happy reaction... It was perfect 👍🏼

Its indeed a bit similar to ur previous ff... but here the Girl is a friend of Roshni... & that makes a very big difference 😊

will wait for more 😳

P.s. upto December i May or May Not be a bit irregular with my comments.once i am accustomed with the changes in my professional field i will be regular again. ok 😊

Edited by shreya09 - 11 years ago