Arjun-Sakshi FF : Wada Raha... (Part 11 pg 34)22/7 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
AMAZING UPDATE
VERY WELL WRITTEN
CONTINUE SOON
THANKS FOR PM.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Nice update..
Loved Sam-Sakshi's convo and esp the part where she mentions Samjun friendship.
Arjun is feeling like he knows her..
About Roshni..many questions..will wait for you to unfold the mystery.
Love the way this story is proceeding..
Thanks for pm.
Excuse for the small comment.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
awesome update. ... nyce concept indeed.
sakshi and roshni share some secret ...
whose face has rosh seen... ??
loved sam-saki convo..
um loving the story .
contd. soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
hi kunchu di🤗
lovely !!! ...u really made me nostalgic i miss arjun sakshi😳
that too the way u write❤️
so saki has joined etf ! well i don't know why but sakhsi's lost look something i really like 🤪 me
the way she answered arjun ! smart hai kudi😛
and rosh was totally fida on arjun😉...loved ro sakshi friendship😃
and arjun will not leave a single clue to know what is sakshi up to
ro and sakshi shared password😆😊 update soon di🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
I knowww.. I'm like super superrr late in commenting!
So anywaaay..coming back to this!
KK, kya story likh rahi hoo! Bherry bheryy interesting and kya lollipop hai😆
Ok.. soo the last line was kinda scary and haunting.. and now am thinking.. whose face? Sikandar?What secret did Roshni know? Actually Sakshi knows something tooo..
And why did she say that everything will be ok?

I realise I am asking too many questions..even though I know that you'll answer them with time😆
Achaa.. I loved that lil Arakshi scene.. lol dono ek doosre ko ghur rahe the😛😆

Alsoo I'm soo loving the Rosh-Saki friendship.. sighh When she says "Raat toh abhi baki hai" it reminded me of my bestie..and our sleepovers lol. At 3 I would start yawning and she would be like duuude u can't sleep! And we would switch on something really random on TV until she starts yawning too 🤣

Chaloo now u update the next part jaldi jaldii okay😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Awesome,
I like the concept.
Keep it up & Keep going
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Phew! I'm on a marathon today, since it seems like I'm going to be suck in lab till 10.. 🥱 Shukar hai, I have my phone charger.. 😛
-Unresed previous comment on Pg. 3)

Moving on to Ch 2..
Soo.. The story unfolds.. Firstly, one girlfriend wali kissi for the beginning paras.. Sakshi's apprehensions about being in a new place, and doing something she's never done before sounded so real, and believable.. If only.. *chodo - Aaj toh mann hi mann humari Gundiwali gaaliyan de rahi hoon to you-know-who* The more I read your works, the more I end up cursing you-know-who..

Khair! The case.. *goosebumps* As tragic as it is, such people do exist for real! The team's reactions were so well justified.. And perhaps even Arjun's.. Although he's got to rein in his anger, but why fikar when the Chief is here.. 😉

Eesh.. First case mein hi RR hotness dekhne ko mili! (Oops.. i mean hot jhagda dekhne mila..)

Aah! My most favorite bits in this update.. The way you've described Sakshi and Arjun through each other's eyes.. So subtle, yet so real and to the T..
Chalo, kuch toh progress hai.. Atleast they think they've figured out some bits about the other..

Errm.. I beg to differ.. Ab dekhne layak cheez hai toh ghoorenge kaahe nahi? ❤️ (Phir se! Ignore.. 😛)

And the reply! Although it was a cover-up, I loved it.. He needed to hear that.. To bring him out of his shell, he needs to be instigated and challenged, which is what they attempted to do on the show, but mooh ke bal jaa gire.. 🥱
But here, it seems kinda believable..

Sooo.. He's heard her voice before.. *Come on, Arjun! Think harder* I think it's only a matter of time that he unearths her connection to him, but then again that depends on how well she had hidden herself..
Errmm.. What was his last call to Coelho about? *thinking*


Sakshi-Sam convo.. Absolutely delightful to read..
So he now knows that she's hiding something related to Roshni, and perhaps even Roshni's death.. Wedding mein absence toh samajh aaya, but what's with her father? Maamla seedha hai ya lollipop tha? 😛

As for her advice to Sameer, picture perfect! We end up being so tangled in our misunderstandings, trying to read between the lines that we miss out on the obvious..
Let's hope Sakshi and the revelations will be instrumental in bringing the two friends closer..

Aww.. The bestie's moment.. Such a typical one.. Raat kab nikal jaati hai shuru hi nahi hota, and then we;d go to work looking like zombies.. 😆😆


Damn it, K! You're getting better and better with lollipops.. 😉😆
The last flashback.. Baap re! Reveals so much and yet, hides everything..
So Roshni mentions about a certain face that she saw, and which ended up being her doom..

But why do I feel Sakshi knows more than what you've revealed so far? *sigh! side-effects of an overactive imagination*


So, the premise is set and we get a better understanding on where the characters stand in the present time.. Looking forward to lots of revelations, Arakshi moments and of course lollipops.. 😉

Thanks for the PM and the looong chapter treat.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved Sam-Sakshi convo
the rest part was quite interesting
there are lots of questions still to be answered
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Dear Heli 😳

I love you so much for this Arakshi story... hehe...

Acha chalo... let me start commenting... haila there is so much to write and so less time!

Boohoo...

*sniff* will try my best to write as much as I can...

Inn do chap ke liye comments chota hai...

Par pakki kasam from next chapter onwards I would give acha waala comments... hehe...

So yeah... in short I loved the Sakshi bit... she's different here... and I liked that!

Oh... so Ro and Sak were besties... that's really sweet... luvd their chemistry...

Am really waiting for the next chappy...

Luv,

Shree
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Awesome update...
Sakshi-Arjun noticing each other...😃😃😃
Sam wants to know more but Sakshi didn't told him anything...😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

PS : - Either I m too tired today to understand anything or the update was intended to confused me...

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