Dear Heli,I truly loved this chapter to bits indeed! First of all I really liked the reflective Sakshi that you have made here. You know that is what I was thinking of indeed, as in this Sakshi loves privacy to be her best friend, thus after such a mini chaos, wouldn't she be thinking about this?
Also, I fact that I loved about this girl is that - she doesn't beat around the bush! She simply stated in clear words how she felt that time and what she is indeed.
Hmm... though I wanted to ask you one thing Heli. Agreed she is an illegitimate child - which is sad... but then doesn't she consider extra marital affair as a taboo? I mean no where is it indicated that the wife of her dad was a pain or a terrible person so as to he found true love in Sakshi's mom...
Just this part went little off my head. Why - cause of a friend of mine... yeah I know you got the story.
And here comes Rawte like a gust of wind eh?
Sach main.. aate hi jaise tornado aur hurricane macha diya! Hmm... very reasonable evidences to back up his suggestions. Uff... yeh glares..
No no no... before you think that I am gone *haye re* which I am not... aaayeee... sach main I am not...
If looks could kill - he would have killed Sakshi a billion times now!
Arjun turned back to Rathod. "Meine meri duty bohot jald hi shuru kar diya hai... SIR! Ab aapki bari." Turned to Sakshi. "And You!!! Come with me."
Yeh line padke my heart skipped a beat... no no no... uff mere words ki choice hi ghalat hai... I was like *gulps* for two reasons.
1) Oh no no no... R R going to be at loggerheads?? No no no... not another earthquake and volcano!
2) OH no... Sakshi ki gayi... she is dead
Poor Sakshi :( Bechari ko sab kuch jhelna padta hai yaar! Uff she should carry some anti anger injections in her bag, the minute Rawte is furious - inject kardooo
Woah, Rawte should get an award for intimidating people - Sakshi being the latest one! Yaar bacchi ki jaan logi kya... haha
Jokes apart...
You have depicted his rage brilliantly! You know when I read Rawte getting to know that oops - he got to know about to Sahil and Sakshi's search... then what if Sikandar gets to know???
I really liked the broken Arjun, his shock at things coming to light...
Wait, why is Sakshi hiding things from Arjun??? WHY????
NOOO
If he ever gets to know that she hid from him - she would be skewed meat!
Oh God... my thoughts realised when I read the last paragraph...
I dunno why I feel the lifespan of Sahil Anand just reduced to ash!
Continue soon...
Take care... *tight hugs*
Shree/Arma
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