Arjun-Sakshi FF : Wada Raha... (Part 11 pg 34)22/7

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

Hi kunchu di

awesome update 👏

arjun atlast decided to take someone's help 😃

loved the part when sakshi asks whether she must hide the matter from rathore or sam 😉

sikki was obsessed with rosh 😕

cont soon 🤗

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

i had read this update long back..but couldnt comment...
nways awesomely confusing update it was KG...
siki and rosh?? what are you planning??😕😕
so the pic was the blackmailing agent..but why? what did she see? and how did she land up in his den??😕
i knw u wont tell me..
continue soon...😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Kk.. Main aa gayiii... 😎

Bohot hi late ho gaya iss baar.. But trust me, sach mein time nahi mila to read in peace!

Anyway..

My comments might be shorter this time, dost.. Maaf kar dena.. Coz I've got 5 chapters to cover.. Next time se back to lollipop me.. 😉

Chapter 4:

Phew! Now that's why we call you our reality queen.. The scene at the Commissioner's office was brilliantly written.. Sakshi's apprehension, Arjun's anger and perhaps, even helplessness that he was being forced to share his most sensitive issue with a 'stranger' - Could relate to everything so well!

Again, the car scene, *whispers* Shabbash meri K! 😉 Chupke chupaake romantic scenes likhna toh koi tumse sikhe.. 😛 No, but jokes apart, it's just how it should be.. Sakshi, on one hand is nervous that she has to dig into Roshni's murder investigation with her husband.. And that silent support was just what he needed back then..

And Arjunwa.. You make me fall in love with his vulnerability, all over again.. *Shussh.. Hass matt.. I'm a gone case, you know that by now!)

Arni FB! This is why I don't write Arni! Bohot emotional ho jaati hoon yaar..

They were meant to be such a 'happily ever-after' wala couple! 💔

Sheeesh! Direct sawaal.. Ab kahan jayegi Saki? 😲

*Running off to read the next..* Brb..

Chapter 5

Whoa... That conversation gave me shivers, like really.. How do you do it, woman!

Their helplessness, and not being able to vent out their emotions was really expressed well..

But I really hope Sakshi is able to confide in Arjun soon, so together they can have a lead to atleast start with..

Oh my! Sakshi's past na.. Thodi thodi inkling mili mujhe.. And I also remember a short convo we had before.. I think I kinda know who Sahil is..

Marine Drive!! Mujhe jaana hai.. 😭 I wish I could just dump my work into the bin, and run off.. 🥱

*Off to the next..*

Chapter 6

Oh oh! So he's her step brother.. 😳

I loved the dynamics shared between them.. Such a warm and genuine relationship.. Sach mein, siblings ho toh aise..

Grr.. Her step-mother seemed really evil.. But then again, you can't really blame her.. Not every woman can take it..

But yep, glad that her father, and brother took her responsibility and looked after her..

Soo, Arjun knows about her past.. Accha kiya, confusion cleared.. Varna kitni badiwali misunderstanding ho jaati.. 😆

Oh! And he's also helping her with the case.. Naaice twist in there.. I hope you don't plan to drop him onto a hospital bed.. 😆 *baksh dena pleej!

😲 😲 Sakshi ki toh band bajegi ab! Or perhaps not.. Coz I feel Arjun might understand her need for justice as well..

Chapter 7

Oh My God!! 😲😲

Now that was indeed a very clever twist.. So Roshni was killed coz of something she saw, and not because of Arjun..

Awesome! Coz, honestly, I was getting bored of the ghisa peeta track.. 😛😆 (Apparently the CVs were confused too.. Isliye toh kya 'Babaji ka thullu' diya na end mein..) 🤪

Okay, soo.. The revelations explained a lot.. Phew.. Kk.. Lollipop matt do, main sach mein 'lollipop' style mein revenge loongi..

*Why!* Bangs hands on the wall like a '70s heroine.. I think I know how Rosh was blackmailed..

Kitni dusht ho tum..

Baap re.. Arjun toh gusse se phoot hi jayega..

Waitings for more.. And bhaaging to read the next..

Chapter 8

*Whoaaa* Thud.. Deadly wala.. (Mera aur Sautann ka reincarnation wala nahi.. )

Baap re! Itne khatarnaak idea, Kk.. (O btw, meet me at the adda later.. 😆😆 Tum aur main have got some serious KC this time!) 😆😆

Obsessed lover, Sikandar.. ooi maa.. But was he seriously obsessed, ya phir he wanted to punish her/ensure that she never spilled his secrets.. 😕

Christ! Bass, ab sab chodo.. And goo write... I feel like a fool for having taken so long to read..

Ohkay! Back to Arakshi convo..

*Dreamy* Ok, not the dreamy dreamy kinds, but one that stems out from genuine concern.. Friends bann gaye na.. Nice.. Hopefully, this will ease out the formalities between them..

Sheeesh! Baap re.. How much of this did Sakshi actually know?

Arjunwa is gonna be like a 'phooting' volcano when he learns of it.. 😲

Anyhow.. Moral of the story - This is going great.. You worry too much.. Sach mein.. I'm loving every bit of it..

Thank you for all the PM's and not giving up on me.. Tumhe pata hai na, thodi slow hoon, But I always keep coming back.. 😛

Waitings for more..

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Awesome updates Di

Loved them!

part 7

Sakshi told about her birth to the team.. good! all were really shocked to know it all!

Arjun did his homework nicely! RR duo rocked it again! Sahi tarah se, Sahi logon se, sahi sawal pucho...jawab milega!👏 superb!! he asked Sam to do it.. n he's also doing the same thing!😉

Arakshi convo was beautifully written! Sakshi told him only little details.. taking care of not breaking her promise! She didn't tell him how Siki blackmailed Rosh..

the part.. Siki's was nice one.. he's coming back to Mumbai..!! now this ig gonna be damn interesting!

part 8

this was really answering update.. superb.. got many answers!😃

Sam was not sure that Arjun was convinced so easily! their friendship is really interesting!

Arjun's dream sequence.. it was really beautifully written! fantastic!👏👏

loved Sam-Jun convo.. Arjun said Sorry.. !!😲😃 he asked Sam about Rosh.. but no answer.. why do I feel that may be Sam too knows something..🤔

Sakshi gave the info she collected to Arjun

"He wouldn't know what he shouldn't before it's time" 👏 when will this time come??😒

Arakshi talked again! he wants thant none should know about this case.. specially Sam..

the Siki was really interesting once again..

he loved Rosh.. no it was a one sided madness.. oh.. my..😲🤢

the fb was interesting! superb👏

the story is really going interesting n intriguing!😃

do continu soon

thanks for pm😃

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Awesome update Api..

Loved it very very much..

Superb shock!!!

Totally loved it..

Sorry for the short comment..

Exams are going on..

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dinazz

@dinazz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Amazing update.

Poor arjun... broken man who was once tough.

So atlast sakshi gave him all the findings.

And is helping him.

But what is that mystery that's yet to be uncovered?? Waiting...

Sik is back.!!

And he was crazy for roshni!!! 😲

What did she see that he had to kill her.. ?? ..

Thanks for the pm.

Cont soon.

Sorry for late comment. I was off IF for quite a long time so did not see the pm

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#197

After 2 long months here comes an update!

I am sorry for being late. But I just couldn't sit to write.

Well in this update, the plot may be felt like coming out to be too fast than expected. I was never planning for a long FF. This will be shorter than my other works. So please keep up. Thank you so much for all you support till now.

Couldn't reply to everyone individually. And thanks for waiting.

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#199

res 😃

unres

I had missed this sooo much KK

But itna chotu update koi na.. jo mila hai usse khush hoing😳

The beginning was just too good👏 the way you started off, it touched me... Arjun's past *sniff*

Oh and .. new character? Ohhh.. yeh kaun hai? Sam's sister? I am interested to know more about her! And then oh whaaa? Sahil's or rather Sakshi's apartment was searched?!!!

Hmm so he will be staying at Sam's place.. I don't have very good vibes about this😕

Let's see what happens!

Uh.. I am afraid of the truth Roshni was hiding from him... I think I already know... but will wait for u to reveal it *shudders*

Continue sooon KK🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago