Arakshi FF T2: Mars V/S Venus (Ch 30 - pg 36) *new* - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago
You know what I just read the whole ff i mean from ch 1 to ch 28 today...and it is awesome...dont know what to say...and i really want Sikki and that rotten egg raina to be punished like hell...but in Arjun's slyle.
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Posted: 9 years ago
really sorry for late comment
coming to update...
amazing updates
ch-27
love the way each n every scene was described
arjun pov's was perfectly described
ch-28
aisha's outbrust was too good...👏👏
finally arjun realise his mistake😃😃
sikki and raina really want to kill them😡😡😡
hope sab theek ho jaye
loved it
waiting for the next part
thanx for the pm
cont soon 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update
had a great time reading your stories after a long time.
At last Arjun comes to know about Saakshi's past in the most brutal ways. Aisha's anger on Arjun was understandable but she spoke a bit too much which hurt Arjun Immensely.

Neil making Arjun understand Saakshi's condition. Eager to know how Arjun will react to Saakshi once she is back to normal

Continue Soon


Ah after eons do I see your comment 😳 Glad to see you here. Yes, Arjun and Ayesha share one thing in common - their anger.

Stay tuned to the next chapter to learn more... it will answer "how Arjun will react to Saakshi once she is back to normal"

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Devangana

Sakshi and Arjun both are in so much pain but so are Ayesha and Sameer. Ayesha's outburst was natural. Sameer tried like a true friend to salvage the situation but there was little he could have done. Arjun knows the truth now and also how he was used by Raina and Sik. God save them both now. Awaiting the next part eagerly.


Aww thank you for the nice comment 😳 Haha, well I'll just tell you one thing that I'll try to make this as realistic as possible so don't exactly expect a full on face off...

Well know we'll get to see the brains of Arjun 😳

Originally posted by: ravzs

Soiie fr lt cmmnt

Awesum update

N luvd t

Bring arakshi together

A request continue soon plzzz


No issues, glad you loved the chapter! Hahaha... I can't just bring them together, they need to understand and compromise, repent and apologise 😳 Will tk time but will happen
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

yay..yippee..woohoo!! 🥳*for the end specially!*😆

Haha... thanks 😉
will start from the end, it was most interesting part!👏

Thank you so much, I think this was like the final update when we have a complete brush over on what all happened to Sakshi.

Raina's all contacts deleted, n whoa, Sik is happy! Tables have flipped, that was bound to happen, Arjun's a genius!😎 Itni aasani se thodi hi jaane dega uske dushmano ko?😉! It's going to be really interesting to see what Arjun does!

Na-ah, dimaag hai uska... kaise chalti hai ab dekh 😉

Back to the start!
Superb dear, loved every bit!🤗

Aww... thank u dear <3

Aisha's outburst was written perfectly! 👍🏼 Sam tried to intervene but he couldn't stop her from blasting Arjun! oh..oh..ohh.. She said so harsh words in her anger, now it'll ruin many things!🥺 Anger is person's greatest enemy, it ruins everything!😡 Aisha-Arjun's beautiful bond has burnt in the fire of anger, last thing I'd want to happen in a bro-sis relation😭! what next??🤔

This is the same thing between Arjun and Ayesha. Arjun was drunk and angry and told/did everything he wouldn't have told/done in a sane mind. Ayesha was hurt and angry and told everything she wouldn't had said if she was in another frame of mind.

Dr. Neel is a wonderful doc! I loved his character!❤️ He supported Arjun when he needed the most n helped him to know the truth! 👍🏼

Yeah, Dr. Neel is my permanent doctor for all stories now... haha, the only reference is from Itna karo Na Mujhe Pyaar... Haven't seen much but Ronit Roy is a class apart 😃


Arjun felt really helpless n bearing the accusations from his dear sister was another disaster for him!🥺😭 He got to know what happened with his Sakshi, he was utterly shocked! He realised his mistake, oops, Raina's plot! Now he is ready to give her a tough time n a lesson of her lifetime!😃👏

Well... honestly he deserved every bit of it. Ayesha's wrong not because she shouted at him, but because she questioned his birth and indirectly insulted his mother who had no fault in this matter...

Yep... he's not gonna spare her now 😈

Sakshi has genophobia, It'll be intreresting to see how she deals with it n how Arjun helps her out!😳

Oh yeah... so apparently you'll be up for a treat because personally I am happy how this phase turned out... let's hope you love it too...

Do continu soon😊
thanks for pm

Loads of love,
You know..😛😉!

Bas kario ji! Na na I don't know who u r 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Superbly Written
Ayesha's outburst was natural but her words hurt Arjun
Finally Arjun came to about Sakshi's past n with help of Neel he realized his mistake
Hope Arjun will be able to heal Sakshi's pain with his Love
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM


Glad you loved the entire update! Well yes, realisation is the first step for Arjun, just the first! Do you think Sakshi would like to face Arjun now?

Stay tuned :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Incredible!! It was just amazing.I stumbled and fell in love with the concluding lines of the update.Really it was a treat to read.I love it when you introduce a psychological disorder in updates and explain it so clearly that I feel I am sitting in a psychology lecture hall.Truly you carve out this idea commendably.Its needless to say how beautiful the lines were carrying emotions,guilt and comfort.As always the excitement climbs an inch higher than before.

Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits..😊😊



Glad you loved it! I truly look forward to your comments! You know i always re read my update after your comment 😆 Well I am happy that I had been able to define the condition pretty well 😳 But in a serious note, that is a very difficult condition to face with.

Stay tuned to know what more comes up 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

You know what I just read the whole ff i mean from ch 1 to ch 28 today...and it is awesome...dont know what to say...and i really want Sikki and that rotten egg raina to be punished like hell...but in Arjun's slyle.
😛


Glad you read the entire thing 😳 Means a lottt to me! Hahaha... oh yes they'll be punished well enough 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

really sorry for late comment

no issues
coming to update...
amazing updates
thank you

ch-27
love the way each n every scene was described
arjun pov's was perfectly described

glad you loved it

ch-28
aisha's outbrust was too good...👏👏

yeah, she wouldn't spare Arjun so easily.

finally arjun realise his mistake😃😃

yep!

sikki and raina really want to kill them😡😡😡
hope sab theek ho jaye
loved it
waiting for the next part
thanx for the pm
cont soon 😊

thank you so much for your comment! means a lot! stay tuned aur jo bhi tum chaho... dheere dheere aa jayega 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update Gudiya👏👏👏 I lubh u

U have penned down Arjun's POV very well. Aww he felt for Sakshi from a long time. That's very good to know. Even he was with Raina his heart was dragging him towards Sakshi. That's definitely love☺️

Sakshi ne suicide karli?😲😲😲 Oh my God. Aur Arjun is shattered to realise that may be he is the reason behind this😲😲😲

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