CASE FF: GUNNAH - THE UNFORGIVABLE MISTAKE [SHIFTED TO BLOG] - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
thanx 4 co-operation dear
read all parts
it's outstanding n mindblowing
I m crazy about ARIYA
but I must say ur story is unparalleled
though RIYA is a murderer but
I can't hate her
poor girl😭😭😭
feeling sad 4 ARJUN
at last the mastermind SKR , I think he is the real culprit
n gr8 looser
ek papa kaise yea sab kar sakte
u know dear u r a brilliant writer👏👏👏
waiting 4 a ARIYA story😊😊😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Finally Read It! Awsumm Update Goldie! Love you lots..❤️🤗 Yes! Yes! Yes! Mera hunch sahi nikla!!!!! 😃 It was Riya!!! Dhinka Chika!! I cud guess ki Riya may have sum feelings for Arjun. But kya yeh sach me pyaar hai? Love is an addiction not obsession..!! Pyaar humesha paane ka nhi dene ka bhi naam hai..!! Yeh bilkul bhi zaroori nhi ki woh Insaan aapko mil hi jaye!! Almost unknowingly, she has killed Arjun too..!! How can she? I mean, if she loved Arjun. Why didnt she find her happiness in his happiness? Ussey kya laga tha ki yeh sab karke Arjun usske saath khush rahega?? Apne pyaar ko paane ke liye kisi ka murder karna?? And Arjun's Dad?? 🤬🤬🤬 Agar He didnt like Roshni, then he cud have broken all contacts wid his son. Why did he killed that innicent woman? He had no right to get her murdered neither Riya who murdered Roshni just thinking about herself! Love isnt selfishness.. A Very Thrilling End! Loved It! ❤️ Tjanxx fr pm..!!

THanks Dear SHanu glad u liked it love u 🤗
Yes love has various faces & this is one of them
I dont blame riya here she was the mental patient & was used dear well thats my POV
keep Liking my work 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

from ch 4 - 7..

Awesome updates Di..
loved them all..
the case proceedings are going really well.. n damn interesting!👏
lab ki footage check ki.. kuch nahi mila.. well Riya wahan gayi thi.. didn't the team find anything unusual.. ?? this is umm..😕 Arjun ne itna kuch chhod diya?? 😉 but I must say.. Riya did everything very cleverly.. nice moves👏
Dr. Khanna to help SamJun.. but what's this.. he 's killed?? oh.. Riya did it na? but this too so stealthily.. fantastic!
Naitesh.. ye bhi mar gaya..
Di.. itne saare dead ends.. devaa re!!
Mr. Kamat.. ye bhi interesting banda he.. dekhte he ye kya karta he..
SK.. now why is he here?? wo Rosh ke baare me aisa kaise keh sakte he?? really disgusting😡 loved Arjun's replies!
ab Riya aa gayi unki vakalat karne.. waah kya baat he👏 Arjun ne phir use chup karwa diya.. nice 😉
n now.. sulakhana running with her kid.. why?? .. ok.. I'll read it.. maybe tommorow..
till then ..good bye😃
n it's going fantabulous!!

Thanks dear Neha
riya wahah dava lene gayi thi so nothing unusual
haan bahut saare dead end hai 😆😆
he is an egoestic man so he can do so
poora pado aaram se comment karna
keep loving 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

thanx 4 co-operation dear

read all parts
it's outstanding n mindblowing
I m crazy about ARIYA
but I must say ur story is unparalleled
though RIYA is a murderer but
I can't hate her
poor girl😭😭😭
feeling sad 4 ARJUN
at last the mastermind SKR , I think he is the real culprit
n gr8 looser
ek papa kaise yea sab kar sakte
u know dear u r a brilliant writer👏👏👏
waiting 4 a ARIYA story😊😊😊

THanks SHreyanshi dear
Glad you liked it
yes she is mentally weak
& SKR is really a culprit .. papa nahin balki ek ahankaari nsaan kar sakta hai
keep loving my work & love u lots🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
15 parts 😲 ok i need time to read so comnent will come little late 😳 till then

ressu 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

15 parts 😲 ok i need time to read so comnent will come little late 😳 till then

ressu 🤣

Take your time dear no hurry 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
i read all in one...
it was awsome...
nice story and concept...
somehow i felt before the reading the whole story that riya was the killer...
poor girl... she had to suffer so much...
it wasnt her fault completely...
arjun father was such a******e... how could he do to his son and because of him riya had to die...
all the emotions were portrayed beautifully...
very nice...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aptl123

i read all in one...

it was awsome...
nice story and concept...
somehow i felt before the reading the whole story that riya was the killer...
poor girl... she had to suffer so much...
it wasnt her fault completely...
arjun father was such a******e... how could he do to his son and because of him riya had to die...
all the emotions were portrayed beautifully...
very nice...

Thanks Apti dear
glad you liked it yes thats true
keep loving the stories 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ch 8 - 15
huff.. finally..completed reading it😆
Awesome..
Fantastic!!
Loved it a lot..
Sulakshna n her son r now safe n sound.. glad that they r saved from the botherings of Teja bhai.. good!
Mr. Kamat also clean.. nice one!
dheere dheere ek ek suspect kam hua par case aur ulajhta gaya.. superbly written!
Raesha.. bahot accha plan banaya.. really nice idea Aisha👏👏 n smart moves
then the involvement of SK .. this was nicely portrayed
Sk ko apne karmo ki saza bhi mili.. 👏
Riya's past was painful.. but whatever she did was also wrong
btw I loved that dialogue.. 'Aurat jab kisise nafrat karti he to use barbaad kar deti he' don't remember it exactly but it was something like this!
Riya confessed her crime n died..
but poor Arjun.. he lost his trust on relations.. specially after knowing about his dad's involvement in it.. but still he stood strong.. 👏
thanks for pm😊

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