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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Ch 8 - 15
huff.. finally..completed reading it๐Ÿ˜†
Awesome..
Fantastic!!
Loved it a lot..
Sulakshna n her son r now safe n sound.. glad that they r saved from the botherings of Teja bhai.. good!
Mr. Kamat also clean.. nice one!
dheere dheere ek ek suspect kam hua par case aur ulajhta gaya.. superbly written!
Raesha.. bahot accha plan banaya.. really nice idea Aisha๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ n smart moves
then the involvement of SK .. this was nicely portrayed
Sk ko apne karmo ki saza bhi mili.. ๐Ÿ‘
Riya's past was painful.. but whatever she did was also wrong
btw I loved that dialogue.. 'Aurat jab kisise nafrat karti he to use barbaad kar deti he' don't remember it exactly but it was something like this!
Riya confessed her crime n died..
but poor Arjun.. he lost his trust on relations.. specially after knowing about his dad's involvement in it.. but still he stood strong.. ๐Ÿ‘
thanks for pm๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks Dear Neha
glad you liked it
yes exactly Arjun lost all the trust
but he still has friends like sam & ETF members
Stay tuned To my new story ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
yepppiii...i just see full story update
thanks for pm
15 part..and i am not starting reading
i want some time to read...then i will comment๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naina25

yepppiii...i just see full story update
thanks for pm
15 part..and i am not starting reading
i want some time to read...then i will comment๐Ÿ˜Š

Take your time dear ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Thanks Dear Neha
glad you liked it
yes exactly Arjun lost all the trust
but he still has friends like sam & ETF members
Stay tuned To my new story ๐Ÿ˜Š yes! I will.. read the cs n prologue.. really interesting.. will read n comment on 4 parts by sunday.. hope so!๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 10 years ago
Not n issue dear ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for late comment๐Ÿ˜Š
nice story...really different one๐Ÿ˜Š
how a father can do this๐Ÿ˜ก
feeling bad for arjun and as well as riya also๐Ÿ˜ญ
arjun's father use riya to kill roshni๐Ÿ˜ก
poor arjun ๐Ÿ˜ญ
thanks for pm

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: naina25

sorry for late comment๐Ÿ˜Š
nice story...really different one๐Ÿ˜Š
how a father can do this๐Ÿ˜ก
feeling bad for arjun and as well as riya also๐Ÿ˜ญ
arjun's father use riya to kill roshni๐Ÿ˜ก
poor arjun ๐Ÿ˜ญ
thanks for pm

Thanks Naina
Glad you liked it
keep loving my work ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sweet start...๐Ÿ˜Š Arni love each other very much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Sameer...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ their best friend...๐Ÿ˜ƒ n still a bachelor...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† Loved d dhamkis Rosh gave to Sam๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Sam loves Aisha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ but didn't confess yet...๐Ÿ˜”

Team's cute bonding...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ All r happy with each other in their lives๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Roshni brutally murdered๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ All shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Arjun in shock

Arjun determined to punish the criminalโญ๏ธ

Sameer n his family supporting Arjun๐Ÿ˜Š Suryakant Rawte doesn't even care for Arjun

Case so going good...๐Ÿ‘ OMG!! Seems the killer is from ETF...๐Ÿ˜ฒ But no clue abt the missing knife n killer๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜”

Riya consoling Arjun๐Ÿ˜Š Dr. Khanna helping ETF๐Ÿ˜Š

Team got a clue...โญ๏ธ but again a dead end๐Ÿคข

Riya seems too possessive abt her things...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Dr. Khanna got to know abt the killer...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜Š but he got killed before Samjun can reach him n burnt d evidence๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Why d hell did Suryakant Rawte come to meet Arjun?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฒ How can Suryakant talk like that to Arjun abt Roshni?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Looks like he has really gone nuts...๐Ÿ˜ก

What's Riya talking?????๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Kamat has enemity against Khanna...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Naitesh n Sulakshna case solved...๐Ÿ˜ƒ they r not d culprits...๐Ÿ˜ƒ N ETF cracked another racket through them..โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š But still at dead at Roshni's case

Kamat found out something but no clue abt that burnt file... Good they started investigating abt the file๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ

Someone attacked Riya!๐Ÿ˜ฒ All this time I thought that Riya is culprit...๐Ÿ˜ฒ due to her actions...

Aisha gave new pov to the case๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

They got d person who attacked Riya๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธ another racket cracked๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Ranga was told to kill Riya๐Ÿ˜ฒ By Arjun's dad??!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

Now Suryakant is attacked!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Now the case is turning hell more confusing๐Ÿ˜• + interesting๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Raisha's plan๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ It worked!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ But Aisha got hurt

The lost knife is found...๐Ÿ˜ƒ Now what plan has Raisha made?๐Ÿ˜•

Are Choree in Raisha's plan too??๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜• Seems like they r annoying Riya by purpose...๐Ÿ˜ฒ N they were...๐Ÿ˜Š But Aisha didn't tell them the exact plan... Riya is showing reactions which possibly mean she is behind all this...

Riya is strongly reacting...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Arjun scolded her...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Arjun too sensed abt Riya being unwell... Now they will found out d truth abt her...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ whether she is really or not the culprit...

Riya's story is too shocking and saddening๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

OMG!! Riya reached Aisha's home n attacked her...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Riya out of control...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Sameer killed her!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Riya's last words...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

What's Suryakant's ring doing in Riya's home?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Oh God!! Suryakant Rawte was all behind this!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ He used Riya to kill Roshni...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜กThere's no Roshni's fault in what happened... It was all Suryakant's ego...๐Ÿ˜ก He got punished for his crimes๐Ÿ˜Š but Arjun is left heartbroken...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Nice Ending...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Awesome story with lots of twists n turns...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ Last part was most shocking... How can a father do this to his son????๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก But with the help of his friends, Arjun was able to see d truth n punish d culprit n move on...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Do write more...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deffa

Sweet start...๐Ÿ˜Š Arni love each other very much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Sameer...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ their best friend...๐Ÿ˜ƒ n still a bachelor...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜† Loved d dhamkis Rosh gave to Sam๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Sam loves Aisha...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ but didn't confess yet...๐Ÿ˜”

Team's cute bonding...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ All r happy with each other in their lives๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Roshni brutally murdered๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ All shocked๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Arjun in shock

Arjun determined to punish the criminalโญ๏ธ

Sameer n his family supporting Arjun๐Ÿ˜Š Suryakant Rawte doesn't even care for Arjun

Case so going good...๐Ÿ‘ OMG!! Seems the killer is from ETF...๐Ÿ˜ฒ But no clue abt the missing knife n killer๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜”

Riya consoling Arjun๐Ÿ˜Š Dr. Khanna helping ETF๐Ÿ˜Š

Team got a clue...โญ๏ธ but again a dead end๐Ÿคข

Riya seems too possessive abt her things...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Dr. Khanna got to know abt the killer...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜Š but he got killed before Samjun can reach him n burnt d evidence

Why d hell did Suryakant Rawte come to meet Arjun?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ฒ How can Suryakant talk like that to Arjun abt Roshni?๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Looks like he has really gone nuts...๐Ÿ˜ก

What's Riya talking?????๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Kamat has enemity against Khanna...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Naitesh n Sulakshna case solved...๐Ÿ˜ƒ they r not d culprits...๐Ÿ˜ƒ N ETF cracked another racket through them..โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜Š But still at dead at Roshni's case

Kamat found out something but no clue abt that burnt file... Good they started investigating abt the file๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ

Someone attacked Riya!๐Ÿ˜ฒ All this time I thought that Riya is culprit...๐Ÿ˜ฒ due to her actions...

Aisha gave new pov to the case๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

They got d person who attacked Riya๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผโญ๏ธ another racket cracked๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Ranga was told to kill Riya๐Ÿ˜ฒ By Arjun's dad??!!

Now Suryakant is attacked!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Now the case is turning hell more confusing๐Ÿ˜• + interesting๐Ÿ‘

Raisha's plan๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ It worked!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ But Aisha got hurt

The lost knife is found...๐Ÿ˜ƒ Now what plan has Raisha made?๐Ÿ˜•

Are Choree in Raisha's plan too??๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜• Seems like they r annoying Riya by purpose...๐Ÿ˜ฒ N they were...๐Ÿ˜Š But Aisha didn't tell them the exact plan... Riya is showing reactions which possibly mean she is behind all this...

Riya is strongly reacting...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Arjun scolded her...๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Arjun too sensed abt Riya being unwell... Now they will found out d truth abt her...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ whether she is really or not the culprit...

Riya's story is too shocking and saddening๐Ÿ˜ญ

OMG!! Riya reached Aisha's home n attacked her...

Riya out of control...๐Ÿ˜ฒ Sameer killed her!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Riya's last words...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

What's Suryakant's ring doing in Riya's home?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Oh God!! Suryakant Rawte was all behind this!!!๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ He used Riya to kill Roshni...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜กThere's no Roshni's fault in what happened... It was all Suryakant's ego...๐Ÿ˜ก He got punished for his crimes๐Ÿ˜Š but Arjun is left heartbroken...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Nice Ending...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Awesome story with lots of twists n turns...โญ๏ธ Last part was most shocking... How can a father do this to his son????๐Ÿ˜ก But with the help of his friends, Arjun was able to see d truth n punish d culprit n move on...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Do write more...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thnaks deefa dear
glad you liked it
yes EGO can make people go insane like this
Thanks & keep reading my work ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think you have access sona
as it is the same blog
if not I will give you in the evening

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