CASE FF: GUNNAH - THE UNFORGIVABLE MISTAKE [SHIFTED TO BLOG]

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Hi Guys I am starting a new FF on different forms of love it will have all the ETF characters well I just had a thought & my partner in crime is RIMI thanks a lot dear 🤗 for your wonderful suggestion hope I do justice to this me & my crazy mind kya karoon 🤪 well I hope you all bear with me as before 😊😊😊 I will post the parts soon guys so please give ur feedback on CS n prologue.Hope u all will support us & will like the concept 😊



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GUNNAH - THE UNFORGIVABLE MISTAKE

PROLOGUE: It is said that love makes your life complete. It gives u reason to breathe & makes your life more beautiful & worth living. Love is described as passion, beauty & reason of life as person gets someone who could make his / her sorrows half & happiness double. Love has different forms too it's soft, deep passionate, sacred, & at times insane too it depends on the person what kind of love & affection he brings in his / her life. There is a saying that "Love is blind" as person who is in love cannot think logical that person only thinks from heart & this state of Love is always dangerous as in this state person tends to commit grave mistakes which are unforgivable at times & after that person comes to senses he / she can never undo the things back only thing left is Guilt & remorse on the deeds. Even thou love can bring such consequences but still it's the most beautiful feeling & a wonderful gift given to us by God to make this world a better place & worth living. Love is also called a sacred feeling as you don't have any control on it as at times you fell in love with a person who is completely opposite to you it just happens no one can force anyone to love or hate something that is why love is divine & worship of GOD. True love can never die whatever may be the reason distance, misunderstanding or any other thing it's like a growing age which increases every passing minute & you cannot erase it according to your wish. So this story is about the different forms of love It has passion, friendship, sacrifice & depth of this most beautiful feeling. Love make you rise like a good human being then can make you stoop low as a devil. Enjoy this journey & experiences the power of love with all its forms so you will come to know that how can love transform a person.

KUCH HOSH NAHIN REHTA , KUCH DHYAN NAHIN REHTA

INSAAN MOHOBAAT MAIN, INSAAN NAHIN REHTA

JAZBA HAI YE AISA , SEEDHA DIL KO CHOO LE

ISME KISI BANDISH KA AEHTARAM NAHIN REHTA

ISHQ YOON TO KUCH IBADAT JAISA HAI

WARNA INSAAN DUNIYA SE ISME ANJAAN NAHIN REHTA

MOHOBAAT KI TAAQAT KA HI YE ASAR HAI

ISKO PAANE WAALA KABHI AAM NAHIN REHTA

JUNOON MOHOBAT KA KUCH YOON HAAVI HOTA HAI

YAAR KE LIYE KUCH BHI GUNNAH YA ILIZAAM NAHIN REHTA

KUCH HOSH NAHIN REHTA ,KUCH DHYAN NAHIN REHTA

INSAAN MOHOBAT MAIN INSAAN NAHIN REHTA

CHARACTERIZATION: Characters are:

ACP Sameer Dhamsingh Rathore: A tough cop full fill all his duties towards his nation & family loves his job a sweet natured person by heart loves his Duty always comes first for him Chief Of ETF & friend of arjun riya & aisha




ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte : A hot headed cop never believes going by law Loves his ETF family a lot an emotional & sensitive person. 2nd in command of ETF. Loves his wife Roshni a lot (no past as per serial) friend of sameer aisha & riya




Shreekant sen : Gadget freak of ETF and an intelligent Technical expert a fun loving guy.




Chandrakant Patil : Commando of ETF huge size body but a beautiful and caring heart person .




Riya Mukherjee : A fun loving girl loves to explore things on her own creative & intelligent & a very strong girl. She is orphan & lives alone friend of arjun & sameer & joined ETF 2 Months Back




Liza D cruz: She is forensic expert of ETF a fun loving girl with a bubbly nature. She makes everyone happy around & feels happy with them.




Aisha Kapoor : A beauty with brains a lady with a strong mental strength a tough cop but a beautiful person at heart




Roshni Rawte: Wife of Arjun beautiful person at heart a painter by profession & she loves arjun a lot & can do anything for his happiness.



Mr. Pratap Dhamsingh Rathore & Dhara rathore : Pratap is a retired IG of Mumbai & has very high contacts he still helps department in solving critical cases & Dhara is a house wife & loves her family dearly




Dr Karan Khanna: He is a famous psycatrist of Mumbai & a very well known doctor. He his family friend of Rathors & sameer & arjun respects him a lot




Suryakant rawte: Father of Arjun a very successful business man arjun had left his father to chase his dream of being in police & married roshni




we will add more characters if required as the story progresses.😊

So How Was it please give ur Reviews 😊





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Posted: 10 years ago
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CS N PROLOGUE -- PAGE 1

PART 1---- PAGE 6
PART 2---- PAGE 17
PART 3---- PAGE 26
NOTE : ----- PAGE 35




Edited by GOLD.A - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE : Guys we will update this FF twice in a week depending upon my work & your response too If u don't find the prologue apt n I have less comments I will stop right here n will not update the parts further either will shift this too block for my regular readers I think itna attyachaar kaafi hoga 🤔 so please let me know that weather we should continue or not 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue some one some things
Wrong which they not able to avoid
From there life update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yay! one more story from you! yippiee! woohoo!!
this is a different concept!
really Interesting Cs n prologue!
do continu soon
thanks for pm
waiting for the story to unfold!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue di
continue soon
but I have a doubt
is it on Ariya or Arni
please clear my doubt di
eagerly waiting to know more
nd thanks for pm di
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dear lovely
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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