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Angel_Arya thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
superb
loved it

Although I was a constant reader of the story,I couldn't comment due to some personal reasons.
I hope u understand.Haan,but i did click on the like button 😉

The concept was very nice.
Few good issues which women face in their real life where well put forward here.
Very well written

Aayesha ,
was portrayed as a very strong lady
She performed all her duties so well
Being an officer and supporting her family,
then being a good daughter
and also being a good mother
who very well took care of her sis's son
She didn't think of her own happiness
Sameer very well supported her
The birthday incident wasn't good but yes she didn't have any choice,i think
Sameer's past was also sad
But he decided to move on with Aayesha
sharing her responsibilities equally 😊

Riya,
the things which happened with her
can break any girl
but she decided to fight
she chose the right path
but she got no one on her side
still she got the punishment for the criminal
but again after this,samar didn't leave her
Riya kept alive her dreams
and she became a successfull officer
Arjun very well supported her against Samar
He stood with her and very well understood her
Even when his name was associated with Riya,
he very well answered Samar
Finally Riya got her family back
and married to Arjun
Ruhi as a sister was very nice
She understood Riya
She played an important role and helped Riya

Liza,
strong lady who faced domestic voilence
She supported her family
when her brother wasn't able to
And this happens many times that the ego of a man gets hurt
when a woman performs his duties
Alcohol,without any limit destroys many lives
very well explained
Shree helped her a lot like a true friend
and finally they got married

Special mention to the ETF team
who were no less than a family
supporting each other😊

Nice concept
The story did explain many things,
putting forward many issues all together
👏👏👏👏👏

Not to forget,the banner is wonderful.
👏👏👏👏👏

I hope u don't get irritated with such long comment😉😉

Thanks for all the regular pms😊



deffa thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭 story itni Jaldi katam kar dI 😭 😭
But it was awesome, amazing, beautiful, emotional...,...,..., story 👏

Sam said yes for marriage 👍🏼
Loved Aisha's reaction when Anwesha told her about her marriage proposal 😆 😆 😆
Loved that Raesha moment 😳 😳 naughty Sameer 😆 😉 Aisha ko pehle daraa diya 😆 😆 😉
Ruhi-Arjun convo was nice 😃
Arjun made Riya meet get parents 😃 😃 😉
Finally Riya's father understood her 😊 😊 😊 Riya united with her parents 😃 😊 😃
Ariya ki bhi setting hi gayi 😃 😃 😳
Finally Ariya, Raesha n Shreeza married 😊
Happy that all got their soulmates 😊

Loved ur story very much...
Very inspiring story 😃 👏 👍🏼
Thank you for such a lovely story

Excited for your next story... 😛
Update it soon
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelarya

Awesome
superb
loved it

Although I was a constant reader of the story,I couldn't comment due to some personal reasons.
I hope u understand.Haan,but i did click on the like button 😉

The concept was very nice.
Few good issues which women face in their real life where well put forward here.
Very well written

Aayesha ,
was portrayed as a very strong lady
She performed all her duties so well
Being an officer and supporting her family,
then being a good daughter
and also being a good mother
who very well took care of her sis's son
She didn't think of her own happiness
Sameer very well supported her
The birthday incident wasn't good but yes she didn't have any choice,i think
Sameer's past was also sad
But he decided to move on with Aayesha
sharing her responsibilities equally 😊

Riya,
the things which happened with her
can break any girl
but she decided to fight
she chose the right path
but she got no one on her side
still she got the punishment for the criminal
but again after this,samar didn't leave her
Riya kept alive her dreams
and she became a successfull officer
Arjun very well supported her against Samar
He stood with her and very well understood her
Even when his name was associated with Riya,
he very well answered Samar
Finally Riya got her family back
and married to Arjun
Ruhi as a sister was very nice
She understood Riya
She played an important role and helped Riya

Liza,
strong lady who faced domestic voilence
She supported her family
when her brother wasn't able to
And this happens many times that the ego of a man gets hurt
when a woman performs his duties
Alcohol,without any limit destroys many lives
very well explained
Shree helped her a lot like a true friend
and finally they got married

Special mention to the ETF team
who were no less than a family
supporting each other😊

Nice concept
The story did explain many things,
putting forward many issues all together
👏

Not to forget,the banner is wonderful.
👏

I hope u don't get irritated with such long comment😉😉

Thanks for all the regular pms😊

Thanks dear angali love u lots for your big waala comment 😊
I know not an issue at least the jist that u mention says it all 😊
yes even today too women faces such kind of things
& do stand strongly
That is why i had taken such topic 😊
THanks dear
stay tuned to my new story
I hope to see you commenting on it regularly 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deffa

😭 story itni Jaldi katam kar dI 😭 😭
But it was awesome, amazing, beautiful, emotional...,...,..., story 👏

Sam said yes for marriage 👍🏼
Loved Aisha's reaction when Anwesha told her about her marriage proposal 😆 😆 😆
Loved that Raesha moment 😳 😳 naughty Sameer 😆 😉 Aisha ko pehle daraa diya 😆 😆 😉
Ruhi-Arjun convo was nice 😃
Arjun made Riya meet get parents 😃 😃 😉
Finally Riya's father understood her 😊 😊 😊 Riya united with her parents 😃 😊 😃
Ariya ki bhi setting hi gayi 😃 😃 😳
Finally Ariya, Raesha n Shreeza married 😊
Happy that all got their soulmates 😊

Loved ur story very much...
Very inspiring story 😃 👏 👍🏼
Thank you for such a lovely story

Excited for your next story... 😛
Update it soon

Jaldi 😲 18 parts the wo bhi double
aur kitni badi likhu 🤢
Glad u liked it a lo dear
ya finally ladies got the deserved love & respect
stay tuned to my new story 😊

Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

superb
marvelous
loved it.

Thanks Dear
glad u liked it
stay tuned to my coming story 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Radhika dear
stay tuned to my new story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
khatam kr di...😲 itni jaldi...huh

superb part...mazaaa aa gya
mujhe to lga tha sam pta nhi kya reaction dega anwesha ki baat ka...
but jo reaction dia that was superb...mazaa aa gya...
and aisha bechari dhang se pani pila deti...btao kisi ka pani atakta hai kya gale me...aisha ka baat sun kr pani atak gya...bechari...tension me office pahuchi...mind make up krke gyi thi k aaj to solid galiyan padegi...pr sara mind makeup barbad ho gya...sam ne to haan kr di...comes to ariya...ruhi ne arjun ko btaya k uske dad kitne bimar hai...arjun ne acche friend ka farz ada krte huye riya ko le gya...riya ka family scene emotional...but ruhi ne jo riya ko pakda naa wo zabardast tha...aur mr. mukharjee ne kya mast tarike se riya se bina puche arjun ko bulaya...arjun ko to koi problem nhi hai...riya bhi naa..kuch bhi sochti hai...comes to shriza...how sweet...liza ne to awie hi kaha tha kya purpose krne wale ho...shree ka kaam asan ho gya...use sirf haan kehna pada...finally teeno couples ki shadi ho gyi...teeno jodia ek dusre k sath khus hai...and sam anwesha ko bhi apne sath le aaya great...perfect damad material hai sam...😊 perfect ending
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

khatam kr di...😲 itni jaldi...huh

superb part...mazaaa aa gya
mujhe to lga tha sam pta nhi kya reaction dega anwesha ki baat ka...
but jo reaction dia that was superb...mazaa aa gya...
and aisha bechari dhang se pani pila deti...btao kisi ka pani atakta hai kya gale me...aisha ka baat sun kr pani atak gya...bechari...tension me office pahuchi...mind make up krke gyi thi k aaj to solid galiyan padegi...pr sara mind makeup barbad ho gya...sam ne to haan kr di...comes to ariya...ruhi ne arjun ko btaya k uske dad kitne bimar hai...arjun ne acche friend ka farz ada krte huye riya ko le gya...riya ka family scene emotional...but ruhi ne jo riya ko pakda naa wo zabardast tha...aur mr. mukharjee ne kya mast tarike se riya se bina puche arjun ko bulaya...arjun ko to koi problem nhi hai...riya bhi naa..kuch bhi sochti hai...comes to shriza...how sweet...liza ne to awie hi kaha tha kya purpose krne wale ho...shree ka kaam asan ho gya...use sirf haan kehna pada...finally teeno couples ki shadi ho gyi...teeno jodia ek dusre k sath khus hai...and sam anwesha ko bhi apne sath le aaya great...perfect damad material hai sam...😊 perfect ending

Thanks Anu dear
glad you liked it 😃
HMM aisha ko umed nahin thi na 😆
N yes even riya didnt expected 😊
well shreeza sabse mature hai 😉
wo to hai sameer jaisa daamad bahut kisat waalo ko milta hai 😆
stay tuned to my new story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update goldie...

finally tumhari ek aur story ka the END...mere wale kab khatam honge..🥱
tumhari stories mein hamesha last mein happy ending ho jati hain...😉

but lovely story and the way you present is always commendable...👏

ab mujhe thanks maat kaho...maine kuch nehi kiya..ulta maine tumhara storage late karwa diya..😳

but it was a very nice journey working with you...😳

looking forward for our next venture...

thank you..love you..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ending..
wish could ask u to continue..

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