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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

wowww great part .👏... sakshi aur sikki convo nice ... sikki hi kuch karke apane dushmano ko chudha raha he ... ye sab kiya kisne sikki ne ni kiya to .😲.. continue soon 👍🏼

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wow...
Excellent part.
Sakshi aur Sikki ka convo was nice...
Yeh Sakshi kisse mili hui hai? Woh kiski madat kar rahi hai?
Sikki ki ya ETF ki?
Sorry for not reading previous two chapters...
Awesome update.
Continue sooonish..
Thanks for the pm.

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Great going!!
Sik pareshan...that who did it...and on the other hand Team is taking only Sik's name...upar se Saakshi...ek vi chance nahi chorti taunt maarn ki...

Now Sik is doing his best to bring back the old team...aapn hi sarr pe kulhari maarne ki preparation karr raha hain..good!!

And obviously..awesome dialogues...with sarcasm & comedy.. I always love your dialogues. You are a master in that.

Do continue..& thanks for PM.

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Awesome update di.

Loved it.

Loved Arakshi convo..😆

Sikki came to India!!!!

Jiss team se woh nafrat karta hai ussi team ko begunah sabit karke apna gadda khud khod raha hai.

Please please con soonish...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

loved it dear anu

awesome update

Loved the aarakshi convo

& siki & saakshi convo as well

its getting interesting

But siki apne dushmano ko chuda kyu rha hai ?

That is the biggest question

lets see kya hota hai

thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Awesome update
Loved it
its getting interesting
Sakshi and Sikki convo was nice
Ab Sikki hi apne dushmano ko chudayga
Amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

sorry i missed the 2'nd update some how so read it with this one
the flashback scene was nice so sakshi told everything to the team and all were angry on her
understandable specially arjun but only aisha and liza could understand that she had some reasons for doing that although i thought ki shree and chotu would also understand her
arjun is concerned for sakshi's safety and that is why he called her but kaisse batata iss liye dant diya 😆
sikki in india and sakshi ko bulaya baat karne ke liye 😲
so he will now reinstate the old team back and once they r back in action then toh he is a gone case phir usse koi bacha nahi payega
thanks for pm

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

res :) / unres!

Sorry for the delay in unressing - if there is any word as such!

Had certain commitments to attend to -

Hold the people for whom the commitments were responsible!

Now coming to your reply...

Haan, aap bilkul sahi ho...

Sakshi jaise himmat wali ladki ko ETF ke koi zaroorat nahi...

ETF ko Sakshi jaisi ladki ki zaroorat..

Now coming to your super duper awesome update :D

Haha - Shree, bilkul gadget king, bechari ko itne saare gadgets di hai ki jaise koi gadget yudh pe jaa raha ho -

But then it also reflects the care and concern of the team

Which she rightfully deserves...

Kya planning thi - amazing!

Planting the seed of doubt in their mind... etf ki suspension main...

Yeh toh solid idea hai! To let the goons know that they are really suspended!

Reverse game - Sikki ko hi use kar rahi hai taaki woh ETF ko reinstate kar sake!

Kudos to that girl... the fact of your father being dead and still talking and moving around as if he is alive.. bohot difficult hoti hai yeh cheez...

Sikanadar bhi bohot chaalak hai...

He accidentally even thought about what could the truth be...

Sachi... isliye he's apt to be the villain opposite Arjun Rawte!

Yeh Arjun apne iritation ke facade kab nikaalega towards Sakshi...!

But I must say beautifully written!

Sikki too has kept separate preparations to visit Sakshi... or rather make her visit him..

Kitne baar jagah aur kar change karwaya... aur aankhon main patti...

In short now - Awesome amazing and excellent update!

I am just romping around thinking about the next update!!!!

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago