OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

wow...

mind blowing update..

just loved it..

basket ball wala love..

to cute..

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm. sory for short comment

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

very very nice update...
swapping headphones..
basketball session was fab..
riya ki sasein rukwa di...
update soon ya..
it was fab

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazingly Written...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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BeautyFooL

@BeautyFooL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

RES

Nana dear, do remind me if i forgt to edit it.. you knw i am too lazy to edit the comment..

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Relax????????

nonsense! u'll go behind my back and even smirk at my embarrassment and tension and ask me to RELAX.

how? that's the Q, i 'm asking u ever since...

and what did u expect from a teenager Mr.A?

cont soon dr!

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Like every one has mentioned; A teenage story, refreshing some good old high school memories😃

To start off with the game of Does and Doesn't - Let me warn you, yeh dost bade kaminey hote hai... anyhow they let it out from your mouth. 😆

Jojo! We did discuss this!😆😉

I did hear a lot about SMASH but couldn't watch it. 😊

Both of us continued talking about Smash. That's when a crowd of tenth grader's came and lined up on the opposite wall. Most of them usually known as the "popular" crowd. Some of them were really nice and friendly but some of them were a big S.H.O.W.O.F.F! And it irritated me to the core when I saw them do that. Heights of insensitivity. Nothing personal or anything but if I had to be honest all the girls were * ahem * s**tty minus the nice and friendly ones who are actually normal. And the boys are big jerks with an L hanging from their foreheads. L for Losers. And the hilarious part is that they have this illusion that that's what makes them attractive. What even! But of course minus the ones who were nice and friendly.

A very well description of high school life.

That's when I saw it in my peripheral vision.😆

The words you choose!

JO AND RIO... Can we Ship this two?😳

Oh lord! Eye lock. Chori chori nazrein mili.🤢

I guess Romeo and Juliet are your inspiration. You had them in your other OS.

And finally I love the song. And its already playing on my Ipod. Haha!😃

Chapter one was awesome, off to read the next.

Thanks for your patience. hugs!

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Chapter 2

OS are never OS are there?!😛😉

We love it when you spice it up too. And Subhanallah song, Perfecto!

Nice opening and Boom! A fall you would never regret.😆

Oh oh... don't you think he is genuine. I think the spark of love is building on his side too. Remember the Eyelock!.

And the next I want is, him sitting beside you in the same class.😳 Totally dreamy!.

Oh bling! why did you escape. Yeh girls bhi na.😳 Don't worry I belong in the same category.

Tumhari smile kitne dangerous hai pata hai?

~ A

Wow! When did he write that?😆 He seems to be totally inspired by Ranbir 😃

wait Mr. A is Ranbir kapoor and I am Deepika Padukone. Hmm...but I am not a chashmish. Oh well it still works.

Super cute!

A- Is he Arjun in this OS.? Well logically yes right? B'coz you are Riya.😛

Thanks for the lovely update. Oh and I must say, I missed Jojo!😳

ONE complain, Update short kyun diya.?

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Jonashi

@Jo_Pinchy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Chapter 3

I loved the way you constructed it. To describing your feelings of the aftermath and then giving away the flash back.👏 Totally going Awe with this update. Why do I feel, that you felt this too. You have gone through this.😆 Because the way you described it is totally true.😳

There were so many cute moments and great monologues in this. The one when you two exchange the earphones. Jo tera hai woh mera hai... and more. Totally filmy!.

Drooled over Mr A today, haven't you? Admit it. He blackmailed you in return for your time. Well you took it in other way. Bichare peh attyachar kyun kiya?

hehe.

Nice quote. True! One can fall in love anytime and anywhere.

Update soon!

😃