OS: ~|Start of something good|~ (Part 5 Pg 27) Updated! 19th July - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

nice update😊
THNX 4 PM

Thank you so much


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Posted: 11 years ago
oh so technical probs ke wajese no PM... and i was worried ke aap hamein bhul gae. 😊
the "eh day " was awesome. and sport is fantastic. 😃
yeah the "embarrassment" is very embarrasing and i understand how you feel RI.
yeah Mr. A is here to help his RI.
ab toh pura naam bol do. 😳
ab basketball jane ya na jane par apne Ri ko help karne se nahi piche hat sakta. 😳
Slowly hit the ball na agar Mr. A ko chot lag jata toh... par ye Mr. A itni asaani se har nahi maanega. 😉

i am still lost in their eyes aur babe confidence toh Mr. A ka dusra naam hai.{hope its arjun}

well the point is that this story rocks.
well nothing new dear, kyunki after watching arjun my jaw travels the world and my eyes have no shame after his overconfidence smile appears. 😉

can he teach me? i also dont know 😉
aur Mr. A ke "teach" karne ki kimat tum kya jaano Miss Riya.
lagta hai pahele se planned tha. 😊
oh so riya is affected by his closeness.

dil bahar ajae. 😆
wow wow and super wow , kya update diya.
Marvellous Beautifull. 👏
update soon and do PM me next time.
so awesome update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lo galti hogayi ... najane kaise itna lamba comment hogaya.
hum toh bas comment kar rahe the, yaha toh pura kitab likh diya.
maaf karna buddy, thoda zyada hogaya.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakhan98

superb dear thanks for pm

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome update
aww who is that guy smile at riya 😆
loll jojo start tease riya abt that guy 😉
poor riya after that she just think abt that guy 😆
wow basketball part was cute ❤️
plz continue

Thank you.

Glad you liked the whole 3 parts!

Thank you so much!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farana786

aww poor riya missed ta shot coz of mr A lol n uss ki himmath toh dekh. aaen moment mei dara kar ab riya ko lesson dena chahata hai aur woh bhi basketball mei
riya thot he dint no but his catch was good n his 3 point basket throw omg seems like he was a pro
aur wow he showed riya by holding her making ri more nevous n her beat bit more fast lol n omg she made it lol
that scene was so cute yar
aww riya ran out so fast hehehe

amaxing update nabz
superb
thanks for writng such cute part
thnks for pm as well
cont soon


Well ab kya karein...as I said who ye kahani ki Ranbir Kapoor and Riya Deepika Padukone!
to Batameezi banti hai! 😆

Glad you liked that little intimate scene. I had a good time writing it. Lol!

Thank you for such a sweet comment!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Tina!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pink1

wonderful update he is teaching
her playing basket ball update soon

Thank you!

Glad you liked that part!
Will do

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

wow...

mind blowing update..
just loved it..
basket ball wala love..
to cute..
do continue soon.
and thanks for the pm. sory for short comment

Awww thank you Megha di!

Yup Basketball romance...I am going DMG style haha!

Thank you for the sweet comment love you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

very very nice update...
swapping headphones..
basketball session was fab..
riya ki sasein rukwa di...
update soon ya..
it was fab


Thank you so much Ishi!

Glad you liked the cute update haha.
Will do!

Thanks

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