Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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sairam175

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Posted: 10 years ago

#621

Hi dear

I don't have permission to blog

Missing your story

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#622

hi ritu
ek gadbad ho gayi actually accidentally i deleted all my pm now my inbox is empty
so pls muhje apna blog link fir se pm kar do na
waise ur chalte chalte is still on ur forum page which is sooo good for me atleast usse padhne ke liye i will have no problems coz i am still not sure if i will be able to freely access ur blog 😊
pls pm karna ok

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anitasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#623

Awesome update
sahil anand was such a mean person
love maai more
she was a great mother
thanks for the pm

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#624

If you would have been in front of me while reading these soul touching letters,I would have given you a BIG HUG Ritu & I mean it literally. Each & every word in the letter touched my soul ;at some point it had left those unshed tears in my eyes. This is one among the reason of my adoration to your fictional character Maai who reminds me of a woman going through a failed marriage & facing life challenges for the sake of her children s.

Now I am very much eager to know Maai's thoughts in the form of letters of course, when Maai's Arjun comes into her life.

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#625

Chapter 25
Awwwsssmmm Update
Arakshi dance was Lovely
Loved the Haldi wala part Supperb
Sam-Ayesha moments were Cute dono ko kuch kuch ho raha hai
But what stole my heart was the Father-Daughter part
Brought tears in my eyes Emotionally Beautiful
Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#626

Chapter 26
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Liked Mr Rawte's POV
Finally the wedding they are married now
Arakshi's journey from being childhood friends to lovers n now husband n wife Beautifully Written
Loved the way u described each
and every emotion Lovely
Their teasing session was sooo Cute
Amazing Update
Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#627

Chapter 27
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
It was very Emotional
It was a whole new side of Maai the broken side
The pain she went through is unimaginable
My Love & Respect for her has increased even more
Every emotion you described so well
Brilliantly Written
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: parvathycv
Just now read the new part...😊speechless...👏 "awesome" would be a small word to describe it...👏got to read a new side of maai...u have beautifully written the emotions of a women who is a fighter and who suffered loneliness in her entire life..😊your way of writing is so powerful that it could easily convey the feelings of all the characters...👏

I just hate sakshi's father..he had no rights to ruin a woman's dreams and happiness..feeling happy that sakshi had a wonderful mother who was a father too for her...😊

This part clearly shows that behind every loving mother and dutiful wife there is always an idividual who deserves to be loved and respected and who has wings of dreams..😊
Thank you so much for writing such kinds of beautiful stories...❤️😊i'm becoming a fan of your blog...do write like this..and your blog is simply awesome👏

Thank u sooo soo much for writing out this comment🤗.. I think I re-read it quite a few times hehe😳

It really means a lot.. and yes u are right. But she finally did make her own dreams come true.

Ahh thanks so much.. glad u are liking it hehe.

Originally posted by: kunchu
You did it again
I am falling in love with Mai more than ever
Till now she was smiling caring mother
but now she is a broken and yet strong lady who rose like a Phoenix.
Just loved this part Ri.
waiting for more.

Thank youuu KK.. that means a lot😳

Ah perfect comparison.. Phoenix! HP😭

Hope u like the next one😃

Originally posted by: Humzy
lovely update
loved it
cont soon

Thank u😃

Originally posted by: shurtiekta
very emotional update
maai is so gud
nd that sahil..
thnx fr pm
update soon.

yeah.. and hence she's better off alone.

Thanks a lott😳

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update Ritu

It was really emotional

It was like discovering a whole new side of Maai

But she was a fighter

Just loved it

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

Thanks soo much Shravani!!🤗

Hope u like the next part😃

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Sometimes being strong and determined are the only choices we are left with.
The diary entries are soul stirring.Its really difficult to continue with something or someone when there is a dim gleam of hope and reciprocation.Glad that she resisted all blows of fate and destiny and lived to turn her dreams into reality.Indeed a strong woman and an inspiring figure.
The graphics are beautiful.😊😊
thanks for the pm and keep writing.😊😊

True.. especially for Maai and I am sure a lot other people like her.

Yup she is a strong woman.. thanks soo much for the comment🤗

Yeah took a while to find the correct background and formatting... but it worked out really well😃

Originally posted by: Devangana
Very nice part. Sakshi and Arjun both got a glimpse into Maai's life and Sakshi's too as a baby. Please continue soon.

Thanks soo much 😳

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome updates..
Loved it to the core..
Superbly written..
I got tears in my eyes as I kept reading the entries.
Maai had to go through so much!!
Please con soonz..

Thanks soo much Eshuu.. yeah i know. But she was a strong woman😳

Hope u like the next!

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Ritu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Part 27

Amazing and brilliant
Thanks for pm
Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply

P.P.S. res for previous parts

Thanks a lot..it's okay😃

Originally posted by: anu91
Hi ritu...
The dairy of maai was so super...
I don't know hw u wrote it very naturally...hats off buddy...
After reading letter Arjun sakshi reaction and there floating emotions too good...
Waiting for next chap...
Thanks for pm...

Heyloo.. thanks soo much!! It means a lot😳

Hope u like the next chapter!

Originally posted by: fly.high
Sometimes, dreams are enough to
make you want to live...

This was a beautiful line by you Sparks...
(yup...I m gonna call u that for you really ARE Nicholas Sparks for me ...hw abt a new nickname yeah...)

I guess I m going to quote that one line for quite some time now...

I always loved maai in this story and considered her as the central character of the story...

and this chapter was like taking a personal insight in her life ...her journey ...her problems ...and...her Dream.!!!

I loved the chapter and the new visual treat u offered...keep the diary entries coming...

love
Birdie

Birdiee🤗

Eeesh.. seriously?😳 Thanks a lott.. 🤗

I have already accepted it .. after of course I spent a moment jumping up and down and then blushing lol... it really really means a lot 😳😳

Yes yess.. I always wanted to write her POV and this was the best way.. glad u liked it so much.

Yep more diary entries coming up😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u
superb update.
loved it.
thankx for pm.

Thanks a lot!😳

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
updated ended 😔 i just did'nt wanted to stop reading it was like i could feel what maai felt
but even after all that she got from her b... husband he did give her one best thing of her life and that
was her butterfly
after reading all that what arjun and sakshi must be going through specially sakshi she must be feeling to chocked that she could not share her mom's pain
waiting for next update and more dairy enteries
thanks for pm

Whaat? It was really long😛

Thank u so much.. 😳 yep exactly.. and hence they went all silent. More diary entries will be coming up.. hope u like it😃

Originally posted by: Swara85
I loved this part and I respect Maai even more..❤️
I can connect with both of them, Sakshi as a small kid and even Maai.
I loved the the letters and since you have put it graphically, it gives you a realistic feeling. And reading becomes more interesting.👍🏼

We got to see a different Maai here, not only as a mother but as a wife, a woman and a person she was and she wanted to be. Maai is an inspiring character not only because she dreamt for her kid but also for herself.
Her journey to set free was written well..Waiting for more of her diary entries and more of insight into her life.
Awesome and beautiful job done here Ritu of putting Maai into words..👏Loved it..won't be able to say more.
Thanks for pm..continue soon.

Heyloo Swara🤗

Thanks soo much .. it took a while to get the graphics right but it was soo worth it😳

Yep yep.. she was a strong woman and a kind mother..😳 I am so glad u liked it.. it means a lottt😃 There's more coming up.. hope you like it!

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Awesome update
sahil anand was such a mean person
love maai more
she was a great mother
thanks for the pm

Thanks soo much.😳

Yeah he was but at least she moved out of it all.

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
If you would have been in front of me while reading these soul touching letters,I would have given you a BIG HUG Ritu & I mean it literally. Each & every word in the letter touched my soul ;at some point it had left those unshed tears in my eyes. This is one among the reason of my adoration to your fictional character Maai who reminds me of a woman going through a failed marriage & facing life challenges for the sake of her children s.
Now I am very much eager to know Maai's thoughts in the form of letters of course, when Maai's Arjun comes into her life.

Heyloo Farheen the creative angel😛

Haila... mujhe HUG? Really?😛😛 Hehehe. on a serious note.. thanks soo much! I think no one loves Maai as much as you do and it just makes me put more into her character.. so you are a big encouragement 😳

Of course.. that'll come soon... and maybe something else too...😛

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Chapter 25
Awwwsssmmm Update
Arakshi dance was Lovely
Loved the Haldi wala part Supperb
Sam-Ayesha moments were Cute dono ko kuch kuch ho raha hai
But what stole my heart was the Father-Daughter part
Brought tears in my eyes Emotionally Beautiful
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much for all your comments Niki..it really means a lot!

Hope ur exams went well😳 and welcome backk😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#630

Heyloo..🤗

I know I know this took me a really long time.. But to make up for the delay it's a longish chapter..

First of all... do NOT roll your eyes at me after reading the first two lines😆 The place and time have been chosen for a reason which you will know as you read.

And I am sure after reading it, you'll have a fair idea of what the rest of the updates will be about😉

Soo that's it for now.. this update will surely leave a smile on ur face😃 at least it did on mine while writing it.

Chapter 28 - Unknown Desires

.. is at the blog😳

Do leave your comments where u wish to🤗