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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#641

'...there is the sweet fragrance
of rain in the air.
And love...'

why is it so that I always fall in love with the last lines of Ur updates...

why is it so that u prove Ur talent of writing as the far stretched never ending horizon every time...

why is it so that when I m convinced that this is Ur best shot at writing...u miraculously jump up with a more heart touching and beautifully written update ...

why is it so...that u make me fall for Ur writing head over heels all over again...every freaking time...

and finally...why is it so that I find myself at loss of words and adjectives to praise and describe to u how best u are... my Sparks...

(someone pls suggest me a superlative form of best... BEST is just not enough for this girl...)

...
.

okay enough of fangirling...

u may jst think I m exaggerating which I m absolutely NOT.

...

THIS was so beautiful...

we all have that one unfulfilled wish or desire..
even I have..
even u may have

Maai too had...

loved the update to a level that now I can't even review it...

continue soon

love
Birdie

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#642

loved it to the core ritu...

cutely written...

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Superb update
arjun and maai's love is incompairable
he can do anything for her even now
loved the whole update

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: skrafty
Reswa😉
Unres

YAY!!!!!!
Me first🥳

Awesome update
Loved it
Amazing
Beautiful
Brilliant
I really have no words
But just loved it
Aaa. Looottt
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Thank you soo much Shravani😳

Originally posted by: Humzy
beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon

Thanks so much 😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

I will give u a kick everytime i realise that Maai is no more.U Chudel Akshara.

Anyways,those letters

Sigh!!!I wish she would have been alive to play with Pari,Para,Piri...Again Sigh!!.

LOOOL.. emotional atyachaaar😛😛

Awww.. koi naa.. Sakshi and Papa hai na😉 Arrey ruko.. dont let the train of your imagination leave Mumbai yet😛

Originally posted by: shurtiekta
awsm pt
arjun is really awsm
thnx fr pm
update nxt pt soon..

Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
so that was what aarjun was doing the whole yr trying to but a cafe just like what maai wanted
and now he brought sakshi to kasauli where the cafe is 😃
they painted the cafe together and that too arjun was in white 😎
oh my a romantic night at cafe under the stars and rain 😉😳
i am sure they going to name the cafe rainbow 😊
loved how sakshi and papa were on one side and were teasing poor arjun 😆
thanks for pm
waise iss cafe to chalaega kaun 🤔 coz i can't think of them shifting here for good

Thank u soo much!😳

Of course😉 and of course they wont be shifting.. as to what happens to the cafe, this part is reserved for later.. you will be able to guess with the next update!

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun ko 2 weeks kam lag rahe hai aur Mr Rawte ko jyada...😆😆😆
Arjun ne Maai ke dreams jaisa cafe kharida...🤗🤗🤗
Rainbow...Arakshi fighting...😆😆😆
Arakshi painted cafe together while fighting with each other was 😆😆😆
Maai's diary entry were cherry one the cake...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Aww.. glad u liked it so much! Thank youu, Sneha😳

Originally posted by: parvathycv
once again thank u so much for this wonderful update👏 just want to mention about the dairy entries..for writing the dairy of a character the writer has to think like one and absorb the feelings and emotions of the character..that you have done excellently ..👏

wow arjun was trying to fulfill maai's dreams..😊sakshi-arjun's dad convo was cute.😊the way of describing even the minute details of the scenes makes the reader feel like the events are happening in front of us..arakshi painting the cafe and there child like fights everything were beautifully written👏

Loved arakshi bond..i liked them as lovers and best friends.😳

Please continue soon...😊

Thanks sooo much.. that really really means a lot. I do think i become Maai when I write those entries..I know that sounds weird😛

Thanks a lot😳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It
Sooo Beautiful Sooo Magical
"Aur aap kebab mein haddi ban rahe ho." Just loved this dialogue Supperb
Atjun trying to fulfill his Maai's unfulfilled dream
Diary entries were Amazing
Loved Arakshi moments painting together their cute fights Lovely
Wonderfully Written
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks a lott Niki.. glad u liked it so much😳😳

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
so finally the dream cafe is getting the touch up.but I think the update should be read by criminals of Mumbai,a really good news for them...ACP Arjun Rawte has taken a short break and has turned a painter...😃😃 a golden scope for them..
the description of the setting is as always captivating.The snow clad mountains and the fresh whiff of paints set the incredible background. let's await for future developments of the cafe.
loved each line and its needless to say that it was a pleasing update.
thanks for the pm and keep writing with immutable spirits.😊😊

Haha.. well Sam is still in Mumbai na😉

Thanks .. hope u like the next one too😳

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Woohoo... I am back!!!

So finally that I am back, let me write a comment for you and I know you've been sweet enough for the fact that I have been skipping out on commenting on so many updates and u don't mind it one bit!

First of all... my God the wedding of Arakshi has been a dream out here!

And the sweet relation amidst her papa in law nah, amidst her papa and her is so wonderful! It is almost tear jerking when Sakshi finds her papa, finally.

A long due from God eh?

Secondly the equation and relation of Raisha maturing during Arakshi's wedding was truly wonderful. And the entire sequence of the wedding was just so...

Getting married to best friend😳

I must state that indeed, you have always highlighted the wonderful relation amidst Arjun and Sakshi.

As in, with them becoming husband and wife, it doesn't mean that it overshadows their relation of being best friends.

The wedding night was... 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️ 😳 ☺️

Eesh... it was oh so eesh! Amo jaanina aar ki bolte re...

But then were they seriously cutely arguing after it? Haha... it was so wonderful! 😳 ☺️

Ah, Maai... she's someone so wonderful and exquisite, I so wish her so called husband got even worse punishment!!!

Her diary entries were heart stealing indeed.

Ah, it hurts when the lovey dovey husband suddenly distances for a few months, I truly wish he would give Sakshi a better explanation, because honestly speaking - when there is a sudden aloofness for a few months without a proper explanation - a deep pain is etched in the heart which takes its own time to wear off.

It can't go in a day

Par chaddo...

Oh my!!! Arjun went on to actually fulfill Maai's dreams! 😲 👏 😲 👏

He's more than a son for Maai, truly *sniff*

Painting the cafe in rainbows was so awesome! And them doing it together... haha

OOohhh... am looking forward to what the night brings 😉 😉 😉

For I know that my Ritzy isn't that innocent anymore 😉

Lots of love,

Ur chweet innocent behna...

Strawwwberrryyy

Wait. What? Who is innocent? *falls out of chair*

Arreyy.. it's okay. At least u comment.. and that means a lot😳

Hehehe I am glad u liked the wedding so much 😳😳 and ahem... did your innocent lil mind run away somewhere?😛

Umm.. he didnt exactly push her away.. he just remained silent. But anyway, they do talk about it in the next one.. I think it makes sense (totally from my point of view).

Bahahaha.. haan haan.. tera asar hai naaa😉😉😉

I still havent commented on Ire.. wait for that!😛

Love ya loads for leaving a comment🤗

Originally posted by: fly.high
'...there is the sweet fragrance
of rain in the air.
And love...'

why is it so that I always fall in love with the last lines of Ur updates...

why is it so that u prove Ur talent of writing as the far stretched never ending horizon every time...

why is it so that when I m convinced that this is Ur best shot at writing...u miraculously jump up with a more heart touching and beautifully written update ...

why is it so...that u make me fall for Ur writing head over heels all over again...every freaking time...

and finally...why is it so that I find myself at loss of words and adjectives to praise and describe to u how best u are... my Sparks...

(someone pls suggest me a superlative form of best... BEST is just not enough for this girl...)

...
.

okay enough of fangirling...

u may jst think I m exaggerating which I m absolutely NOT.

...

THIS was so beautiful...

we all have that one unfulfilled wish or desire..
even I have..
even u may have

Maai too had...

loved the update to a level that now I can't even review it...

continue soon

love
Birdie

Eeeshh... I died. I dunno how many times I re-read that comment.. Sheesh i am not so good re.. but i really can't thank u enough for all those words. I hope ..and I always hope that I can live up to ur expectations..😳

I really hope u like the next chapterrr.🤗

And thanks soo much for leaving such a comment.. it made my day😃

Originally posted by: anu91
loved it to the core ritu...
cutely written...
Thanks so much 😳

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Superb updatearjun and maai's love is incompairable
he can do anything for her even now
loved the whole update

Thanks so much 😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#645

Heylooo🤗

A long time later, I am back with an update! Hope u like this one..😳 It only speaks of rain and love..

I know I have penned numerous rain scenes.. and so I hope this one doesnt sound ghisa pita and boring😛 It includes an old favourite song of mine.. so enjoyy😃

Chapter 29 - Drenched in Love

.. updated at the blog.😉

Do leave your comments if you can🤗

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#646

i was missing this one 😊
u managed to make the nights in mountains so romantic and on top of that u included rains as well
waise trust me its not that romantic the night i mean its bit scarey sometimes 😉
but offcourse if u r cocooned in a cafe with ur love who is trying his beat to be romantic who can complain 😉😉
chinese oh man i am missing chinese food so much even my mouth is watering 😃
waise mera wala used to win me by making nice veggi maggi but abb toh woh bhi ban ho gaya 😉😊
☺️☺️ still trying to catch my breath
that is exactly what i thought what will they do after inaugrating the cafe
that little girl how could her mom commit sucide and leave the liitle baby behind 😒 will sakshi adopt her
thanks for pm

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#647

Lovely update. Continue soon please.

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#648

you made their every moment so beautiful without going OTT at all.

The play of shadows when the candle light falls on him was awesome

and the rain... bache ko maar hi dalo

and the end... never expected it to come. but so beautiful

I forgot to cmnt on last update

but this update voiced a doubt that I had last time too

what happens when the cafe is open

Arjun works in Mumbai

And I dont expect ACP saab will be pleased to part with her when she works here

Waiting for what u have planned.

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#649

Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved It
Loved Arakshi moments Sooo Beautiful Sooo Magical
Awww that little girl Rimjhim how could her mother commit sucide and leave the liitle one behind
Will Sakshi adopt her...???
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM