Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Awesome update Ritu

It was really emotional

It was like discovering a whole new side of Maai

But she was a fighter

Just loved it

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Sometimes being strong and determined are the only choices we are left with.

The diary entries are soul stirring.Its really difficult to continue with something or someone when there is a dim gleam of hope and reciprocation.Glad that she resisted all blows of fate and destiny and lived to turn her dreams into reality.Indeed a strong woman and an inspiring figure.

The graphics are beautiful.😊😊

thanks for the pm and keep writing.😊😊

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#613

Very nice part. Sakshi and Arjun both got a glimpse into Maai's life and Sakshi's too as a baby. Please continue soon.

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Awesome updates..

Loved it to the core..

Superbly written..

I got tears in my eyes as I kept reading the entries.

Maai had to go through so much!!

Please con soonz..

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#615

Part 27

Amazing and brilliant
Thanks for pm
Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply

P.P.S. res for previous parts

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#616

Hi ritu...
The dairy of maai was so super...
I don't know hw u wrote it very naturally...hats off buddy...
After reading letter Arjun sakshi reaction and there floating emotions too good...
Waiting for next chap...
Thanks for pm...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Sometimes, dreams are enough to
make you want to live...

This was a beautiful line by you Sparks...
(yup...I m gonna call u that for you really ARE Nicholas Sparks for me ...hw abt a new nickname yeah...)

I guess I m going to quote that one line for quite some time now...

I always loved maai in this story and considered her as the central character of the story...

and this chapter was like taking a personal insight in her life ...her journey ...her problems ...and...her Dream.!!!

I loved the chapter and the new visual treat u offered...keep the diary entries coming...

love
Birdie

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sweetpari4u

@sweetpari4u

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#618

superb update.

loved it.

thankx for pm.

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#619

updated ended 😔 i just did'nt wanted to stop reading it was like i could feel what maai felt
but even after all that she got from her b... husband he did give her one best thing of her life and that
was her butterfly
after reading all that what arjun and sakshi must be going through specially sakshi she must be feeling to chocked that she could not share her mom's pain
waiting for next update and more dairy enteries
thanks for pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#620

I loved this part and I respect Maai even more..❤️
I can connect with both of them, Sakshi as a small kid and even Maai.
I loved the the letters and since you have put it graphically, it gives you a realistic feeling. And reading becomes more interesting.👍🏼

We got to see a different Maai here, not only as a mother but as a wife, a woman and a person she was and she wanted to be. Maai is an inspiring character not only because she dreamt for her kid but also for herself.
Her journey to set free was written well..Waiting for more of her diary entries and more of insight into her life.
Awesome and beautiful job done here Ritu of putting Maai into words..👏Loved it..won't be able to say more.
Thanks for pm..continue soon.