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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen
Beautiful Shivani...Loved It! Superbly Written..ArNi My most Loved Pair..Even ArIya cums after dat!!! Thanx fr pm..Do Continuee Soonz!

Thanks Shanaya! ArNi is a beloved pair...if only Gorky had explored it more! Sure will continue it soon!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shreya09
you made me cry 😭 😭
beautiful writing !!!

Thanks for appreciating but sorry too!

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

ewww... ahhh... what a waste of talent Shivani 🤢🤢🤢🤢

You are such a good writer ... and you waste ur talent ... it was yucky... it failed to make me cry ... but I felt like puking 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢

And I know you are not responsible for it ... its Payal and her Cry baby demands

Ye nahi sudhregi ...

I got the same feeling when I read the original version of Pari's story that she wrote on Payal's demand

Iska bhain wala OS and Sikki k saath hot SR likhni hi padegi ... 😉

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Piya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

ye payal aur tum pitogo bahut ...bata ri hu...lol

itna senti...

m senti venti type ni hu re baba!!

ye reaf karke ho ra h mere ko bhi uttha le te baba...

arjunva ka gam ni dekha jata bas..

1st tym likha h...phive starrr...seven starr!

awesome! ⭐️

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

@Bhavna di! I do agree with you here. I read the entire prologue and I could see it resting on the scene and not on the emotions. Will keep this in mind from here on. And no don't blame Payal, I should have pulled out the update realistically!

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

@Piya di! I guess aaj pitna behter hai than tomorrow. Well thank you for liking and appreciating the start. I hope I'll be able to keep you entertained further.

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Shravani / Arohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Beautifully written
it was too painful

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