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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼
but extremely sad😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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😲😃
Finally!

Unres:


That was painful beyond words. You have captured the essence of pain and horror of the few seconds of visuals Gorky has been tantalizing us with for over a year & half. How I wished I see something more of what had happened that damn evening! But now I am not so sure.

As I always say you should write more.Its as if you were an eye witness to all that befell the unfortunate Rawtes. Very detailed.

Those couplet is meant fro Arjun and his grief only.

Well done, Buddy!👏👏👏


P.S: Having troubles with videos.
Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully written😭
wonderful os😊
Edited by gfjhsdu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poignant Os
Beautifully written but made me sad😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Shivani...Loved It! Superbly Written..ArNi My most Loved Pair..Even ArIya cums after dat!!! Thanx fr pm..Do Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you made me cry 😭 😭
beautiful writing !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jia03

Awesome👍🏼

but extremely sad😭

Thank you and sorry it was meant to be like that!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Carrie-

😲😃

Finally!

Unres:


That was painful beyond words. You have captured the essence of pain and horror of the few seconds of visuals Gorky has been tantalizing us with for over a year & half. How I wished I see something more of what had happened that damn evening! But now I am not so sure.

As I always say you should write more.Its as if you were an eye witness to all that befell the unfortunate Rawtes. Very detailed.

Those couplet is meant fro Arjun and his grief only.

Well done, Buddy!👏👏👏


P.S: Having troubles with videos.


Geez! Honestly dido I have no idea what the hell have I written or how on earth am I gonna continue it! Lets hope it turns out nicely.

Honestly I believe it was a cold blooded homicide with a lot of twisting facts, besides Payal had wanted it to be as brutal as possible!

Hopefully I'll be able to ride the expectations!!

P.S. The video is working fine!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gfjhsdu

beautifully written😭

wonderful os😊



Thank you sweets!
Edited by Meself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: laila1994

Poignant Os

Beautifully written but made me sad😭


Thank you dear! Sorry Payal wanted it to be really sad!

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