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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pata nhi us thread mai post nhi ho raha so new thread bana di...


abhi sirf thode hi part bache hai... so i want to finish it finally...😊


hpe u all not angry with me.




1st Thread
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3602745




Part 6



Finally Purva take Shail & make him seat on her lap & hold him tighly...


Shail eating Ice- cream...



There is one fight squence to be shoot..


"Shaleen is Tablet ke apne lips ke paas rakho , jaise hi vo insaan tumhe maarge tum ye Tablet tod dena to ise colour aajaayega.. sab ko lagega ki blood aa raha hai... " Gorky says


"Ok... sir... Sorry vo..." Shaleen slowly says



"Its ok vo baccha hai ... aisa hote hai kabhi kabhi..." With that Gorkey Sir goes from there..



Fight starts , that persong hit Shaleen on his face , & bloodozzesout from Shaleen's mouth...



"Aeeeaaauuummm Papa..." Shail starts crying loudly...


Purva try to keep him quiet , but vain finally she hold palm over his mouth... but Shail startredto hit her with his hands & legs... He don't understand his Father is in pain , why people beat him & whay his Mother not allowed to go...


After shot Shaleen comes near him & pick him up , Shail immeadtly hug him tightly...


"Papa,,, papapa... auuummm" with that Shail again starts crying...


"Are kuch nhi ... ye dekho... aap kaise play karte ho na vaise mai is Uncle ke saath play kar raha tha ... " Shaleen try to says



"Bad Uncle ..." Shail says & shows his last finger to that person..( means cutti) 😆


"Baby... ... " Purva says little loudly.. while Shail look at her with watery eyes... Purva forwards hanky Shaleen take it & wipe Shail's eyes...


Gorky call Shaleen for shot agin... But Shail is not ready to leave him... he fears somone again beat his Father... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Baby Pa abhi aate hai... koi kuch nhi karega Pa ko... ur Brave Boy na... " Shaleen try to make him understand.. but Shail hide his face in Shaleen's Shirt & hold him tight...


Shaleen helplessly look at his wife , she understands & literally snachted Shail... Shail starts crying , but Shaleen have to go.. he kiss on his cheeck ... Shail forwards his hand , but Shaleen starts to walk fastly without looking back...


Purva some how to take him away for some time ...


But she come again to take Shail's bottole...


Suddenely Shail starts yelling...


"Yee...ye Papa zor se... Bad Uncle... Papa zor se maaro..."


Purva look & sees now its Shaleen beats that Man who beats him in prevoius scene..


" Papa ... zor zor se maaro..." Shail happily yells & start to wiggiling in his Mother's arms happily...


All look at him... Shaleen give him smile ...


"Ammm sry..." with that Purva again goes...



In Lunch Break



Shail wonders here & there & Purva goes behind him... suddenly Shail bump on somone.. Shail forwards on right side & that person also forwards on right side , after that Shail forwards left side , that person also forwards left side...


Shail look at that person & smile creapt on his lips..


"Shiti Di... " Shail yells happily


"Shital ( Ayesha ) Shail caals her Shiti...


Shital smile at him & pick him ...


"Awww mera Babu... kab aaya tu??? kya kiya Nani ke ghar? Merelo nhi leke gaya?" Shital ask him in complaint tone...



" Pa ne nhi bola aapko???? hum agali baar jaaynge... aur na Nanu ne na mere liye na Cake laaya tha... " Shail informs her..


"Aur mujhe Cake?" Shital ask


"Nanu ne chotha laay tha , vo to maine kha liya..." Shail guitly says while looking at his tummy...


" Koi baat nhi... aap de do... " Shital says


"Vo... Shail check his pockets ..


"To Mumma se le lo paise..." Shital says


"Nahi hai Mumma ke paas..." Shail immeadtly answers


" Aur Papa ?" Shital ask


"Unke paas paise nahi hai khatam ho gye..." Shail immaetdly answers



"Kanjus kahi ka... ruk tere Pap se bolti hue..." With that Shital kiss on his cheeck & Shail sheeplessly smile...


Shital hande over Shail to Purva ...


"Ab chup chaap khana khaao... varna Chotu Uncle ko bolke vo Bhoot vali Aunty ke paas chod dungi..." Shital warns & Shail scaredly hug Purva...


Finally Purva haapily feeds him , Shaleen comes with his plate & seats beside him..



Shaleen forwards his plate to Purva...


" Thx , ek mniute ha , bahut bhookh lagi hai , lekin pehele ise de du..." Purva says


Shail finishes his food... & Purva takes plate , while Shaleen make Shail gulla & cln his face... and gossping with him on silly things...



Purva take her Food..


" Haa.. kitni shanti se khana khaya aaj.. varna vaha to.. Maa ke paas bhagta , to kabhi Bhabhi ke paas.. kisi ko khana khane nhi deta tha... " Purva informs


"Acha babu aise kiye apne?" Shallen ask Shail...


"Nahi mai to khelta tha... lekin sab mujhe daat dete... aur na Nanu ne ne mere liye Cacke bhi laaya tha... " Shail informs


"Are va... to Nanu ke saath maza aaya na... " Shaleen ask & kiss his forhead


"Pa , Nanu ko bula do na... " Shail requests


" aur Nani?" Shaleen ask..


" Nani ko kyu bula dega , Nani to sirf roti deti thi , masti kiya to daat deti thi na... hai na Shalu...?" Purva ask Shail


Shaleen raise his eyebrow Shail immeadtly hide his face in his palms & slowly look at his parents & smaile sheeplessly...






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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwsssmmm work
read all parts
very cute
cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was awesome and amazing update di..
just loved it...
do continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar...!!
shail is too cute...!!
loved it...!!
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update
Shail is so cute ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 7


After Shoot


Gorky tell all to wait...


One Boy bring one Big Packet & place it on Table...

Gorky & Chotu open it , while Shail is busy with Shree..


" Are Master maza aaya na din bhar ?" Shree ask him while tikling him..


Shail give him wonderful smile...


" Are Master vo dekh aaj Pa ka Bdy hai na... Cack " Shree says while showing him Cake...

Shail immeadtly start to wiggle in Purva's hands & Purva leave him on ground...


Shail immeadtly runs to Shaleen & tug his pant..


Shaleen look at him "Kya baccha?"


"Pa Cake..." with that Shail forwards his hands

But Behzaad take him in his arms & kiss on his chheck & shows him Cake...


"Locolae..." Shail says & Behzaad look at him confusedly...


" Are vo Chololate bol raha hai..." Shaleen informs...


Suddenely one swwet girl com & hug Shaleen & wish him...


" Pa... mele Pa... " Shail says in upset tone...


" Are vo to Aunty hai Mrunal Aunty..." Behzaad says & Mrunal's gaze fell small creature in Behzaad's arms that looking at her with upset face...


" Shail right???" Mrunal happily ask...


Shaleen nodded with smile..


Mrunal takes Shail...

Shail unwillingly goes to her... but feels happy when he sees her long hair...


Mrnal talking with him , but Shail 's eyes fix on her hair... He happily pull her hair.. & suddenely Mrunal yells in pain...


"Ouch... my hair..."


Shaleen sees this & run to him...


"Shail chold ...leave her... aise nhi karte "


But Shail happily pull her hair..


Ayesha sees this from distance & comes them & immeadtly take situation in her hands , she slowly remove Shail's fingers from Mrunal's hair...


" Kaha tha na ki Pony kar ke aa, per nhi... dekh liya ab" Shital says to her & Shail starts to hit Shital...


" Aaa... bula du Chotu uncle ko???? bhej du Bhoot ke pass...? Chotu...chotu..." Ayesha warningly says


" Aaahhh ummm" Sahil starts crying & somehow Shaleen takes him... & pacify him...


Some persons comes to wish Shaleen & Shaleen look out for Purva...


Purva talikng with somone Gorky is also with her.. Shaleen calls her & tells her abt Shail...


Purva look here & there & sees Sahleen Holding Shail... who is crying...


Purva immeadtly goes there ...


"Mumaaa... auuummm Mummaa..." Sahil cries & hugs Purva...


"Sahl aur kitna time lagega , I think he is tired now..." Purva says while careesing Sahil's hair softly...


"Purva , vo u know na Party abhi start hue hai... but mai kuch karta hue... " Shaleen thinks while..


"Thodi der mai chalte hai... bas Dinner ho jane do..." Sahleen says


Purva just unheartdly nods... while rubbing Shail's back...


Within a minutes Shail sleeping peacefully...


THE END
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS
loved it
shail is so cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates.. Love both.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome swt...
Thanx 4 pm me

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