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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

finally finished your extra long,extra cheesy,extra toppings wala update...it was delicious..😳

the whole update cornered our hero and his miss A.Yes the questions both are facing are similar.Had the situation been different had arjun not left and ahd ro not forced him to leave.

The turmoil about their feeling in past and the conffessions which could not surface,was depicted beautifully.Both were each others support...they hardly had anyone else in their shatterd lives...15 years had taught them to sacrifice and love but the sacrifice was not worthy...

Arjun could never start of with roshni..and ro well she didnt deserve yash..and now the misunderstandings...i wonder if anything will ever sort back to the early times even when everything comes in front...

Yash,you had hardly revealed anything about him in your story...now when its coming...its seems scary..yeah though you had hinted earlier about a forced relation ro shared with him...may be the resultant was annu...😕😕

Sameer too had found something regarding him..and I am sure the revealation might break our hero more..emotionally and this time might be spiritually...

Mario..yes i still love him 😉😉😛

finally got some actions from him.All this while he was trying his tricks and today it was the mogambo wala trick..spiking the drink and the aftereffects..
He is the one who could be sole person who matches in equally with Arjun...😳😳

drunk arohi was superb...karela was superb too...😃

do continue soon...and thanks for the updates...

PS : about following the story..count me in...whether forum or blog...😳


I read your comment twice just to make sure that I wouldn't miss anything.. You guys are not too good for my bloating ego.. 😆

Yup! It will be about our hero and his heroine for a while now..
True.. and it's sad that their sacrifices backfired and they're left empty-handed now.. But maybe things were meant to happen that way..
The passing years may have taught them many unforgettable lessons and I believe that would only strengthen their relationship..

Nope.. With the losses they've suffered, they will never be whole again.. But maybe that journey towards a full circle will be worth it in the end..

Oh yeah.. Hold on to those thoughts on Yash.. Lots more coming up..

Arjun will be hurt; yes.. But broken, nope.. He will have to finally come to terms with the truth for her sake..

Lol.. you really like Mario a lot.. don't you? 😆 tch tch.. I'm going to break your heart soon.. 😛

Thanks so much.. 😃

Originally posted by: yas23

Awesome update
Arjun and Rosy's mind states were wonderfully described
the elevator scene was disgusting...loved the way Rosy replyed to Mario
Rosy drunk...she called Arjun Karela Rawte was hilarious
Rosy Arjun scene at the beach amazing
continue soon
about following the story whether on the forum or the blog...am in
thanks for pm


Thanks dear.. So glad you like it..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

He would have respected her feelings if she had confessed her love for him.Maybe he would have even given them a chance. Maybe their relationship that had bloomed from being one of trust and friendship into something so deep that it had become an inseparable part of their lives, would have culminated into an intimate and sacred bond, one that would have united them forever.
You know for the first time, I am relieved that even it is for sum fraction of seconds,she did thought about giving in a chance to their relationship &I would have trusted her for taking a step ahead to voice out her feelings to Arjun. If she gave in a chance to get married to Yash ,then she would have definitely done it for her Mr. A .Infact she would have been the happiest person had it been Arjun with whom she would have bonded in a sacred relation, but back then it was Roshni for whom she had to knock out her feelings for him. I can now imagine, Roshni's state of mind. I am sure she did understood what her two best friends feels for each other but then it was too late. She already came in between them & the worst part was that she was not aware of this. She might have left this world with a heavy heart knowing the fact that she indirectly came in between her best friends who loved each other but couldn't voice it out.

I m in awe of the LADY IN RED everytime she transforms herself into Rosaana D'costa, a woman full of mystery which makes Mario more curious to get closer to her for which he is stooping so low that he, for the second time spiked her drink.
Mario

"And Arohi Pradhan, I don't think I knew her at all, Rathore." How can he say that? 😲 Is it the anger in him that made him say this or he is genuinely not aware of who is this Pradhan?
Another mystery being wat actually happened after Arjun left Gupte house?

ACP Karela Rawte😆😆Suits him better😆

Chalo by mistake hi sahi, sahi no. laga diya. She blurted out of which Arjun caught up at the right time. Mario ko thank u for spiking her drink warna she is so stubborn that she would have never blurted her painful memories. Rathod questioning him will now make some sense for Arjun &for me as well.
Yash Pradhan🤔
Someone has rightly said, Relationships are stronger when you're best friends first, and a couple second. I suspect if Yash was even friends with Ro.🤔

P.S.:You think that I'll send you flowers & Cheesecakes after this 🤣🤣


Mera gunda wala bhai! Oops behna.. 🤗

Exactly my thoughts! At first I thought it would seem a bit misplaced but now, after reading your take on it too, I'm glad I wrote it..
Though she won't ever accept it in her right mind, but given a chance she'll run straight into her Mr. A's arms and hide there for the rest of her life..
That is what she is.. The real Miss A..

She would have done it in the past as well, but a lot of if's and but's kept on piling and then she could never confess it.. When she wanted to, he had already left and she was burdened with a relationship for the rest of her life..

Roshni's state of mind in the next one.. I hope I've done justice to her POV without doing her much injustice..
Yep! she left the world with a heavy heart and which is why she returns to set things right for the two people who loved her the most..

Mario ko dande toh kya? jootey, chappal, tamatar sab padenge.. But usse pehle mujhe padenge..

Coz he didn't know Arohi Pradhan at all.. He wasn't there to witness her wedding nor her transformation into Yash's wife and Annu's mother..
Besides, now with the kind of revelations being thrown at him, I feel it's very natural for him to think if he even knew his real Miss A...
And hence the statement.. No hidden meaning there.. 😆

You want to know, what happened? We'll soon get there.. I promise! But before that, lets find out what happened before that.. 😛 Well, of course in bits and with lollipops in hand.. 😆😉

Friends with Ro? I doubt that too.. But she was mistaken and got played, for sure.. Well, I won't blame her coz she ha just lost the man she loved and later watched her father die before her eyes.. Those were reasons enough to cloud her judgement..
But but.. She's the shrewd lady in red.. so who knows, what she must've done in the past! 😛

Haww.. you won't? 😲 Accha, next wale ke baad bhej dena.. 🤣

Thanks so much gundi.. Loved reading it to bits.. 😳
Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sumu4JayD

Hey di.. i read this part A and i m taking a few minutes to process this in my head...

meanwhile fr the pm part..
i'll coment on it as soon i get to read it..
like u mera bhi schedule bohot tight hai..
time milte hi mai coment karungi..

as for the restriction of access to this beautiful and poignant piece of your imagination...

i would literally beg u not to block me out...

will edit this same coment after i read A n B

and thanks for taking out some time for us and writing this..❤️


Haww.. no worries..

I'll res my reply until then..

And btw, I should be the one thanking you guys coz you put up with the torture week after week.. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

awesome updates as usual 👏

arohi , arjun's miss A deep buried inside rosanna d casta... perfect woman...

mario trying all his dirty tricks and lastly spiked her drink...

must say he will be a perfect opponent for mr A...

ro drunk and called arjun instead of karan... funny... karela... 😆

yash -- still a mystery... his relation with ro is a forced one i think...

bahut kuch reveal hona baaki hai...

waiting for it...

update soon and thanks for the PM...

about following the story ... count me in ...😊


Thank you so much..
The revelations begin with the next one.. 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: indiantvlove

After many days I am here. My apologies, Mohabbatgirl. Life is being too tedious. Very less chance to get online and read this beautiful piece.

So Rosy and Arjun finally come face to face. I was holding my breath the time when he saw her, she was stunned to see him there, she ran away and he keep thinking if it was an allusion or its for real. But later they both come face to face. What happened after it was expected, the thing made me totally awe struck was how you described the piece where Arjun fighting in boxing ring and Rosy's helplessness. You always caught me by surprise by your sheer brilliance of writing. Cudos to you !

Next come the part where the big revelation happened. Arohi had a baby girl too. Now that was unexpected. Maybe I was not too good reader to get the hints. It was quite depressing to know she even lost her child, the mourning that followed after her breakdown was enough to make me depress for an entire day. Your style of descripting tiny things left such an impact...its disturbing. I felt I have lost something precious and about to mourn.

Arjun Arohi scenes in that room was brilliant. Some things came out, some things still hidden. I am dying to know what exactly happened that led Arjun to leave her forever. I guess she had pushed him with all her might sensing the other one is in danger. While Arjun lost his wife, Arohi lost everything.

The one thing I could not help but admire Arohi's determination. How she always push her sorrows behind and get ready for challenges is a thing to learn.the latest update, that sick parasite periera, his lusting over her and her escape, another one, then the last bit , Karela Rawte, was funny.

Update soon. And thanks for sending pm.

Zeeniya


Thanks! So you finally caught up with all..
Sorry that depresses you, but that's the main plot of my fic and the entire story revolves around Arohi's fight against the wrong meted out to her and her loved ones.. So those depressing moments will always be around to remind her of her loss..

Yeah.. the truth will be out in bits and pieces for Arjun and Ayesha to put it together very soon.. She did push him away but only half-heartedly and he wasn't strong enough to have resisted it back then, coz he only wanted her to be happy..
Alas! Both were mistaken..

Yup.. More on Rosy's mission in the next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshaniSinghh

Thanx for pm. Part b was too cute. She only behaving like a child how would one guess that she had a child.
Wish she could have said something more.
But its ok, want her to share everything in full conscious state not in drunk mode...

I have a very strong feeling that yash is d mising son of dat criminal whom her dad caught. But is this guy dead or still alive due to which Ro is always sacred...


Lol.. yeah.. she's still got that childlike innocence and mischief left in her.. 😆
Aha.. watch out for the next one for answers then.. 😉

Originally posted by: ...1234

wow..wonderful update dear..loved it..plz.continue soon n pm me


Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: srividhya68

outstanding post..

loved it ..
continue soon..


Thank you.. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Okay ladies.. I'm here.. And soon, you'll wish I wasn't.. 😆
Have replied to all of you on the previous pages.. Do take a look, if you please.. I've tried to answer a few queries there, but you might have to wait for the complete picture.. 😛
I know I'm kinda testing your patience and probably even endurance levels, but trust me, it's going to be worth it, soon enough.. 😛

So, the next one is about many revelations and I would insist that you keep your Sherlock hats on.. Let's see how many you can catch.. 😎

And again, this one's about many dedications too..

B3, A biiig Karan-ilicious update for you.. I'm trying to justify his role in the story and hope you like it.. 😉
Laila and other ArNi lovers, a tiny convo between ArNi.. I know it may feel as though Roshni has been wronged, but that's all I could manage between them.. 😳

B1, Kunchu and my lollipop girl, Farheen.. (Oopsie woh toh main hoon na.. Chal koi nahi, dono baant lenge..) 😛 That tiny little flashback is handpicked out of a bigger one for u guys..
Don't be tricked ladies.. There's a lot more than what meets the eye.. Let's see what you're able to make of it.. 😉


Phew.. enough of my rant..
And yeah my customary warning stays.. *Long update ahead


Chapter 45

"When its gone, you'll know what a gift love was. you'll suffer like this. So go back and fight to keep it."
Ian McEwan.

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Posted: 11 years ago
*Edited*

I am here!😛

Emm...I know I have made a promise to a certain Gundi, but that doesn't mean you get to tadpofy me for Lady, SYS?😆

Woah...we get some more insights into my other favorite, Karan. I kept wondering how Karan and Rosy are going to infiltrate Mario's empire, never thought that it would be Suzy to rescue.

Loved Karan's interactions with his team and his fellow officers and I am glad they were able to pull Suzy out of no win situation.

But there is still more that even Karan is unaware of as far as Rosy's mission goes, its just a feeling I have. And I don't think this is over yet. I mean not just dealing with Mario, but I get the feeling that there is someone above Mario also, let's wait and see.

Hmm...more clues for Arjun's sharp mind to figure out and put together what exactly happened to his Miss A after he left the Gupte house, and soon he will have some things figured out but not all because I am sure whatever happened, Rosy is going to guarded with her life.

But I expect Arjun, nor Karan is one to give up easily either.

Behna I am amazed at Roshni and her selflessness, any other woman would have crumbled when coming face to face with the fact that man she loved had loved someone else, but not Roshni.

Not only did she still love him but continued to devote herself to Arjun and kept being loyal to the girl whom her husband loved. I guess that is what love is all about.

All four of them had that amazing bond of friendship and each relationship had its own special bond and dynamics, it is amazing and heartwarming for sure.

I couldn't help but feel Roshni's pain. I could also understand her dilemma in sharing the secrets of the past, on one hand there is the promise to one of her best friend and on other wanting to ease the pain of the only man she have ever loved.

I guess she is waiting for everything to settle in the lives of her loved ones before she crosses over to the other side.

Aha..so we finally get a verbal confirmation of Arjun's feelings for his miss A from the man himself. Thank god for this, at least now he won't give up on her, ever. Like Rosh said, he needs to have faith in his love and he is going to need lots of patience to deal with his Miss A who is now Rosy, the lady in red.

And Roshni is smart to get the gulab promise from him, now he will have to do whatever it takes to get Rosy to open up and to heal her broken heart.

I have already told you the FB was too short, but I guess that is all that was needed to set Arjun on the right track, although he hasn't realized it yet, that small memory is going to unravel lot of things in his mind.

So I gather that that small scene was just before he left her forever, but he did ask her to marry him and she refused because she thought he was in love with her best friend, god what confusions.

She not only misread his emotions, but her silence at her question confirmed everything wrong for her so she asked him to leave.

So the clues and facts are out, are they reaching the same conclusion I have.

Apparently Arhohi had found out somethings even before her house was set on fire, and she got the confirmation of the person behind it after her family's death, but by then it was too late to ask for help from anyone so she dealt with it on her own.

Whatever happened had to do with what Arjun and her father had been working on secretly I am sure of this and Rosy/Arohi was caught in it without a way out.

Errr...I am not getting a good feeling about this Amit Desai aka Yash. Darn...things were worse off then anyone has caught on yet, but Arjun is starting to put things together quickly.

Phew..behana, another one that left me speechless. And we haven't even got to heart of things yet. I think I will keep a strong drink next to me at the next set of revelations.

As always loved, loved the update, please update soon.

Forgive me if I left something out, but you already know about my state of mind after one of Lady's update, it always leaves me speechless and then I want to say so much, but I have to keep it to myself or else it would all be over.😆

Update soon!😛

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Edited*

First thing first:

Karan. A friend, who will always be there for you no matter what happens. We all knew how great he is as a friend. But today we got to see ACP KARAN. A dedicated officer, who does his work diligently.
His scene was written brilliantly.

Arni part: This is my personal favorite.Thank you for writing it. I didn't like it. I loved it. The way you writes Roshi's love & dedication touches my heart. Roshni is not just a soul of a dead wife, She is a guardian angel. Though she never got deserved love from her husband, but she is adamant to return his love to him. And as she said she knew what she was getting into so no one can be blamed here.

"It did. It hurt me a lot back then when I couldn't get you to love me. Every single day I used to think about the girl who ruled over your heart and wished to be like her, just so I could mean something to you too."

On a second thought, I blame Arjun. don't get me wrong, but If he decided to marry Roshni, then he should have let Ro's memories go. Or if he knew that he could not let go of Ro then he should not have married Roshni.


Flashback: they both knew how incomplete, they will be without each other yet they chose to leave for each other's sake. I can not blame Ro, she sacrificed her love for Arni. But Arjun, only if he had been strong enough to confess his feeling, things would have been different. But then again, I don't blame him either, knowing the state he was in.

I already guessed the revelation, so it didn't come to me as a shocker. But, how Karan knows about Rosy's investigation & past?

I know Ro cannot behave like "ABLA NARII". She must have done something to teach a well deserved lesson to yash.

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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