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Haleemah

@hal96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Kya baat hai

Awesome

Im speechless

Kya bolu

So emotional ... n i hate accidents .. lost my mama in a car accident so could bond with Rosy

Its not easy

Just crying away all the way

N awesome way 2 end it

Cant wait 4 aamna saamna of Arjun n his miss A

Update soon

Cant wait

Thanks 4 pm

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Omg!! Omg!! Omg!!

sorry, i still have to unres 4 coments... am in school at the mo' and had the basic urge to res this too but couldn't..

The update is awesome!!

u r soo ryt..

definitely had aansu.in my eyes but they were not at all khushi k...

My arjun n his Ms. A are hurting so much... how could we be khush??💔😭

this is perhaps the best chapter in the whole second half of the story...

A daughter communicating with her dead father and a mother communicating with her dead daughter...

this is indeed the best part...💔

Aw Di!! u know too well how to rip off the hearts of ur readers...

Karan is such a good friend... and i mean such a good friend.!!

I know u may have ur own plans for him.. but dont u ever hurt the poor guy in process... ok!!

if u dont find anyone for him... main hoon na..

i'm sure my Mr. pereira can share me... 🤣

lol!!

ye kya kar diya tumne di..

no their reunion is hurting me more.. coz whatever the truth is when it comes out its not gonna be clean... will it??

plz stop hurting them.. i might just go mad...

oh!! so that!! is yash!!😕

thank god u chose dev over maan for yash

I'd have spent a few tears if i'd known that Gurmeet's character died in the stry..

well...

true and apt quote!! the person who said this get a huge salute by me!!

beautiful banner!!

i envy u so much!! kaash mai aisa bana paati, but photoshop is soo damn difficult!! 😭

i liked the old one better though!!

luv ya!!

- Sumaya⭐️

Edited by Sumu4JayD - 11 years ago

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

really sry 4 nt comntng 4 dis stry.. I'm actually nt gtng d tym 2 read it..hav 2 read ol d prts..bt i'v strtd.. hav read d 1st prt til nw.. I really luvd it nd I'm dying 2 read mre bt un4tun8ly nt gtng tym.. hayee meri futi kismat!!!

bt plz dnt stp pming me.. 1 day I wil finish reading ol d prts (wel I'm shkd at my own detrminatn!! itna detrmind hoke to maine padhayi bhi kbhi nhi ki 😎 wel ol bcz of stry I guess 😆😆)

again sry.. wil comnt nd tel u abt my opinion soon 😊 (dhaasu hoga ye to cnfrm hai 👍🏼)

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Awesome update
loved it
It was too emotional😭😭
Rosy's mind-state was beautifully described👏
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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sneha

@snemaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Nice and emotional update...

continue soon

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Awwssmmm part
Loved it
Beautifully written...
Very emotional...
cont sooon
can't wait for next part
thanks for the PM

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Amazing update! I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update and PM!

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

For the first time, I m short of words for The Lady in Red. I m sorry Avantika but I m just not able to phrase anything about my point of view on her loss &the choice. But yes, this update gave me the clear idea of the conversation she had on her mother's grave long back. Now I got it wat it meant by her saying she did the way her mother did. She ,like her mother followed her heart. She did made a few choices that will definitely haunt her till date. For any individual, it will definitely strikes that they have faltered/wronged their loved ones but then come on, we are humans & not god. Moreover, we are none to judge their actions, atleast not when we are unaware of the circumstances they were in. About her hallucinating her child being close is sum thing I cant even imagine. I guess only a mother can understand that pain more than me.

Arjun finally came in &she gave in & i m glad that she did. It might b choking inside her like hell which has to come out one day & I m VERY HAPPY that the day arrived. He cant heal the wounds but atleast will try to make him come out of the grief but I am sure he'll have to work hard for that.

P.S.: Will you please stop giving me lollypops.😡

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-Rajvi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Thank you for the warning di because I started using those tissues from start itself. The quote itself made me shed a tear or two because while reading it all I can imagine was Rosy clutching the lifeless body of her daughter 😭😭

While reading it I felt like I was present there with Rosy and Karan. Rosy's red swollen eyes, her defeated form, her eyes conveying her hurt, anger, longing, guilt.
The only thing which made a relax a bit is that Karan, her partner, is there with her during this time. I know it won't reduce Rosy's pain but at least she has someone who will give her a shoulder to cry without judging and questioning her, for now. Felt bad for Karan that he has also lost his mother.

"Tumhe pata hai, I had always been unfair to her. Main toh usse duniya mein laana bhi nahi chahti thi, Partner.", Rosy mumbled, stifling the sob building through her.
I can understand what Arohi might be thinking at that time. To bring a new life to this earth when you, yourself are not sure about your life and danger lurking around, is not easy. But then, I'm so proud of Rosy that she dint let her mind take over her heart and she gave birth to Anu. A mother is capable of doing all to keep her child safe. And I'm sure Arohi would have done it all. Its just sometimes you cant fight the destiny. Anu was destined to come in this world and give her mother a hope to cling on to and then go away silently, again giving her a reason to live so that she can avenge the death of all her loved ones.

Though her child would be a constant reminder of her hurt and heartache, she couldn't stop loving her baby.

I loved the way you wrote Arohi handling motherhood. It was very heartwarming to see her doing all chores of her daughter. Its correctly said, once you become a mother, automatically everything in your life takes a back seat and you get transformed into a lady whose whole world revolves around her child. And you do it with so much ease as if you are doing it from ages.

"I wrote it in her destiny, Karan. I am the reason, my baby died in that car crash. I failed to protect her. Yash was so right. Main sach mein bohot buri Maa hoon.." He shook his head and tried to reason with her.
I hate Yash for saying so😡...I'm still not able to understand Yash's character. What was his role in past happenings??

"I picked him, Karan. I chose him over my baby. She was my heart, Karan and I swear it killed me to utter those words. I died a thousand times before I chose him over Annu. But I did.."
So Arohi choose Arjun over Anu?? But what made her take such a drastic step?? Is it because she refused to step back from mission??😕

So Karan's sharp mind has already started placing all the puzzle pieces together. I always feel that ones the whole truth will be in open and count down to final show down will begin; Karan and Sameer will have a very important role to play. They are not the part of the past and that's a plus point because it will help them to think rationally without any tinge of guilt and anger.

Rosy hallucinating her father and Anu actually choked my throat. I have no idea that how can a person with some much pain in heart can stand and fight and show the world that all is not over yet. Maybe this is the reason it is said, none can stop a woman when, she comes to fulfill the woes of a mother, a daughter and a lover.

I'm so happy that finally Arjun has decided to talk to Rosy and ask forgiveness for his actions, not only for this time but for past one's too. Phone conversation between the duo was very emotional. I hope Rosy soon realize that keeping Arjun away won't help her. They need to get together so that they can nail the one, who is responsible for all the pain and grief in their life's. But I know its easier said than done.

The auditorium scene was one of the most beautiful but painful scene. To see little girls dance in their beautiful attire is a beautiful sight but then to remember loosing your own daughter with no fault of her to the hand of destiny is the most painful sight, ever.😭

Finally Rosy has the one, whom she always longed for, beside her...At least, now Rosy can pour her heart out to the one whom she love with all the broken pieces of her heart. I know Arjun has a long way to go before he can bring her Miss A back from the dark shackles of her past but I'm happy that the process has begun.

Thank you for the wonderful update di.🤗..You made me cry bucket with this one😭
Please continue soon and thanks for the PM!

PS : Banner is very beautiful👍🏼

Edited by -Rajvi- - 11 years ago