Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Superb and amazing start.
Perfect topic.
Loved it a lot.
Continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm,Tai.

Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

It is absolutely beautiful bhavna Amazing prologue

I loved it to the core

It was so touching

Why people forget that girl n boy does not depends on a women it depends on man

What an irony 😡

Well it is a beautiful start'

Continue soon 😊

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

nice start dear.. loved it.. continue soon.. thanks for pm..

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BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Very emotional dii story dii.
And the facts and information provided are really useful.
Just dont understand, why the mother is forced to give birth a girl child, when it is not in her hand. Coz if the child will be a boy or girl depends on the father.
Awareness only will work wen people vl be educated to understan what is it about. Err!

Yeah watced some of the episode of crime patrol on female foeticide. And this one is interesting.
Would loved read more on this.
Thanks for giving us this story.

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devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

superb di...!!

awesome start... a very beautiful concept...

really hate those people who do this kind of things...!!!

beautifully written...!!

loved it...

continue soon...

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Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

superb diii

ye hamari society ka bahut bada sach hai...villages me hi nhi cities me bhi yahi haal hai

ladki hona lilke k jaise paap kiye ho...

even I had a experience... main doctor k pass gyi thi..to aur bhi patient aaye huye the...to aise hi do ladies apas me baat kr rhi thi...ek ne kaha k ye aapki beti hai...dusri ne kaha haan meri 3 betiya hai...aapke kitne bacche hai..then 1st lady repied ki 2 bete hai...aur second lady ne pucha k beti to 1st lady ka reply tha k maine paap thodi kiye hai jo mujhe betiya hoti...

I was like hell...k iss lady k do lagau...but maine tab bhi uss lady ko kaha aunty ji aapne to paap nhi kiye but syad apke maa baap ne zarur paap kiye the

log kaise bhi ho skte hai...dunia me...hate this kind ko peple...

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

awesome concept di.

its very heart touching.

i loved it.

please continue soon.

and thanx for the pm.

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Payal Goel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

dat is really heart touching di...
a very grt step by u to write dis..
awesome
awareness is necessary !!
hats off for raising d brilliant social issuee..
song speechless
always left me in tears..
though hard reality of life...
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thanks for d pm..