Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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Deleted_Account

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Um.. Sorry Tai for ranting on the previous coment...
The thought of the atrocities of men angered me so much that i couldnt help write all those...

Sorry if I offended u! 😳

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Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awesome update...

Loved CS...

After a long time there vll be Arisha in any story...love u for this...

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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@Phir_Mohabbat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

yaar fukc popular couple.😆 pair anyone u want. your story your marzi. waise bhi this story is about more a grave issue than silly pairing shit.

ok so arjun aisha have crush. cool. but wonder whats sam's pov? is this only friendship from his side? whatever...

and so aisha is orphan. cool. and i am actually excited for shree's sis tinu di's role. purvi asha i like her alot!

update soon. are u back yet? thanks for pm

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@skrafty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Great CS
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Annu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

👏

superb cs...

arisha...hummm...to sam k liye kaun hai 😉

shammi kapoor as dadu 👍🏼

dadu sab jante hai 😉

aweee shree ki sis k bare me jo likha wo kafi painful tha...but society me aisa mostly hota hai...

yahaan chotu ki mom bhi hai...😉

but my question is...sam k liye kaun hai 😆

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful CS rukku baby...
specially th way u briefly described each nd every Character dat too with so much ease without confusing us is really commendable...

aye hayye...Aisha nd Arjun have a secret crush on each other...cool...shuruwat to crush se hi hoti hai na...lolz...

Dadu is such a cute nd adorable character...loved him...

hayyyeee...aj to neend bhi nahi ayegi...kya HOTTT!!!! nd BURNING HoTTT!!!! pic dikhayi hai Rathod ki...
haye mai marjavan gud khake...

continue soon

love
Aisha

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Sorry...Mr.Hottie Rathod me itna kho gayi ki Ashima ko dekha hi nahi...
poor her...kitna saha hai usne...aur sath hi sath...Shree ne bhi..he loves his sis very much it seems...

aww..Liza loves shree from college days...great! bt i would still love to see their Tom n jerry fights... :D

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Awsumm CS didu! Loved it...So ArIsha haan...😉 but phir didu..Sameer bhai ke opposite kaun hai?? 😕 Kahin aap toh ni? 😉😆 Thanxx fr pm di..Continuee Soonz!

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

its awesome cs di..

just loved it.

do continue soon.

and thanx for the pm.

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

I am so sorry I am late again! The CS itself is so promising, I can imagine the story turning out to be the next big thing here!

P.S. Yipee!! Aayesha is in there!!😃