Ariya FF :iss darde dil k sifarish (part-6-page-34) 4/2 pm late - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

First of all sorry my hunny bunny for commenting late actually mere pass time nahi tha or kal mujhe fever ho gaya tha.

Really sorry.

Now come to update.

It was awesome, blossom. And fabulous update my pyaari hunny bunny.

Love it.

Love the way arjun is talking with kalpana. Its so heart touching.

You wrote very beautifully.

Loved arjun kalpana fb.

Omg auto wale ne auto ka naam guddi rakha hain.

Love the way kalpana shut arjun mouth. Are wah koi to hain jisse arjun darta hain.

Loved pari antics.

Father and daughter bonding was so beautiful.

Precap looks interesting.

Continue soon.

And thanx for the pm.




thx meghu 4 ur swtu swtu comment
& Tc of urself 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
awsm prt
lvd da way its strt
Edited by chand91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Nice n interesting start continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
nice concept...
riya arjun ki wife ki duplicate wow...
superb start...
aww arjun remembering his n kalpana's first meet...
pri is too cute...
fb was awesome bechara arjun😆 har jagah se gussa...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
nice concepts...
con soon...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
<font size="4">guyz ,i m back with the nxt part of this story .thx 4 ur likes & comments on the previous update .</font>






<font size="3">PART - 2</font>

<font size="2">Arjun lift pari in his arms & headed 2 their room .

she made her ly on the bed & he also lied bside her & cover themselves with blanket .

He switched off the light .

Arjun :pari ,chalo ab so jao .

Pari :papa ,ap v so jao .

Arjun smiled & carresing her hairs 2 make her sleep .in a few minutes pari drifted in sleep .

But sleep is far away 4m arjun .he again lost in his past memories .
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<font size="2">FLASHBACK ...

[SIZE=2]the girl stopped her cycle infront of a big mansion .

Girl :lijiye apk dost ghar aa gaya .

Arjun looked at the house & got down 4m the cycle .

Arjun :thx .finally itne chadao utar k baad hum pouch gaye 😊

the girl glared at him caught his real meaning 😡

The girl going 2 leave but arjun stopped her .

Arjun :xcuse me ...apne apna num nehi batayi ...

Girl :kyu !!! mere num jaan kar kya karenge ???

Arjun :harre wah !!! meine ek ladki se life li .to kya mujhe uska num janna nehi chahiye ...😉

Girl (in a stern tone):mein kissi anjaan admiko apna num nehi batati !!!!😡

saying this the girl left

Arjun just nodded his head in disbelief .

Arjun :ajeeb ladki hai ...😕gussa jaise uski naak me banrati rehti hai .

Arjun went into rathod mansion .

There rathod was waiting 4 him .when he saw arjun coming he ran 2 him

Both arjun & sam hugged each other

Sam :arjun ...finally tu mere ghar me aa hi gaya ...😊

Arjun :ab tune bulaya hai to naa akar reh sakti thi kya !!!😉

They both laughed out .

Then sam introduce him with other family members .

Sam :harre ye choti kahi nazar nehi aa rahi hai ???😕

Sam's mom :jabse ye ladki apni padayi khatam karkar lauti hai ghar me kab reh raha hai .iska majat kare ,uska majat kare ...pareshan ho chuki hu ... 😡

Sam :maa ,hamari choti achsi kam hi to karta hai .logo ki majat karna achsi baat hai na ...

Sam's mom :ha ha ...meri bachcho k upar hi jaise desh samhaal neki jimedari hai ...

Sam :achsa baba galti ho gayi .kan pakadti hu ...😉

Sam's mom :ab yaha par khadi hi rahegi ya arjun ko uska kamre v le jayegi .bechare kitne der se yaha par khada hai ...

Arjun :no no aunty .mujhe koi problem nehi ho raha hai .police naukri jo karti hu ...aisab ka adat hai hume .😊

then sam took arjun 2 his room .

In room ...

Arjun :achsa sam ye choti kaun hai ???

Sam :meri choti behen ...kalpana ...tujhe meine bataya thana uski bare me .hum sab log usse pyaar se choti keh kar pukar te hai .

Arjun :ohhh ...

at the mean time a bell of a cycle or rickshaw buzzing .

Sam :lo ...shayad choti aa gayi ...😊

Arjun (MV):ye bell to uss ladki ki cycle ki bell ki tarah baj rahi hai .harrre tu v arjun !!!!wo ladki yaha par kaise ayegi ????ye to sam ka behen hai .rajasthan ki haar ladkiya shayad cycle use karti hai 😆

Arjun & sam both came 2 the hall .

One girl is running 2wards them .

Arjun get shock bcoz she is the same girl .😲

Arjun :omg !!! ye ladki yaha ????😲

The girl came & hugged sam

Girl :vai ...😊

Sam :kya hua badi khush lag rahi hai ????

Girl :ha .kyu ki meine na pas wale gao (village)ki ladki kauri hai na uska saadi rukhwa di bcoz uska umar dirf 15 saal hai .

Sam :very gd job choti !!! i m proud of u ...😊
Arrre ha arjun ...ye hai meri choti behen kalpana .aur kalpana ye hai meri best frnd arjun ...😊

Arjun smired at her & she just glared at him

Arjun (forwarding his hand):hy kalpana ...nice 2 meet u ...😊

Kalpana (unwillingly shaking his hand):ya nice 2 meet with u ...

suddenly sam get a call & he xcused himself & left

Arjun:so finally iss anjaan admi ko tumhe apna num batana hi paddi ...😉

Kalpana just shoot a hard look & left 4m there


<font size="2">FB END</font>

<font size="2">[COLOR=GREEN]Arjun suddenly came out his fb when he heard pari's voice .

Pari (muttering in sleep):mumma ...where r u ???? ap mujhe aur papa ko chodkar kaha chale gaye the ??? hum apko bohot miss karte hai .plz lout aa jao mumma .mumma plz don't go ...😭

Arjun had tears in his eyes hearing his daughter's words .

Arjun hugged her tightly

Arjun :mumma kahi nehi gaya .mumma yahi hai .humere pas .

After few minutes arjun also drifted in sleep holding pari in his embrace .

nxt morning ...

As usaul arjun got up 4m bed earlier & make breakfast .

Then he call pari 2 wake up ,help pari 2 get ready 4 school ,then have their breakfast

First he droped pari at school & then left 4 his office .

In office ...

he was studying a case file in his cabin .suddenly a clerk came .

Clerk :sir ,u have a letter 4m ministry office .

Arjun :yah ...just keep it on the table .

Clerk kept it on table .

Clerk :may i leave sir ...

Arjun :yah !!! u can .

The clerk left

After finishing the file arjun took the envelope .

He opened it & started reading

Arjun (frowned):what ??? Commissioner sir ne mujhe india wapas bulayi hai ...par kyu ???

He called commissioner on his phone

Commissioner :ha arjun kaisi ho ???

Arjun :sir ,i m just fine .ap kaise hai ???

Commissioner :me also fine .tumhe ab tak to tranfer letter mil hi gaye honge .

Arjun :ha sir .that's why i call u .sir apne achanak se mujhe india kyu bulali ??? in mean any problem ???

Commissioner :yes arjun .a big problem .tumhe yaad hai na acp kapil aur acp shekhar ???? jo tumare sath ek hi batch me the .

Arjun :yes sir ,mujhe yaad hai .

Com :wo dono ek saath ek drug deeling case ko survey kar rahe the .par pichle 1 week se un dono gayab hai .un dono ki koi atapata nehi chaal rahi hai .unki family bohot pareshan hai .aur sath sath media pressure .humeri samaj me nehi aa raha hai how we can find them ???isiliye meine tumhe wapas bulaya hai .bcoz i know ek tum hi ho jo ye gutti ko khol sakte ho .aur tumhe jaan kar khushi v hogi ki meine tumhe etf me prog ki .

Arjun :etf ???

Com :ha etf .emergency task force .the best crime investigation team .

Arjun :ok sir .mein nxt week hi aa rahi hu .

Com :gd .mujhe pata tha tum mujhe inkaar nehi karoge .

Arjun :sir ,ye mera farz hai .aur mein apne farz se kav muuh nehi ferti .

Com :yah i know .ok then nxt week we will meet .tab tak apna aur apni beti ka khayal rakhna .

Arjun :sure sir .bye .

Arjun cut the call & ignorsed in deep thought

Arjun :india ...etf ...kav socha nehi tha firse purani yaade aise taza ho jayegi .waha se yaha aya kalpana ko dulhaan banakar le ayi thi .akhri baar gaya tha kalpana ki antim sangskar karne .socha tha aur kav nehi lautungi .kyu ki mein sam se nazre nehi mila sakti .kalpana meri jimedari thi .par mein usse bacha nehi paya .par fir zindegi wahi mod par leke khada kar di .i have 2 face him now .

A long tear drop fall 4m his eyes .

he took kalpana's photo 4m his drawer

Arjun : kalpana tum jeet gayi .u always told me ki hum ek din jarur india laut jayenge .yah we r returning but without u .😭</font></font>


<font size="3">PRECAP :ARJUN ALONG WITH PARI RETURNING 2 INDIA .AGAIN SOME FB & KALPANA'S ACCIDENT FB ...</font>

<font size="4">guyz plz leave ur opinions .if possible hit the like buttons & try 2 do long comments .thank u ...</font>

<font size="3">IMPORTANT NOTE :frnds ,i know tum say log riya ki entry k liye wait karoge .riya ki entry 2 parts k baad hi hogi .</font>😊




Edited by hunny1993 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Superb
Very emotionally
Waiting for d next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Nice start..read 2 parts together! aww..pari is soo cute..arjun n pari missing kalpana 😭 n she ws sam's sis !! FB ws superb!! nice precap..plz cont soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Nice concept hunny! This is a little different. I liked the kalpana twist!
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Superb update
It was very emotional
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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