Ariya three-shot : pehla pyarr ek anjana sa ehsaas..lastpar pg 14, 15 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
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dear I need to borrow words to compliment this story...
"something you said has made me realise the love I have has cut me open wide
and I won't ever be the same again, won't ever run away again
no i am not afraid to try
look into my eyes can't you see that I have been waiting, I have lived anticipating
and these arms wait for you, this heart beats for you, this breath of love is sweet for you, this woman incomplete without you
With each passing day we fall into place
you are the rain to wash away my fears, you are the sun to dry this veil of tears
Oh, you make me feel alive again, you make me wanna smile again
and I need you by my side cause everybody knows I was down upon my knees when you gave my life a meaning
and these arms wait for you
this heart beats for you, this breath of love is sweet for you, this woman incomplete without you"

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
zinadagi ek seek mili
so beautiful
anikaarjun thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Wonderful treat for a friend in a simple u explained a lot

Loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

res / unres

dear I need to borrow words to compliment this story...
"something you said has made me realise the love I have has cut me open wide
and I won't ever be the same again, won't ever run away again
no i am not afraid to try
look into my eyes can't you see that I have been waiting, I have lived anticipating
and these arms wait for you, this heart beats for you, this breath of love is sweet for you, this woman incomplete without you
With each passing day we fall into place
you are the rain to wash away my fears, you are the sun to dry this veil of tears
Oh, you make me feel alive again, you make me wanna smile again
and I need you by my side cause everybody knows I was down upon my knees when you gave my life a meaning
and these arms wait for you
this heart beats for you, this breath of love is sweet for you, this woman incomplete without you"


just one line for u...

i will always be there for u any time any moment to hold u to take care of u.. to fight out for your happiness and smile...


love u baby...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Pinki sahi kaha...I agree with you...


Mujhe nahi aata aisi deep baate karna...lekin mein iss baat ko yaad rakhungi...thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Pinki sahi kaha...I agree with you...


Mujhe nahi aata aisi deep baate karna...lekin mein iss baat ko yaad rakhungi...thanks


no kaveri koi deep baat nahi hai.. life ka ek experience joh apno se share karne ka mann kiya bas..

glad u all liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awesome ariya story
with lovely ending
but ariya's love n trust for each other is endless
and its just the beginning of their happiness
thanks pinku for this wonderful story
which had a beautiful message of life
which you portrayed in a superb way👏👏
thanks a lot for pm as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
awesome ending.. Great understanding.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: pinkerbell



no kaveri koi deep baat nahi hai.. life ka ek experience joh apno se share karne ka mann kiya bas..

glad u all liked it..



Life mein har kisi ko accha experience nahi milta...jyada tar kadva hota hai...


Meethi yaad banakr aage badnahi padta hai...nahi to acchi nayi yaade banane mein mushkil hoti hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Beautiful ending dr...!!!
Loved their immense love, undying trust n great understanding for eachother...!!!
Totally agreed with u dr...!!
Such a wonderful story it was...!!!!

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