Ariya three-shot : pehla pyarr ek anjana sa ehsaas..lastpar pg 14, 15

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kehte hai jab hum kisise pyar kar baithte hai

wooh bhi pehla pyar aur agar wooh na mile

toh hum bikhar jate hai..

pyar par yakin uth jata..

nafrat hone lagti hai har insaan se

har rishte se..

par janiye riya ne kya kiya apne pehle adhure

pyar ka.???

Story specially dedicated to my baby ...

my sweetheart...

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

if u all like the concept then i vl update the

parts..

warna mere lapi recycle bin hia..

so no worries..

bekar joke tha i know.. btt

give me opinions...

index:

part 1- pg 4,5

part 2- pg 9,10

last part -pg 14, 15

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Beautiful concept.
Very unique...
Jab pehla pyaar adhura reh jata hai,tab bohut dard hota hai.
Mano,saansein ruk jaati hai.
Continue soonish.

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oye...
Neki aur puch puch...
Continue soonish.
Its a very nice and unique concept.

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

write na pls ...u r regular pankhas are der to support ya all the way

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pinky gupta

@pinkerbell

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zebbie0504
Beautiful concept.
Very unique...
Jab pehla pyaar adhura reh jata hai,tab bohut dard hota hai.
Mano,saansein ruk jaati hai.
Continue soonish.

janti hoon di bohot taklif hoti..

shayad meri yeh story koi help kar de mere kisi apne ke..

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Suryatapa sengupta

@1993.ssg

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice concept Pls continue soon Thanks for the pm

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unisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice concept dear. Looking forward.. Thanks for pm.

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u so much baby for writing on this topic...
Eagerly waiting for first part...
Will we get this today??
Again thanks..
U know that I mean it...

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Nahi pinki tum aisa nahi kar sakati...

Kuch to rehem karo hum readers per...

Ek to itna awesome si concet and it also with ariya...to phir koi gadha hi hoga jo na bolega...

Meri pyari pinki...update de na...