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Anushass

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

what????? riya suspected arjun for roshni's death???? how will arjun react now after knowing that the girl mattered him after his wife, actually had doubt on him of being his wife's murderer...
interesting dear... cant wait to read more... nice update n give the next update soon

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Originally posted by: Anushass
what????? riya suspected arjun for roshni's death???? how will arjun react now after knowing that the girl mattered him after his wife, actually had doubt on him of being his wife's murderer...
interesting dear... cant wait to read more... nice update n give the next update soon

Thanks for commenting, anusha...hope the twist wasn't too bad;-)

Poor arjun...yes, he is heartbroken. Let's see what he does next!

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arzie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

Beautiful story...

update soon.😃😃

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: arzie
Beautiful story...

update soon.😃😃

Thanks yaar...and will update soon.!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#285

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

*Receives numerous punches in comic book style from all her readers*

Guys, I have no defence.

I feel only two things right now.

SHAME... and REGRET.

It's been a whole month since I updated! Whoa. Things certainly got out of hand with this tale:(

The only thing that I could say to get myself a reprieve is that I am SO SO disappointed with the show nowadays. I have been skipping episodes, criticizing it left and right. Even forgetting the sheer awesomeness of Mr. Malhotra who still makes me watch this show despite all my misgivings!

Honestly, I was on the verge of giving up on this story🤢 Lack of inspiration, you see. But two things happened which made me change my mind.

First, your BEAUTIFUL comments which I would read with a heavy heart. Seriously, they are a beacon of hope for me. Thanks a lot, I am very grateful for your affection!

And secondly, my viewing all the Ariya scenes on my laptop yesterday. Consequently,the spark was kindled, and here I am!!!

Now, I am going to make you a promise.

Updates of 700-800 words on alternate days😛 Because I have no intention of keeping you guys waiting any further. This story will be finished probably by the end of the year!!!

And I will make sure not to disappoint this time.

A 500 word chapter for you just to kick-start things. Hope it's not disappointing!!!

Dedicated to all those who commented, and showed their displeasure with me, and rightly so😆 But especially my behna Live-life who's been leaving comments after comments for her big sister. Here you go, gal:)

SCROLL DOWN TO CHAPTER 8B.

Edited by -Amri- - 11 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#286

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

@ Sarita

I will try my best, yaar...but I can't promise!

But it will be a long update, I assure you...

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sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: -Amri-
@ Sarita
I will try my best, yaar...but I can't promise!

But it will be a long update, I assure you...

ok
take ur time dear

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#289

sorry for short comment actually i am busy.

for dedicating me.

this is a best surprize

a big hugs to you

for you..

kya shocking update hain

riya is roshni sister and arjun sali.

and riya suspects that arjun killed her sister.

yaar tumne to aisa shock deke mujhe maar diya.

me faint

as usual you write beautifull povs

love the way you showed riya tigerness..

arjun expression was expected and you write very beautifully

first reason was understood maybe all are melted even arjun but second reason kya bolon

i am speechless

i never expected in my dream...

the update is super hit

continue soon...

or next time aisa shock dena ho to warning dedena.

continue soon.

and thanx for the pm..

and thanx for once again my behena.

and love you

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: -Amri-

A new reader? That makes me so excited! Accepted your bud req, and sent you a PM for this one. I kept my promise!!! Thanks a lot for liking and commenting, dear.

Thanks a lot, honey...I was so happy to read your comment!!!

I am really glad that you're liking this story. You noted all the important aspects of it:) And I am satisfied that I am able to keep you intrigued!!!

Please keep reading and commenting.

Regards
Amri

it was really a pleasure reading ur piece of work...and its getting even more interesting with every update of urs...ur ideas and plotting of the parts are brilliant 👏... plz plz plz continue soon 😳...