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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: beenish248
Unress ...
finally you update yarr...
BAS!!! BAS KARO, RIYA!!! BAHUT HO GAYA," Arjun screamed, every cell in his body screaming a very clear message to her. "SHUT UP. SHUT THE HELL UP. I DON'T WANT TO LISTEN TO ANY OF THIS. NOTHING ABOUT HIM. NOT A WORD. DO YOU HEAR ME?"
i was expecting this kind of reaction from arjun ..
loved the way you portrayed his emotions that was not any one cup of tea simply superb ...
the way she say strressing on riya kashyap i was sell socked when i read Rolu from roshni , i was like what the roshni is riya's sister ... 😲
riya suspected arjun kill roshni that y she join Etf .. So my guess was right though not totally but atleast sikander is his sister killer ... Eagerly waiting yarr update soon ... 😊

Oh my God, Beenish! Thanks a lot for your lovely comment! You are fast becoming my best reader! And thanks a lot for promptly UNRES-ing.

Yes, Arjun's reaction was very much expected

Thanks for liking my portrayal of all the characters! And the twist- hope it wasn't bad:)

The next update will be up soon. Again, thanks so much, dear.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Aabish_02
I'm glad that you are back Api🤗Read the chapter
Awesome Mindblowing and Dhamakedar update
arjun's emotions were beautifully described
arjun doesn't want to hear the name of the person who killed his beloved wife
riya was so confident
she wanted to clear everything
she was sent as an undercover agent in etf by commishner
The second reason was shocking
RIYA IS COUSIN OF ROSHINI
RIYA JOINED ETF BECAUSE SHE SUSPECTED THAT ARJUN HAD KILLED HER SISTER
how can she think like that
API IT WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE WITH DHAMAKEDAR REVELATIONS
LOVED IT
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
UPDATE SOON
THANKS FOR THE PM
TAKE CARE 😊

My dear Warda! Hope you are not too angry with your Api for her late update. I have become increasingly lazy nowadays. It's comments like yours which urges me to write and post soon😊 Love you, dear sister.

And how was the twist? Tell me honestly, it made me very nervous? I didn't know whether you guys would like it or not!

And you are always welcome for the PM's. I just look forward to reading your comments, they mean a lot to me!

Take care, behen, and see you soon😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: jia03
WOW!!!⭐️
that was a blast at the end... i never expected riya to be roshni's cousin...
and i do remember shree seeing the photograph of two girls...
so one was riya and other was roshni...👏

and riya suspecting arjun?? that was the most shocking part

awesome...
continue soon😊

Thanks a lot, Jia! I am really glad to hear from you.

And you are such a careful reader, you remembered? Great!

Hope the twist wasn't bad:) Next one will be up soon.

TC!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Kaval05
omg what an unexpected twist. I never thought that Arjun and Riya would be connected like that. I loved the update but you can't leave it that I am eager to know more. Update soon

Thanks a lot, Kaval! I am glad that you liked it, honey.

The next update will be up soon...stay tuned😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: shah10
Superb update
Riya n roshni r cousins
How could riya tought that Arjun killed roshni?
Amazing

Thanks a lot for patiently waiting for such a long time!😊

And yes, Riya thought so badly about Arjun. But that was before she knew him!

Originally posted by: unishaz
omg!! That was really a bomb dropped on etf members..

Haha, so true. Thanks for commenting😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: rocking_gal
ok will be back to unres later...
but u know ur update is worth waiting..gal next time give warning before dropping such fabulous update bomb...
more on it later pacca promise...
did i miss???
damn mind blocking nd awesome update

Thanks for the rocking comment from my rocking gal😉

Sorry for the bomb...hope the twist wasn't bad?

And your compliment is making me blush, I swear!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: srividhya68
after long time got a update
whaT...how could riya suspect riya arjun for killing roshni
i wouldnt mind if the whole etf( choree & samjun) blasted on her the next part fully...really & seriously
i hate riya for thinking like that but everybody would think like that only when their dear ones r dead
but anyway i'll wait & see what happens in the future

awesome upt
cont soon

Thanks a lot, Srividhya, for commenting! And sorry for the long wait, dear!

Yes, you are absolutely right. They should BLAST her for assuming wrongly about Arjun like this.

The next one will be up soon!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
superb totally worth the long wait
ri is a damm courageous woman ...she admitted the second truth bit ...she could have hidden it or told him when he cooled off a bit

my God wat a twist fab fab yaar

now very very eager for the next update which i hope is soon

Thanks for commenting, Anju!

Yes, Riya is a brave woman indeed to admit the last part to Arjun😉

The next update as you hoped is really, really soon! 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
wow
awesome update
kya bommm the last me
love it

Thanks again Sarita😊Hope you like the next one as well.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
awesome update...
riya , cousin of roshni... now that was the TWIST...

she suspected arjun as her killer...

arjun's condition beautifully portrayed...

update soon and thanks for the PM

Aww, Nakshu...thanks for commenting, dear.

I am glad that you liked the portrayal...and the twist😉

Next one will be updated in a couple of days!