Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#3:New thread link:P 47 - Page 28

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Boomb pe boomb phat rahe hai...

Give some time mujhe pura ek baar phir se padhna padega...

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Fantastic update dear. Love the entire update very much. OMG Riya is Roshni's cousin. Riya thought Arjun killed Roshni Love Arjun's outburst at the start of the chapter. Shree and chotu are suprised by Riya's behaviour. So the real motive behind Riya's etf joining is because deperment want to about their teamwork. Twist was really very shocking and suprizing. Yet love the twist. Now waiting to know what will happen now? Pls continue soon Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Live-life

Finally sis!!!!!!

You are back!!!!! 😃 I can't tell you how happy I am right now!!!!! 😳

*jumping with joy*

Coming to the update!I am happy too, behna! Your comments are such a treasure!

As usual it is a pefection of perfect! 😃 Loved it to every word!!! Thank you so much!

I knew there was a reason for Riya to do all this. I mean c'mon

I have seen serials and bollywood movies to guess this! But in this one the revelation was

beyond shocking!! I mean for a second I forgot to breathe! 😕

It was that intense!! 🥱 Riya Kashyap is a cousin of Roshni!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😲

I mean literally when I read that I wasn't blinking, My mouth was 😲 and My breath hitched in my throat! I am glad that I was able to surprise you. But seriously, it wasn't bad, was it?

But hats off to Riya man!!! I was surprised that she was so calm and confident!! 😳

Fine, she may have had that break of voice...but I mean anyone one would if they are talking

about something so sensitive and talking about someone so important to them!

She really does define...in true meaning...A women! Absolutely loved how you wrote this. Yes, she is very courageous indeed! Kudos to her for standing up to Arjun!

I salute her for this and you for putting it such brilliant words!! 👍🏼

love you for that! ❤️Aww, thanks a lot for that!

and the last part was...well...shocking (can't find a better word for it)

Riya thought Arjun had killed Roshni! 😕

I mean it's hard to describe how I felt at that moment...I guess best way to put it is

MIXED FEELINGS! 🤔 Me too. But there is a valid reason for that which will be explained later😊

Fantabulous update behna!!! Left us with a lot of suspense and you dropped a lot

of bombs today!!! 😆 But then I again tell me something I don't know 😛😃Haha, thanks so much behna.

Grawesome update!!!!!!! 👏👏👏

I missed you!!!!! A BIIIGGG CUDLY HUG!!!!! 🤗

i AM GLAD YOU ARE BACK!!!!!! 😃Big hug to you too! And it feels great to be back!!! Lots of love to you. And next one will be up in a couple of days.

Update soon!!

oh and Merci for the Pm madame!!

Tu est trs sympa! 😳 (just google translate this if you don't know the meaning😆) Going to google it right now😊

Originally posted by: invisible2018

it was really a messy update...

and arjun in a more messy state... the truth has revealed a lot of things to him...and the worst one is that he has eventually fallen weak for his wife's cousin that is his sister-in-law and that very girl thinks he is the one who killed her sister...no revelation could be more painful than this...

it would be difficult to watch arjun again go back to that concrete cell of his avoid his inner turmoil and sorrow...

the story is going great and ur writing skill has plotted it out very well... keep updating soonish...

n thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

Omg Riya is cousin sis of roshni

She think Arjun killed her wife

Omg tht is boommm me in shock

Thanx 4 pm me

It is awesome,blosam mind blowing ,jhikass super sai bhi upper

Update soon

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Wooowww ...
that was a breathtaking... part...
Riya is Roshni's sistre... OMG she think Arjun killed Roshni...
Supper Awsssmm... wonderful... mindblowing... dhamaka update...
egarly waiting for next part...
cont sooon
thnks for PM

Originally posted by: abjeya

okay wow I didn't expect that.. riya suspected arjun killed her sister. but why?. really good update. want to know her explanation so please update soon.

Originally posted by: aadi720

omg...😃

wonderful update with a ballistic end...⭐️

never thought in my wildest dream that this could be riya's second reason to join etf...😲😲😲

eagerly waiting for the next update...😃

continue soon and thanks for the pm...😃

Originally posted by: devildiva21

finally you updated yayyy...!!! me dancing..!!

and man was it worth waiting..!!!Thanks dear.

ye kya bomb giraya hai humpe😲 am still in shock and don't know what to say..!!

riya and rosh sisters?😲 and on top of that she suspected that arjun killed her sis😲

kya twist dala hai boss... hila dala matlab pura..!!!😆 😆

did i mention am in shock???😳 Hope the twist wasn't bad, dear...I am still nervous about it!

as usual superb way of writing and describing situations and pov...!!!Thanks😛

love the way riya stood up and show how she could be a tigeress if want😉

poor guys were so shocked seeing her like that...!!!I am happy that you liked my characterization of Riya!

arjun's reaction was expected...!!! and that was beautifully described..!!! take a bow from me for this👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

*Takes a bow*

first reason .. everyone understood and maybe started melting a little... (tiny miny maybe) even arjun was satisfied with the first reason...

but second reason woahh... that was like a thunderstorm./..!!!

never expected that... maybe no one expected that😉😆

now she;s gonna have more than tough time dealing with arjun..!!!

and arjun he is shocked... so were everyone else... ek din mai becharo ko kitne heart attacks de diye..!!!As you said, he did start melting, but Riya had to spoil things for him again Poor man!

the update was super duper hit...!!!👍🏼

continue soon..!!

waiting for the next part with much more anxiety than ever...!!!😆

and next time warning plz that your gonna give shock after shock to everyone😆😉

devil ka ye haal hai to bakio ka kya hoga..!!!😈

Agli baar itna bada jhatka nahin doongi:) Haha, Mujhe aapse bahut darrr lagta hai😛 Thanks again for commenting, and see u soon😉

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

After so long u upadte yaar! 😛
so what i was late to comment🤣
Overall this update made me breathless😲So sorry for the long wait, yaar! And your comment is prompt today, na?😛

zor ka jhatka sachhi mai zor se hi laga🤢.
First it was like usual with, riya answering his questions. And his reaction completely indicating, that how much he have suffered, that he could not even tolerate the name of that culprit who killed his wife . I am really very much empressed by this guy again, and falling more for him☺️. The way he maintained himself facing away from her and in the middle his analytical mind taking a turn towards the words her heart says.

That was the best part when, his all anger and frustration gone and mellowed down only hearing her cracked voice.
Coz he felt the depth of HER feelings and how much guilty she was.

Your description of Arjun's state of mind was so accurate! And true, I am falling in love with him as well. Even after all this, the guy manages to behave with dignity!

And she! Riya shocked me like hell. First the way she confronted with arjun and her retreating back to him with the same agression was really commendable. But still she was calling him SIR! Surprising!
And 2ndly, her reasons for joining ETF! The first reason was okay! But the second one! Gosh! She joined ETF behind Arjun first thinking that he killed ROSHNI!

Hope the twist wasn't too hard to digest! And thanks for liking my portrayal of Riya!

In between her revelation being the sis of rosh was shocking! No shock would be an understatement. Like arjun, i also have never thought in my wildest dream that this story will turn like this way! And Arjun's feelings were very well described. The single word or riya that drowned into memory lane. "rolu'', such a cutie name!
I would love to read more about rolu and rosh!

I am glad i was able to surprise you!

Dont think i am joking or what, but what will happen to their love track after the revelation of their relation of jijaji-sali😕.

Thanks for asking this question. You are the first to do so, and it is very valid indeed! I know it is messy, but I do have some ideas. And imagine how arjun must be feeling on learning this? More on this in the upcoming chapters, I swear!

You have your every capability to make to me falling more for this story woman. Thanks, dear!😛

One more thing, the team! Jus an hour ago the team was devastated and now all there members were listening all this being analitycally.
Choelo should be happy ! He have choosen the best for the country i.e. ETF! So true! And well said.

Oh i missed arjun calling rathod sam! I really want to if it was just word skipped from his mouth or he really felt something at that moment about his former bestfriend. Yup, he was on the verge of saying something. You'll see more of him in the next chapter.

Did i miss anything? Umm what about aisha and liza? They must be hiitting their head in curiosity. They'll reappear in the next chapter.

Continue soonish! And come with more shocks like this! Sorry! And will continue soon.


PS : well it is the magic of your story, for which i could stop myslef from digging the depth of every part! Aww, shucks! *Blushes*